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Posted: 11 years ago
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So guys.

I know that the creatives have actually shot for the show and know what are they doing, but then as viewers, there are things we don't like, like say.
1) Slow pace.
2) Irritating characters
3) Or, I don't know. I'm sure you guys can think of something.
So everyone go ahead and vent out your frustrations.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
yes,it is getting boring.
1) jealous track is little irritating.
2)it is slow pace.
3)still showing payal is not recovered.we want to see her recovered.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dayal Thakur's instincts should be slowed Down. It's about Dev, (most) viewers know Dev is innocent, he got Values, but Him (DT) telling it constantly appears odd. In my point, Dev proving himself clean is what should be a l'll later, a Twist, this can provide a Good concept, and pace (for viwers, who wants other-track apart-from Revenge story), if handled correctly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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- Bullshit jealousy track and love triangle😡
-Slow pace

- Repetitive dialogues (Sakshi keeps barking about instincts, Durga keeps barking how she wants to see Goenkas barbaad)

- Characters are flat. Especially the young ones. Shaurya does nothing except partying and sleeping around? Rajnath, Sakshi, and recently Dayal are only ones with different shades/layers.

- Trying clich ways to make Dev and Suchitra different from other Goenkas. Mandir, bhagwan dialogues...can we have something better to draw contrasts?!

- New ways to expose villains. I am fed up of cameras, and slideshows playing on big screen in parties. 🥱

- Durga should target Shaurya's friends who were partners in crime. High time! Why are friends spared from the heat?!

- Some focus on Durga and Payal's relationship now and progress in Payal's recovery. We see her more with enemies than with the only relative she is left with and for whom she is fighting this battle!😲

- Flashbacks have only Nitya, Payal, Goenkas. I want to see parents, bonding with Nitya and employee - employer relation with Goenkas for more clarity.

- Durga only fumes in her planning room. I want to see her actually putting together plans than just cry or view CCTV footage! I find her bloodshot eyes in planning room repetitive now.

- Enough of hints to past! I want to see what things Sakshi and Rajnath taunt each other about!

- They focus too much on sex. Balance it with legal, business and other corruption. All are sleeping, dreaming of sleeping, covering up sleeping, forced sleeping, coerced sleeping...too much of sheets and unzipping here! 🤢

- What is Dayal? Doc? Businessman? What is his speciality? Cancer research, psychiatry, trauma, neuro, plastic surgery...what?! Or is he another filmy all-purpose doc?😲

- Stop killing half time of episodes in dreams and fantasies.😡

- Sakshi and Suchitra need new jewellery and dresses. Same pearl necklaces - bore.

- Be more unpredictable and surprise us! Till now most of members' predictions have come true. No twists that leave us gobsmacked, wondering why we did not think of it before.

- Dev has stupid reasons for inability to come to India and contact Nitya. Provide better explanation or stop harping on betrayal feelings of Nitya.

- Why is Dev only obsessed with Durga and her mask? Why not investigating Payal case better? Why not same curiosity to examine his own Goenka clan?!

- No Bengali flavour. Shaurya's friends and him use words like Oye, dance to Hindi/Punjabi songs. More of a Delhi/Bambaiya feel than Kolkata!

- Who is Mukhopadhyay? Reveal other characters instead of just naming them and killing time with Dev-Nitya FBs and Shaurya's fantasies.

- Sorry, but Dev's character formation is still weak and not convincing. His entry seems to have weakened Durga too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes the jealousy track is getting very boring. Durga should target shaurya's friends they did rape her sister or has she forgotten that. It's a revenge story and she wants revenge yet she is just playing with one of the criminals only.
Mainly jealousy track needs to move on I'm sure people are bored of seeing shaurya acting like the spoilt brat that he is

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is it the Gussa thread?? In TSPLS forum we used to have this thread to vent out all our frustration and anger. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abray

Is it the Gussa thread?? In TSPLS forum we used to have this thread to vent out all our frustration and anger. 😆

Yup. I know that we can't do anything but at least we know what we feel is wrong in the story. Then MAYBE the creative team MIGHT take notice if they ever visit the forum.
What's TSPLS?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nerdgal

Yup. I know that we can't do anything but at least we know what we feel is wrong in the story. Then MAYBE the creative team MIGHT take notice if they ever visit the forum.
What's TSPLS? A show Tujh Sang Preet Lagai Sajna used to air on star plus.


