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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

Vishesh's decision

Vishesh - Mene decide kiya that we should part our ways... hame divorce lena chaye...

Taani (shocked) - kya?? Vishesh tum aisa nahi kar sakthi ...

Vishesh - nahi Taani... mujhe ye karna hai ... mujhe mat roko... mene decide kiya he ...

Taani - par Vishesh...

Vishesh - Tum job hi kaho, tum mujhse kabhi pyar nahi kar sakthi... Me tumhe blame nahi kar rahi hu... me bas sachai ka samna kar rahi hu... ki Rey hamesha tumhare dil me honge... aur ham aise nahi jee sakthe Taani... ek doosre ko jhooti dilasa dekhar aur jhoot bholkar...

Taani - Vishesh, me jaani hu mene tumhe hurt kiya he...

Vishesh - nahi Taani, tumne mujhe nahi balki khudko hurt kiya he... mujhse shaadi karke...

Taani - Vishesh...

Vishesh - it's over Taani... we are finished... tum ab aazad ho... ja Taani, jee le apni zindagi...

Taani - tum mujhse nafrat karte ho na iss sab ke baad?? I'm sorry ... I'm sorry for everything... ho sake to mujhe maaf karna...

Vishesh - nafrat aur tumse?? Tumhari dhushman bhi aise soch bhi nahi sakthe aur me tho akhir tumhari dosth hu na??chahe kuch bhi na ho gaya hu tum hamesha meri achi friend rahogi...

Taani - thanks Vishesh...

Vishesh - ab waqt aa gaye he Taani to stop crying n be happy... ab muskura do... ab koi rona dhona nahi... k???

Taani (smiles) - k...

They hug each other and bids farewell...

Taani (thinking) - me aa rahi hu Rey... me aa rahi hu ... aapke pass hamesha ke liye...

At St.Louis -

Next day morning, everyone is in the canteen, just then Swayam's phone rings... he picks it and feels elated to find the name on the screen.

Nil (secretly to boys) - ye swayam apna phone dekhe ithna excited kyu he??

Vicky - dude... patha nahi kaun he... lagtha hai koi ladki he...

Amar - haan yaal mujhe bhi aisa hi lag laha hai...

Bharath - hmm...

Sharon overhears their conversation.

Sharon (thinking) - ladki... and Swayam?? No way... it's impossible... aur ab tho officially couple he... Swayam can't even think about it... par me ithna jealous kyu hu?? I'll be... as I am Swayam's girlfriend... she blushes while she said that last word...

Swayam (shouts) - "TAANI"

Gang (shouts) - TAANI

Kriya (puzzled) - TAANI??

Rey (devastated) - TAANI...

Swayam - hey... kaisi ho?? Long time...

Neha - Neha wanting to talk to Taani...

And she snatches the phone from Swayam...

Simmi - mujhe do... mujhe bhi baat karni he Taani se... hello Taani...

And she snatches the phone ... and like that the whole gang fights for the phone.

Sharon - stop it guys... let Swayam talk...

All keeps quiet and hands over the phone to Swayam.

Swayam - yeah Taani tell me...

Taani - Bhai... vo kya tha??

Swayam - yaha pe sab tumhari call se bahuth exited he and sab fight kar rahe he tumse baat karne ke liye...

Taani remains silent.


Swayam - Taani... you ok??

Taani - yeah Bhai I am fine... I miss u Bhai and our gang...

Swayam - hmm... I miss you too my baby sis...and btw how's Vishesh??

Rey couldn't take it anymore and went to the FE...

Taani - he's fine ...

Swayam - apne shaadi ke baad tumhe apni Bhai ka yaad abhi aaya?? Tum apne shaadi ke baad mujhe bhool gaye ho...

Taani (sad) - I'm sorry Bhai...

Swayam - hey don't be sorry I was just kidding...

Taani (smiles) - aur vaise ... aap log kaha he ab??

Swayam - ham sab abhi canteen me he... but tum kyu pooch rahi ho??

Taani - kyunki me... (bites her tongue)(Thinking) oh shit!!! Arre me tho apni hi plan kharab krne vaali thi... (To Swayam) kuch nahi Bhai... bas aise hi... me aap se baad me baat karthi hu...

And she cuts the call...

What is Taani's plan?? Is she planning of coming back to Mumbai?? If yes then what would be Rey's reaction on seeing Taani?? What do you guys think?? Share your views...Wait for the updates...

Precap

Kriya - Rey... ye Taani kaun he??

Rey is shocked.

Rey - Taani... Taani... vo... vo ...

Edited by appua9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Amazing update :)
Loved it :)
So Taani rey ke paas aa rahi hai ...
Dekhte hai aage aage kya hota hai ...
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Amazing update :)

Loved it :)
So Taani rey ke paas aa rahi hai ...
Dekhte hai aage aage kya hota hai ...
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

pleasure😊... thanks 4 the comments😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wow superb update
finally taani and vishesh getting divorce
and i guess taani will come to st.louis r she is already in there when she talking to swayam in phone
but what will be rey's reaction when he meets taani and hope he accept taani
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

wow superb update

finally taani and vishesh getting divorce
and i guess taani will come to st.louis r she is already in there when she talking to swayam in phone
but what will be rey's reaction when he meets taani and hope he accept taani
update soon

thank u😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesomee update...loving dis ff ti bits 👏
Plzz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update
finally taani and vishesh getting divorce
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Awesomee update...loving dis ff ti bits 👏
Plzz pm me

thank u 😊 i'll pm u whn i update😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Visk_Taarey

superb update
finally taani and vishesh getting divorce
update soon

thank u😊... i'll update soon😊..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5

Taarey meeting

Rey was walking through the corridor and he felt a soft breeze around him.

