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Posted: 11 years ago

aww dil se thank u so much sweety pie
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u so much buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Wow :)

Amazing n emotional update :)
You always make cry 😭 😭 😭
Next update will also be completely emotional 😭
You are an amazing writer :)
You describe these emotional scenes in a beautiful way :)
I can actually visualize the story while reading it :)
Hats off :)
Waiting for Taarey scenes :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)


first of all dil se sorry dear to make u cry plz forgive me
n plz smile now and keep smiling always 😊😊😊
kya karun story's concept is so emotional itself so m also forced to write emotional
u know i also cry a lot while writing

oh my god sachi dil se thank u so much for this sweet lovely special heart touching precious comment ..
it really means a lot to a writer
but m not that praiseworthy 😳
still dil se bigwala thank u so much my sweet dear friend
n
u r most welcome .. no need to say thanks for pms

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

amzng updt
it was emotional but superb
luvd it
updt sn


aww dil se thank u so much my sweet dear friend
m so glad that u loved it 😊
ya i will try to update asap

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .PheonixFire.

Awesome update.
Loved Taayam scene. They are just too cute.
Continue soon.


aww dil se thank u so much buddy
ya i know taayam r way too cute hehe
ya i will continue asap

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Posted: 11 years ago

aww dil se thank u so much friend

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghchavan

waiting for the update

please update soon and pm me.



dil se sorry buddy to make u wait so very much plz forgive me
gonna update very soon .. but very emotional so warning in advance
and DIL SE BIG WALA THANK U FOR BEING SUCH AN AWESOME READER OF MY STORY
u love my story and wait for it .. that really means a lot to me 😊😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u so much friends for all ur lovely special and precious comment .. they really mean a lot to me .. i love all ur comments and

i have replied to everyone , every comment on ch-11 and ch-12 .. plz check friends this time i have replied all with a graphic thank u as well 😛😛 ..

and very sorry to make u cry and for late updates .. and sorry in advance as this update is also extremely emotional 😭 so warning in advance .. if u all like it and want me to update fast fast then plz do like as well as comment from heart 😳

