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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: fantaarey

Hey...!!!



Nice and lovely update...

Vry excited to knw wat Vishesh gona do...

Uppdate soon...

PM...me

thank u.. i'll pm you when i update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2

Rey's situation

At St.Louis -

Everyone is in the RH.

Vicky - you know what guys?? Last year isi din hamne basketball match jeetha tha.

Nil - yeah dude...

Amar - haan yaar. Kitha maza aaya tha...

Bharath - sahi keh rahe he yaar.

Rey (thinking) - 2day is the day we won the basketball match. Which means isi din mene apne feelings Taanise confess kiya tha... damn... why am I still thinking about her?? Why can't I forget her?? Why?? She wanted to see me happy... she wanted me to move on in my life... and I moved on... kya mene sach me move on kiya?? If I did , then me uske bare mein ithna sochtha kyu he??

Even though he pretends to move on with Kriya, he still has feelings for Taani. He misses her in his life. And just like he said once, he feels incomplete without her. She was his soul, his breath, his life, his everything. He still loves her and misses her badly. But he feels helpless as she is now someone else's wife and he could do nothing about it. He feels like a looser. The only thing that make him live is dance. It has become the only reason for him to live.

His eyes turned red and he went to the FE and sat on the steps. Kriya noticed it and went after him.

At FE-

Kriya - Rey... sab teek he?? Kya hua ?? Is everything ok with you??

Rey - yeah... everything's good... lets go...

Kriya - are you sure??

Rey - yeah...

Kriya - ok then...

At night in Rey's house -

He was sitting on the bed feeling helpless. He starts dancing.

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labhon se yun pilaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge
Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge
Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge
Na rooth ke sihane mein, remote ko chupaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki
Raat bhi na bhati, na kati
Raat bhi cherti marrti
Neendh bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi
Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labhon se yun churaoge

He breaks down.


At Taani's house

The doorbell rang and she opens the door. Vishesh gave her a serious look and gets in.

Vishesh - Taani , kya me tumse kuch pooch saktha hoon??

Taani - haan bilkul...

Vishesh - kya tum mujhse pyar karthe ho??

Taani - kya ?? ye aap kya pooch rahe he??

Vishesh - mene poocha ki tum mujhse pyar karthe ho ya nahi??

Taani - iski kya zaroorath he??

Vishesh - ye jaanna mere liye bahuth zaroori he... tho javab do mujhe...

Taani - Vishesh...

Vishesh -Taani... tum mujhse pyar karthe ho ya nahi??

Taani - me...me... Vishesh... mujhe thoda waqt chachiye...

Vishesh - mujhe mera jawab mil gaya... tum mujhse pyar nahi karthi... he na??

She remained silent.

Vishesh - tumhari ye silence mujhe sab batha raha he... I guess me hamesha sehi ye jantha tha ... that you don't love me ... aur tum kar bhi nahi sakthi kyunki tum aaj bhi usse pyar karthe ho... aur isiliye mene ye decision liya...

Taani - decision?? Kaisa decision?? Ye tum kya keh rahe ho??

What will Taani do after hearing the decision taken by Vishesh?? Will she become happy?? Or will she remain the same?? Will her life take a new turn?? Wait for the updates... Till then reply me... What will be Vishesh's decision?? What do you think ?? I would love to know what you guys think about it..

Precap

Taani (shocked) - Kya ?? Vishesh tum aisa nahi kar sakthi...

Vishesh - nahi Taani... mujhe ye karna kai ... mujhe mat roko... mene decide kiya he...

Edited by appua9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Great beginning :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
PM me :)
Edited by sumana.shesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Great beginning :)

Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

Thank u...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Chapter 2
Great update :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
The emotions were beautifully written :)
Dekhte hai Vishesh ne kya decision liys hai !!!!
Update soon :)
PM me :)
Edited by sumana.shesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Chapter 2

Great update :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
The emotions were beautifully written :)
Dekhte hai Vishesh ne kya decision liys hai !!!!
Update soon :)

thank u so much😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
nice story😊
read both the chapters...pov of both of them was nice
glad to see that taarey still love each other😃
both are missing each other and both are in pain😭😭
now vishesh took a decision...i thnk he took the decision to divorce taani and make her free of this relationship
update soon and pm me when u update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
superb update yr
rey also remembers the day great
and i think vishesh decision will be divorce to taani
update soon yr and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: shona25

nice story😊

read both the chapters...pov of both of them was nice
glad to see that taarey still love each other😃
both are missing each other and both are in pain😭😭
now vishesh took a decision...i thnk he took the decision to divorce taani and make her free of this relationship
update soon and pm me when u update😊

thank u 😊 .. i'll pm u when i update😛...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

superb update yr

rey also remembers the day great
and i think vishesh decision will be divorce to taani
update soon yr and thanks for the pm

thank u 😊 ..

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