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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

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Taarey ff - I am incomplete without you



Chapter 1

Taani's situation

At Taani's house

Vishesh - hey bhagvan!! 9 baj gaye?? Aaj tho mein late ho jaungi. Taani...

By saying that, he gets up from the bed and goes into the kitchen to see Taani.

In the kitchen,

Vishesh - Taani... tune mujhe utaya kyun nahi?? Taani...

He was shocked not to find Taani there. Normally she used to be there at this time. He went to check in her room. Even though they are married they live in separate rooms. It's because he wanted to give her space. He wanted her to accept him with heart not due to duties. He opened the door to find her sitting down with teary eyes.

Vishesh - Taani... tum teek ho??

She was lost in her own world.


Flashback

Like every day today also she mechanically got up from her bed and started to walk towards the kitchen. Now everything was mechanical for her. She pretends to be happy in front of everyone. She went near the table to change the date in the calendar. She saw the date and a tear drop rolled down her eyes. It was this day they started their relationship, she and Rey. The day when he came through the window after St.Louis collage won the basketball match and confessed his feelings to her. How can she forget that day??The day that changed her life. The day she felt on top of the world.


Now nothing is left with her. She lost everything. She lost her smile, her happiness, her love, her Rey. The only thing that's left with her is her tears.

Flash back ends

Vishesh - Taani... Taani ...

He shook her holding her shoulders.

Taani (blankly) - haan... tum ne bhulaya mujhe??

Vishesh - Taani... kya hua?? Tum itni khoyi huyi si kyon ho??

Taani - khoi huyi?? Nahi tho mein teek hoon.

She gets up.

Vishesh - agar tum teek ho tho tumhari aankhein laal kyun he??

Taani - wo... mein ... mein ...

Vishesh - 3 mahine huye hamre shaadi ko aur tum abhi bhi vaise ki vaise ho. When was the last time you smiled?? Tum kabhi bhi khush nahi ho. Every time I ask you something you always divert the topic.

Taani - kya?? tum ye kya keh rahi ho?? Mene kaha na mein teek hoon aur dekho mein khush bhi hoon. (Faking a smile) kisne kaha tumse ki me khush nahi hoon ?? me tho khush hoon, bahuth khush.

Vishesh - really?? Tum khush ho??

Taani (looking down) - haan... me khush hoon...

Vishesh - tho yahi bath tum mere aankhoon mein aankhein dalke kyun nahi bolthe??

She remained silent.

Vishesh - bas... ab bahuth ho gaya. Ab mujhe hi kuch karna chahiye.

Taani - kya?? tum kya karne vale ho??

He didn't reply and went from there...

Taani - Vishesh... Vishesh...

What is Vishesh up to?? What's he Gonne do with Taani?? Wait for the updates...

Precap - Rey's POV...

Rey (thinking) - yahi din we won the basketball match. Which means this is the same day I confessed my feelings to Taani... damn... why am I thinking about her?? Why can't I forget her?? Why??

Edited by appua9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
what V do now??
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just 2day read it
its awesome
pls contiune soon and pls scrap r pm me when updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey...!!!


Nice and lovely update...

Vry excited to knw wat Vishesh gona do...

Uppdate soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: skfirdous

nice update
what V do now??
continue soon

thank you.. i'll continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poorni_vishali

just 2day read it

its awesome
pls contiune soon and pls scrap r pm me when updating

thank you.. i'll pm you when i update..

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