And yeah, I'll keep on coming here frequently😆,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
I second Atominis in all her reasons.

She has said it all like she has read my mind. Thank you Atonimis for your list.

Appreciate your hard work .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: atominis

- Bullshit jealousy track and love triangle😡

-Slow pace

- Repetitive dialogues (Sakshi keeps barking about instincts, Durga keeps barking how she wants to see Goenkas barbaad)

- Characters are flat. Especially the young ones. Shaurya does nothing except partying and sleeping around? Rajnath, Sakshi, and recently Dayal are only ones with different shades/layers. Shaurya is a crying baby... he doesn't work smartly rather he dreams of killing, raping and romancing. Get A LIfe Shaurya Goenka😡

- Trying clich ways to make Dev and Suchitra different from other Goenkas. Mandir, bhagwan dialogues...can we have something better to draw contrasts?! Also let them stay within the discussions of Sakshi & Rajnath &. Let Suchitra be the "Badi Bahu" It's a social message show, the track of Suchitra is the wrong message. It's showing that widowers are always get cornered.

- New ways to expose villains. I am fed up of cameras, and slideshows playing on big screen in parties. 🥱 I'm sorry I don''t think you can change that😆 afterall it's an Indian soap.

- Durga should target Shaurya's friends who were partners in crime. High time! Why are friends spared from the heat?! Yes why isn't Durga destroying Shaurya's friend like she did to Ganguly?

- Some focus on Durga and Payal's relationship now and progress in Payal's recovery. We see her more with enemies than with the only relative she is left with and for whom she is fighting this battle!😲. Same here. I also want her to move on in life. And a male lead for her

- Flashbacks have only Nitya, Payal, Goenkas. I want to see parents, bonding with Nitya and employee - employer relation with Goenkas for more clarity.

- Durga only fumes in her planning room. I want to see her actually putting together plans than just cry or view CCTV footage! I find her bloodshot eyes in planning room repetitive now.

- Enough of hints to past! I want to see what things Sakshi and Rajnath taunt each other about! And how the hell Rajnath and Raima ended up dating each other🥱??

- They focus too much on sex. Balance it with legal, business and other corruption. All are sleeping, dreaming of sleeping, covering up sleeping, forced sleeping, coerced sleeping...too much of sheets and unzipping here! 🤢

- What is Dayal? Doc? Businessman? What is his speciality? Cancer research, psychiatry, trauma, neuro, plastic surgery...what?! Or is he another filmy all-purpose doc?😲 That's I have been thinking after knowing that Durga had a plastic surgery by him.

- Stop killing half time of episodes in dreams and fantasies.😡 It's a national problem in Indian soaps 😆

- Sakshi and Suchitra need new jewellery and dresses. Same pearl necklaces - bore.

- Be more unpredictable and surprise us! Till now most of members' predictions have come true. No twists that leave us gobsmacked, wondering why we did not think of it before.

- Dev has stupid reasons for inability to come to India and contact Nitya. Provide better explanation or stop harping on betrayal feelings of Nitya.

- Why is Dev only obsessed with Durga and her mask? Why not investigating Payal case better? Why not same curiosity to examine his own Goenka clan?! He should also use Durga's trick by putting camera's in his own house😆

- No Bengali flavour. Shaurya's friends and him use words like Oye, dance to Hindi/Punjabi songs. More of a Delhi/Bambaiya feel than Kolkata!

- Who is Mukhopadhyay? Reveal other characters instead of just naming them and killing time with Dev-Nitya FBs and Shaurya's fantasies. Exactly, we need to know what happened to the real Durga and how did Dev's father died.

- Sorry, but Dev's character formation is still weak and not convincing. His entry seems to have weakened Durga too.

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