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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is beautiful n quite interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good good keep it going 😉 😉 😉

Quite interesting 😲 😲

Thanks update soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and emotional OS
Love the different points of views
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww !!
now i wish i could write like that..
omg the one my fav
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello ashleesha n ayesha
that was perfect...so true in each case...just perfectly defining every deep dwn emotion of their
lv the fab collab
gals do write mre nd thnks fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O.M.G!!!

It's a different thing to use someone else's lyrics and make a OS around that and its completely another to pen down such a poignant poem and weave an OS around that!

Ashleesha! Take a bow for that beautiful poem girl! Not a lot of people can write such a multiple layered poem!

And coming to Ayesha's part! It was brilliant babes! Loved it! The poem and the content worked hand in hand with one another!

Awesome work you two!

Love,
Pari😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

KINDA INTRO...
Ok so Hey Guys...
So here we are with yet Another collab of ours...I hope you like it...

It's a Poem by Ashleesha
And the content well I have written it...
okay okay okay... I know I am extremely late. Two of my most closest people on here have made a collab... and I ... being stupid haven't got a chance to read it. You know... I wanted to read it while reviewing... and I needed to make sure that I had enough time! Okay... I am super excited. And I love you both... A LOT... and I have missed you guys... A LOT.

HAPPY READING!!!
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RD
Perhaps every relationship was based on a lie
that turned into bitter sorrow after the word "goodbye"

Awww. RD. I love him. And I totally get that ... the lies ... his dialogue.. "Sab jhoot hai... Koi kisi ka nahi ho sakta." okay... continue...

He always thought so..every relation is based on a lie...after what his mother had done...He never had the capacity to get hurt again...To be vulnerable again so that the world could crush him yet again...No, he would never want that...And so he used a simple method to stay away from pain and that was a simple GOOD BYE...A good bye to his vulnerable self , a good bye to his happy self , a good bye to his emotional self , In short A Good Bye To His Real Self...

gosh. that's so true though.👏 And trust me... that place is so so so hard. Once you come out of it, and greet yourself again... life just becomes a million times better...👏

PARTH..
All his relationships
There's fragments of the laughter and the laws of life defied
And now he lies sobbing, his innocence modified..


All the relations he shared had come to an abrupt and emotional end... What was left with him was just the memories...memories of his beloved...he was a small boy,,a boy with the full of innocence...But after the loss of the loved ones there he lay crying...crying his heart out his innocence changed to something even he couldn't rectify...
Awww. 😭 It just shows that he has been through a whole bunch...

SANYUKTA
Her loss, Her anger and pain
Emotions are never simple,they occur in layers...
Yet she took a decision, never be one of the unscrupulous players...


It was her loss..She lost the scope to fulfil her dreams..Her dream of becoming an engineer... She was angry , angry as to why was it only for girls to sacrifice..?? Her pain to let go of her dream,..!! So many emotions playing at once...
But she fought...but in the right way.. Swearing she would never ever do something wrong to fulfil her dreams...She wouldn't become a person who could go into wrong doings to get what she wanted...

It is her defeat. And the fact that she has to sacrifice her ambitions to make everyone happy. And, I like how she already cleared up that she wouldn't do something wrong to fulfil her wants. It's like... sort of... her self respect that she has, I guess.

VIDHUSHI
She hates playing dirty ,
But She plays it Anyways...
She wears foundation to make up for her tears,
And uses biting words to mask her fears...


A girl with so many dreams and aspirations...she wanted to become a girl with good heart not a mean person she is now... But what else could she probably do..?? Her family was the most important to her... She wouldn't mind burning her dreams for her parents... Though she was broken inside she had come up with a way to over power it... Over Power it was her Arrogance...

OH MY GOSH. @red words... yes. Vidushi. I swear, if she just learns that playing dirty isn't good... good for everyone. good for health. good for her soul.

Her arrogance is a way for her to overpower her brokeness. Nice.

VIDARTH
A nightmare within a dream ,a rap within a song ,
They are jagged edges and imperfection ,a right gone wrong...


She always thought that he was her Knight In The Shining Armour...but yet again her hopes and dreams were shattered.. The Only Person she actually cared about was Never really hers to be claimed... But they completed Each Other so Perfectly that even they dint know it... She was a way to reality for him... The only one who showed him the mirror of reality ... And for her , he was the one who showed her the little ray that shone in the right path... They both were imperfect if alone but Perfect when joined together...
Totally Compatible...
I really like the part where you write "A nightmare within a dream"... like woah. It's just beautiful. And they do complete each other. She is his reality and he is her pathway to honesty. Imperfect when alone but perfect together! GOSH. I love this ... I so so so so so SHIP VIDARTH. SO MUCH. PLEASE. MAKE. THEM. A. COUPLE. LIKE. OHMYGOSH..

VIDHUSHI
Her tongue is a weapon, no more good girl.
It's a question Always asked "Why is she against the world?"


She never believed in Destiny... And why would she..?? She dint have any reason to believe in it...She always Snatched what she wanted wether it's in a right way or wrong...No one even once tried to look through her fake facades and know that why indeed was she the way she is or rather Was..!!
She always snatched what she wanted. So true. She said it herself... No one even once tried to look through her fake facades... that line. yaar. my heart dropped. It basically means that she is always misunderstood and no one wanted to see past her and understand her true self. And that burns.

SANDHIR
She's fighting the demons,thinks she all alone...
Unaware there's someone who'd like to call her his own...


She always fought against all odds to make her dream into reality all alone...But she was unaware of the person who always stood by her...He always wanted her to be ONLY HIS...All her problems to end or to be faced by him not her... He wanted to Protect Her...

OH MY GOSH! SO SO SO TRUE... Esp. during all those scenes with the LITS boys. Gosh. so true... and that line "He always wanted her to be ONLY HIS" *sighs... and wishes that her guy thinks like this.*


RANDHIR
Walls are defences, they keep his mind sound,
It's like he's another person when no one is around...
With Feroz chacha... and the boy. Yes. He is a darling...when no one is around. He lets down his walls and acts like himself.

He's his true self with no one ...His best friend being his Punching bag...The one who just consumes all his anger...He loves his punching bag because it had 'No Complaints And No Demands'...Just like he wanted around him to be..
No complaints. No demands. No great expectations to be..in the end...disappointed with.
His best friend being the punching bag... SO TRUE. *remembers a post that someone wrote in the perspective of the punching bag😆😆😆 in the end, the punching bag wants to kill Parth and thinks that RD has some feelings for Sany*

His true self is the one were he had a little hope that he would have a happy small family...watching the picture of his parents along with him when he was a toddler...!!!

The 4 are soo complicated yet complete each other like no other...

They so complete each other... SO CVS makes them best buddies... RD and VIDS bffls.. and Sanyu and Parth bffls... BUT make SANDHIR and VIDARTH couples... it just will be so cute. GAWWWD. AHH AHHH AHHH!

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And that's a wrap...!!
Tell us wether you liked it or not...
Do leave your reviews behind...
It'll help us improve...

Love
ASHLEESHA AND AYESHA...


I love y'all!👏 And this was amazing. So keep on doing amazing work. Sorry... I didn't review fast enough. Just caught up in loads of things! Love you guys! And I LOVED IT!

LOVE YOURS TRULY, Kri🤗

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