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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!

Dedicated to my gal Farz and all the Shehzadis :)
I miss you!!! Muah!

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Long hazy visions
Eyes flooding with emotions,
Lost in translation
We begged for loved.

Your eyes meet mine
But I reject your apologies,
Your confessions sombre
We couldn't stand.

Our love couldn't stay unyielding
The tornado of rage was nearing,
You stayed strong, didn't budge
But my roots we not strong enough.

The storm left me all by myself
Alone, loneliness ate me whole,
The darkness so bright, it reflected back my pain
But if only you would see it.

Glass panes shattered all around
Absurd thoughts of you wandering,
I screamed, stomped and stamped
But I was too fragile to make you hear me.

Broken mosaic hearts lay on the floor
Drawn on the shattered glass,
The glass that depicted love's thoughts
Love was broken.

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This is a poem I wrote based on Friday's EPIC episode. Sanam and Ahil's "love" was not that strong...as for now, I must say. Nida was the tornado that blew everything away and left Sanam in despair. Ahil's proposal to Nida was full of regrets and he was sombre. So... that was that, tell me what ya'll think about it. And and I'm only excited bacause Rehan and Sanam will *happily* burst my ovaries today, hopefully :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mine!!!



The tornado of rage was nearing

Wow.


This part really...it is as if I could feel the storm!



Sad, very. Their love not unyielding. And it wasn't strong!


I'm every kind of emotions. Every kind.



I miss you too Sparkle!
So much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww its so beautiful... <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And you made this for me???


In the middle of an exam period!

Awe Sparkle. I wanna hug you. Love you so much.


You stay focus and all the very best okay!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

And you made this for me???


In the middle of an exam period!

Awe Sparkle. I wanna hug you. Love you so much.


You stay focus and all the very best okay!


*hugs* *hugs* :* muah!

Yeah, exams goin' on but this was for you, how could I not post it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so beautiful! 👏
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Linsie you're back!!

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