scroll down till d end of this post for the promo edit of upcoming surprises in this story😉😉

~~~~ HUM MAR JAYENGE ~~~~

Chapter - 13 ~~ TERA RASTA MAIN CHODON NA ~~


FRIENDS TAANI IS STILL IN LEHANGA SO DONT KILL ME FOR THAT STORY'S DEMAND 😛

plz open the following song link in other tab

ya rabba

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2sZUgcPN2I

Taani was 5 steps ahead from rey and standing with her mom and she says NOT facing him

" rey aap kal india vapis jaa rahe ho na ?????"

(while tears fell from her eyes and she was trying hard 2 control herself and her unstoppable tears )

Rey was hell shocked hearing that...

Rey " WHAT ?? "

Tears take no time to come out from his eyes .. his heart ached real badly .. for some moments he just couldn't say anything .. he was just standing like a statue while crystal droplets of tears were flowing down his pure eyes which were reflecting just pain n deep love ..

On the other hand taani's heart was also aching real badly while saying that .. but she had to .. for rey .. some stubborn tears didn't stop and didn't obey her orders to not cry .. they come out unstoppably from her eyes .. which didn't go unnoticed by her mom .. her mom know her very well .. she was shocked at first but she know why she is doing all this .. as she love rey truly & madly ..

Swayam and tauji were also shocked

Swayam to taani - taani... what are u saying ??

Tauji - yes beta .. you know na rey is here just for u ,.. and he really love you a lot and you also love her so much

Taani was not being able to say anything .. but still she gathered strength and say " tauji what I m saying is right ... rey should go tomorrow .. his family his friends his career his future is in india .. NOT WITH ME .. then WHY SHOULD HE STAY HERE ???

Rey immediately spoke up with a weeping heart - FOR YOU TAANI .. I WANT AND I WILL STAY HERE FOR YOU FOR MY LOVE FOR MY LIFE ... BECAUSE .. I... LOVE ... YOU I LOVE U TAANI ... I love u 😭
She was so touched hearing the words of rey that came straight from his heart and reach taani's heart the next moment itself .. and Now It was being real hard for taani to control herself .. but she controlled her pain and buried it inside her heart and say further sticking on her decision

Taani (still not facing him ) " but I CANT REY I CANT LOVE YOU AND I DON'T WANT ANYONE'S SYMPATHY .. " (she said all these harsh words just to make him go back as she don't want him to ruin everything just for her )
rey's heart pierced listening that she think that he is sympathasing with her .. but he understood that she is saying all this just to send him to india .. he know that taani understand his love care and pain .. their hearts know every beat of the other's heart .. they understand their hearts more than the other

Rey " TAANI , I KNOW YOU , MY HEART KNOW YOU AND I UNDERSTAND VERY WELL WHY ARE YOU SAYING ALL THIS BUT YOU UNDERSTAND ONETHING CLEARLY THAT

I AM NOT GOING ANYWHERE ... I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU .. NEVER EVER .. EVEN IF U WANT ME TO BE WITH YOU OR NOT BUT STILL I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH U .. I LOVE U TAANI .. I LOVE YOU ... I LOVE YOU ... I LOVE YOU ...I Love you so very much ... AND TRUST ME TAANI , MY LOVE IS TILL ETERNITY , I LOVE U AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE U FOREVER N EVER ..

I WILL LIVE WITH YOU AND DIE WITH U ONLY ..

TAANI shouted not being able to control herself anymore while tears were flowing down her cheeks unstoppably " VAHI TO MAIN NAHI CHAHTI NA REY ... (she turn facing him now and continue ) .. NAHI CHAHTI THAT U LIVE AND DIE WITH ME NAHI CHAHTI MAI KI AAP APNI LIFE MUJHPE WASTE KARO ... [ rey nods in no that no he is not wasting his life , she is his life and he live only with her ] ...

Taani continue " DON'T LOVE ME REY PLZ DON'T LOVE ME .. LEAVE ME ON MY HAND ... WHY DON'T U UNDERSTAND THAT MY LOVE CAN GIVE U NOTHING .. RATHER MY LOVE WILL .. KILL .. YOUR LIFE .. .. :'(

{ She came to rey and said begging him holding his shoulders trying to appeal him to do as she is saying }

U HATE ME REY ... plz HATE ME NA ... 😭😭😭

{ rey was shocked .. his throat was getting dry .. he has no words to say .. to explain his feelings to her .. both were crying .. crying real badly }

Taani says looking into his teary eyes - WHY DO YOU LOVE ME SO MUCH REY .. PLZ DON'T LOVE ME ... DON'T .. U JUST HATE ME NA ..

[ she says sobbingly ] YOUR LOVE FOR ME WILL KILL UR LIFE & UR EVERYTHING , ...

my love will DESTROY U REY ... I CAN BARE YOUR HATRED BUT CANT BE THE REASON OF THE DEATH OF YOUR PASSION AND YOUR HAPPINESS ... SO HATE ME NA REY just hate me that's what I deserve

(Saying this she keeps her head on his chest not being able to control herself anymore )

For sometime rey was standing like a statue .. not being able to say anything ... he was crying in pain .. he was hurt to know that his love his taani want him to hate her .. why just for his betterment .. his life .. how can one be so good but why why why ... don't she understand that taani is his life , his love , his heart .. taani is his everything ..

{ All were so shocked , so emotional and so touched that they couldn't say anything and they were n ot even understanding what to say and whom to support .. both were right on their part ... their feelings were not getting the right words to be expressed }

She moves back and say " you just hate me and go back rey .. if you really love me .. then go back .. as my love will destroy you rey ... my love will finish you .. and I never want that so you just hate me and go back pleaseee"

Rey came forward with the rain of tears shedding from his eyes .. to make her understand that its not like that .. he hold her by her shoulders but before he could say anything .. she remove his hands from his shoulders ,.. and says while taking backsteps

Taani - JUST LEAVE ME REY AND GO AWAY VERY FAR AWAY FROM ME REY .. JUST GO BACK .. GO REY .. LEAVE ME ... CHALE JAO REY .. CHALE JAO AAP ... CHOD DO MUJHE MERE HAAL PE .. CHOD DO MUJHE REY ..CHALE JAO AAP MUJHSE DUUR HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE .. BHOOL JAO MUJHE .. BHOOL JAO KI KABHI KOI TAANI NAAM KI LADKI AAPKI ZINDAGI MAI AAYI THI ,.. BHOOL JAO MUJHE REY .. BHOOL JAO AAP HAMARE PYAAR KO .. BHOOL JAO SAB KUC H AUR CHALE JAO MUJHSE DUUR HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE .. CHALE JAO REY

SHE TURN AND JUST RAN TO HER ROOM ..WEAKLY CRYINGLY ..all ran behind her .. so that she wont harm herself .. and don't do anything wrong .. but before they reach her .. she go inside her room and close the door .. and sat on d floor with support of the door and she just cry n cry keeping her head on her knees .. letting out her pain & fears in the form of tears .. letting out the flood of pain and fears which were killing her from inside and aching her heart real badly .. she was feeling helpless in front of her disease

" kaise majboori hai .. kaise tadap hai .. kaise bechaini hai .. pyaar paas hai par phir bhi duur jaana .. dard sehna hai .. ansuon ko peena hai .. ghamon mai jeena hai .. ... kyu sapne sach nahi hote .. kyu apne sang hoke bhi sang nahi hote .. kyu sacha pyaar karne wale ek nahi hote ... kyu ye bebasi hai aakhir kyu ye dil toote hai aur baar baar roye hai "

😭😭

She was crying , weeping and sobbing .. real badly .. 😭

{ while swayam , rey , maa and tauji were asking her , begging her to open the door ..

Swayam - taani baby plz open the door .. plz open the door for ur bhai plz .. don't do this .. don't punish urself .. plz open the door

Tauji - taani princess plz open the door .. plz

Ma - jaddoo ki pudiya darwaza khol na .. abhi aur kitna rulayegi apni ma ko .. mujhe chinta ho rahi hai bacha .. plz open the door , ek baar hum sab se baat to karo plz

Rey " taani taani taaniii plz open the door .. u punish me but dont punish urself plz .. plz open the door .. "

But no response .. they could just hear her sobs nothing else which was making them more worried

...

Rey " taani plz open the door .. MAI MAR JAUNGA TUMHARE BINA .. NAHI SEH SAKTA MAIN TUMHARE AANSOO JAANTI HO NA TUM .. TO PHIR KYU KAR RAHI HO AISA ,... PLZ OPEN THE DOOR ... I will die without u jaan plz for god sake open d door now please"

Taani had no choice now but to open the door .. she also can never see him in pain or crying .. somehow she controlled herself .. and stand up .. and open the door while her eyes were red and swollen due to crying a lot

taani with anger , pain and worry in her voice " how dare you say like that hmm ?????? aap marna chahte ho na , mai to 2-4 days mai marne he wali hu , thik hai to mai bhi aaj he marr jaati hu .." but before she could say further .. he kept his hand on her mouth and just hug her tightly

swayam (to ma and tauji ) - we should leave them for sometime and let them talk .. rey usse sambhal lega .. I know .. we should go ..

ma and tauji agree seeing taarey's love and nod in yes and they all leave from there

rey was hugging her as tightly as he could ... he want to get lost in his love .. he just wanna get away from everything .. and stay away from all the problems .. all the sadness and all the sorrows , esp he want him and her as well to forget her disease ...

taani also hug him back not being able to control herself anymore..

..