Rey (thinking) - why do I feel like Taani yahan he?? I feel like I can smell her accent all around...

Kriya - Rey...

He was lost in thoughts.

Rey (thinking) - ye me kya soch raha hu?? Taani yahan kaise ho saktha he??

Kriya (loudly) - Rey...

Rey - haan...

Kriya - kabse bula raha hu aapko ...

Rey - I'm sorry... kyun bulaya tumne?? baat kya he??

Kriya - vo me hamari gang ko doond raha tha...aapko patha he vo log kaha he?? Mene RH check kiya... vo vaha nahi he...

Rey - vo log shayad canteen me honge...come let's go n check...

They go to the canteen.

Amar - dekho ley bhi aa gaya...

Vicky - Rey, koi aya he...

Taani (thinking) (blushing) - he Krishna ji!! Vo yaha he... me usko dekhne ke liye yaha pe aaya... par abhi mere pett me ye butterflies kyu udd rahi he?? Rey abhi bhi vaisa hi hoga?? Ya bhir badal gaya hoga?? Nahi... nahi... vo kyu badlengi... aakhir to vo mera prince charming he na...

He turned around to see him ... her handsome prince... her hero ... the love of her life... her Rey...

He stood there still when he saw her... oh my god... how much did he miss her in his life... his love... his life... his Taani...

They share an eye lock. It was a LLHH moment. Both their eyes became red while seeing each other. Both were so lost in each other that they forgot that everyone was around.

They came to their senses by hearing someone's gesture.

Someone - hey guys...

Guys - hai...

Taani turn to her side to see the person and she was shocked... it was Kriya...

Taani (shocked) (thinking) - Kriya aur yaha?? Iska batlab?? Rey ne move on kiya?? he Krishna ji!! Ye mene kya kar diya... mujhe ye pehle hi soch lena chahiye... me ithni stupid thi aur ye soch rahi thi ki Rey move on nahi kiya hoga... bina soche samjhe ye kya ho gaya...ye mene vahi galthi phir se ki jo mena pehle ek baar kiya tha...

A flashback comes in her mind of her proposal to Rey in the FE.

She turned to look at Rey who stared her back helplessly... she could read everything from his eyes... his helpless look gave the answers to all the questions she had in her mind... both were staring into each others eyes. Taani was the one who broke the eye lock.


Taani - hai Rey...

Rey - hai...tum kaisi ho??

Taani - me teek hu... aap kaise he??

Rey - me... meri life tho vahi he... par tumhari life me hi nayi cheese ho rahi he na... tumhari shaadi huyi, nayi life shuru huyi , he na??mera kya he me tho abhi bhi aise hi hu ...

There was a minute silence between the 2 and then Taani broke the ice.

Taani - sirf meri life me nahi Rey, aapke life me bhi changes ayi he...

Rey looked at her puzzled and as a reply for his questioned look, she looks towards Kriya.

Both were having the conversation emotionless. They were heart broken. Frustration was clear in both their words.

Kriya - guys... (Pointing towards Taani) ye kaun he??

Taani went near Kriya.

Taani - aap Kriya ho na??

Kriya - haan ... par aap mujhe kaise jaanthe he??

Taani - mene aapke bare me bahuth suna tha in logo se... ye log kafi kuch bathaya tha mujhe aapke bare me... aapka dance aur sab kuch(looks at Rey sadly)...

They both share a small eye-lock.

Kriya - I am sorry... but I didn't get you...

Taani - I'm Taani...

Kriya - oh, tho aap Taani ho?? But sach bathau tho me aap ke bare me kuch nahi jaanthi... aur aap in sabko kaise jaanthe ho??

Taani - vo actually me...

Swayam - sorry to interrupt you young ladies...let me have the pleasure to introduce you 2 to each other... so... Taani ... meet my best friend Kriya... and Kriya... meet my behen Taani...

Kriya - behen?? Taani tumhari behen he??

Swayam - haan... actually my cousin...

Kriya - oh... hello taani...

Both shake their hands

Taani - hai...

Vicky (to boys) - Rey ke 2 ex's ek saath??

Amar - ploblem hai bhai...

Bharat - mamla bahuth bada hai...

Nil - aur dono shaking hands??

Boys - hmmm...

Vicky - ab hamara Rey tho... finished...

Will Kriya ever know that Taani was Rey's ex-girlfriend?? What will be her reaction when she gets to know about them?? Wait for the updates...

Precap

Kriya (to Taani) - aap mere bare me ithna kuch jaanthe ho aur me aapke bare me kuch nahi jaantha... that's unfair...

Rinni - me tumhe bathathi hu... Taani Swayam ki sis hi nahi vo...

Everyone looks tensed. Kriya is puzzled and taarey shocked.

Edited by appua9 - 11 years ago

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