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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
'But who do I call now?'

That.

:'(

Sparkles. That might as well be us.

When I read. I thought of me.

Read it from my point of view.

Litany, you said. Didn't we all chant their names?

'Couldn't see it; I'm not strong'

Is this not us? Just like you've expressed Zoya without Asad, you've expressed us without them, both.

'But now that I've lost you
Nothing is going to revolve time back and usher you
back'

Sparkles, this piece they touched my heart. So very close to home.

Reading it again with Zoya in mind, I'm thinking - you're right. She's not strong enough.

Then I tried again with Asad this time. Her name was his litany.

Truly very heartfelt. You've outdone even yourself. Maybe.

Thank you so much for thinking of us worthy to share this meaningful work with.

Hugs.

*facepalms myself*

I didnt see your comment :'( I'm so mad at myself right now :'(

Thanks Faaarz!!!!😃

Yeah, i too wanted to write it through dual perspective but I wrote it with Zoya's heart. And your comments are the ones I enjoy reading much, you're my favourite person here :) Thanks again dearie!! Muah! *hugs you back*

Yeah, I too think I like this one, sigh, tragedy is seriously my forte!

Im truly sorry for replying late though :(

Muah!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Aww Sparkle! I'm your favourite?!!!

Oh my!!

You awesome!

Imma shy!

And and and!!!!!!

I totally forgot to say just how very thoughtful you are to have mentioned my name on the post!!

You're simply brilliant! I'm waiting for more from youuu! I know you don't (and won't) disappoint!

And don't worry about the late comment thing!! You so sweet!! Swiftie you.

*she had her concert here last week...both my roommates went. They had the best time ever they said. Imma go next time, if she comes again that is!*

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713_Sparkles

@713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Aww Sparkle! I'm your favourite?!!!

Oh my!!

You awesome!

Imma shy!

And and and!!!!!!

I totally forgot to say just how very thoughtful you are to have mentioned my name on the post!!

You're simply brilliant! I'm waiting for more from youuu! I know you don't (and won't) disappoint!

And don't worry about the late comment thing!! You so sweet!! Swiftie you.

*she had her concert here last week...both my roommates went. They had the best time ever they said. Imma go next time, if she comes again that is!*

Don't be shy! You're my fave!

Taylor's concerts are the most amazing thing ever...and expensive too, i must add 😆 But theyre worth every single penny, you should probably go once. Yeah, I had been to one of her concerts last year. It was enchanting!