~~~~~~~~ end of ch-13~~~~~~~~

sorry if i made u cry .. this time short update because of less comments on ch- 12 ..

PRECAP - { hopefully yahi sab hoga no guarantee 😆 }

CH - 14 ~ MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI

rey expressing his feelings via song .. taarey emotional and romantic convo .. hugs and kisses .. it can have twists and shocks

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promo edit after CH - 16 OR 17

SOME SURPRISES , LOVE , LIFE ON UR WAY

~ meri zindagi tere sang ~

living my life with u in somedays

and rest is SURPRISE 😛 to know more u have to wait and read my dear friends .. but before that u have to

HIT LIKE AND GIVE Ur PRECIOUS COMMENT

I ONLY MADE U ALL CRY SO MUCH NA THEN I WILL TRY MY BEST TO MAKE U ALL SMILE BY THESE UPCOMING SURPRISES 😛😛😛

PLZ DONT COPY MY STORY , OR ITS UPDATES , OR EDITS ON ANY OTHER WEBSITES ..

IT TOOK ME A LOT OF TIME AS WELL AS HARDWORK TO THINK AND MAKE THOSE EDITS SO PLZ ITS A HEARTY REQUEST DONT COPY OR CROP THOSE EDITS AND USE THEM IN ANY OTHER WEBSITE OR WORK

Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awsm update plzz ab or mar rulao taani and rey ko plz alag mat karna plZz nice plzz next part update soon plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
as usually you it emotional and heart touching update ...
love it soo much ..this time also i cry but not with sadness ..this time happy wala cry and little smile on my face ..

taarey ke dusare ke liye sacrifice karne ko read hai ...

prcap more interesting waiting taarey romance


super happy see your editing .. means something more interesting waiting for us ...
plz update soon

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