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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
PART 5


sapna ran to her room crying and manthan was well yellow he went home with egg all over him everyone kept on laughing he went into his room laksh said to nukul i wonder who did that ill go see him nukul was happy to see him in this state
laskh and bhoomi and tanya went to seee manthan
bhoomi , tnaya laksh - wots all this why are you covered in egg who did this

manthan - that stupid girl who else i went to her house becasue mum told me to say sorry and she chucked eggs at my face dont worry ill teach her a lesson oh well atleast i made her cry ahh i hate her !!
everyone start laughing
bhoomi - sorry bro but i cant bealive she actually had the guts to do that to you i mean no one has ever done that
manthan - i know next time i see her she wont be able to do anything

tanya - loook manthan i know that it was wrong of her to chuck eggs at you but still you made her cry and you even run over her i think still yuo sohuld say sorry
laksh - i think tanya aunty is right
manthan - i dont car all i now is i wont get peace unless if i do something horrible to her
laksh - but manthan

manthan - look bro its great that you care but please let me handle this on my own
soon manthan went out with his friends and they was blocking the way well they let everyone go through until they saw sapna she was quietly going when manthan put his leg on the way so she couldnt go
manthans friends said wow what a babe what a chick manthan gave a dirty look
sapna said very quietly umm manthan please move your leg

manthan - what if i dont he holded her and pulled her hair again and said look dont mess with me okay but still ive not forgiven you yet and dat means pay back he pushed her in the middle and there was all guys around her she started screaming for help and crying but no one came to help her
manthan - oh sorry babe but no one can save you now he got this bucket of mud and start chucking at her then his friend came closer to her and said manthan man wot a girl he riped her sleeve and then he wanted to rip more but manthan didnt like this and said to his friend thats enough now leave her alone sapna Go yo man ehy did you do that for wot and let you do that no way this is just the beggining more other things are going to be happening to her she ran crying and bumped into her bestfriend bhoomi
bhoomi - omg sapna my bestest best friend when did you come back from dubai wait a second what happend to you who did this she hugged bhoomi

sapna - (crying) some boys they wanted revenge and they cool down sapna come take me to those boys she pointed to them and manthan back was turned so she couldnt see who it was and she gave him a big slap and saw his face manthan tum
manthan - why did you slap me bhoomi
bhoomi sorry i didnt no it was you wait a second sapna is the egg girl and your the one who did all this bro leave her alone shes my best friend and if you do anything else to her no ones ganna be worser then me okay spana couldnt hear what she said

bhoomi - come sapna his going to say sorry
sapna - no i dont want to go near him how can someone be soo crul she ran off crying and bhoomi went after her will manthan listen to what his sister said he couldnt bealive his sister slapped him and for that girl and remembered it was a accident and kind of felt ashemed of what he did
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
hehe great part

please continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
manthans soo mean awwwwww
great part !!!!
rouge123 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hey guys im ganna write dis fanfic again the same story but just coz nobody reads it soo im ganna do it again k
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
thanks cuzzy but im supposed to say that hehe 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey babygirl
its been ages since you've updated this ff
pls update it soon
this is really good
loads of people read it just they are too lazy to give comments
me too.
i mean i'm sort of lazy and most of the times i dont give comments but pls continue this great fanfic 😆 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
oh i didnt continue thus coz i thought people didnt like this but im gana continue it soon can i make this again coz it was kind of my other ff bits too well it was laksh and manthna yeh dosti but then it had love in it i think no one read it coz they thought it didnt have any love in it but dont worry im ganna write it again okay !!!
bye the fisrst bit ganna be a bit different but the same dont owrry thanks for your comments 😊

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