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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovers forever

hey guys i hope you like my ff please reply i would really like it my fanfic is on manthan and sapna its a love triangle between manthan nukul and sapna umm i wonder who gets the girl well to find out you will have to read my fanfic (please)

manthan

sapna

arcita

laksh

nukul

bhoomi

PART 1

Soon nakul was soo mad and wanted to get some fresh air so he walked around till he went to this road it was dark and it started to rain and suddenly a beautiful girl came out of a car she was the beautifulist girl he had ever seen he couldnt take his eyes off her she was waering a white tight chodidar (chalwar chamise and tight chalwar ) she was wearing big earings and a white necklace and high heels and had long stright hair and dimples she had such a beautiful smile

she walked and walked and opened her
purse and gave out choclate to these little children and soon went inside her car nukul just relised she was gone and tried running after the car but it went to fast he soon returned home and couldnt go to sleep at all he could see is pictures of the girl he just saw running through his head he ddint know wot was happening to him he never felt this way about anyone the girl who he didnt even know how could he just fall in love like that he was thinking could this be love at first sight

soon manthan went out to meet his friends and lost his way he was driving soo fast he didnt even relise soon a girl came walking on the road with a plate of parsad she just came out from the mandir and was walking manthan didnt see where he was going and screamed to the girl move !!! she didnt hear and carried on walking he couldnt control his car and banged into the girl she fell on the floor and hurt her head it started bleeding he came out of the car and holded the girl in his arm are you okay
girl - excuse me can you let go of me you stupid boy didnt you look where you was going look what you do if you dont no how to drive a car why are you driving a car stupid

manthan - excuse me what did you say miss miss umm miss deaf
girl - wot did you say miss deaf wot about you monkey
manthan - excuse me do i look like a monkey to you im very handsome by the way not a donkey like you and didnt you hear i was shouting move soo loud so its not my fault
girl - it so is your fault and im not a donkey so shut up oouchhh

manthan - dont tell me to shut up and come inside my car your bleeding a lot come ill take you to the hospital
girl - what im not going anywhere with you ouchh ouchh okay fine lets go 😕
he picked her up and put her into the car i cant bealive i even let you touch me ehh just shut up and get into the car you sohuld be happy that i touched you girls dream of me touching them and dont try to hide your feeling i no you fink im hot burning hot

girl - eh no way have you ever looked in the mirror im not those stupid girls who follow you around stupid
manthan gave her a dirty look

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Posted: 18 years ago
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no replies 😭 😭


PART 2



Manthan and the girl was inside the car manthan put some music soo loud he was listening to smack that he kept on singing "smack that all on the floor laalalalla lalal " the girl switched off the music
manthan - hey why did you do that for this is my car not your soo just keep your hands away from my car understand
girl - sorry i just wanted you to shut up with your singing you just spoiled all the song when you started singing
manthan - excuse me im a very good singer i won many awards in talent competitions
girl - ahahahha you got to be joking
manthan - manthan turn on his radio back on the song had finnished omg see because of your yap yap the songs finnished after that the song rafta rafta came on wait leave this song i love this song
manthan turned it off
girl - why did you do that for wot you dont let me listen to my song so i should let you listen to your song no way chup chap bati raho the girl went quite all of a sudden
girl - can i ask you a question plz
manthan no i mean okay fine what
girl - why are you soo rude i mean you get soo angery over little things are you sure you dont have some mental issues
manthan - excue me wot !!! do i look mad to you
girl - yess and please stop screaming i might get deaf
manthan - thank god where here theres the hospital go in there and bye
girl - wait cant you go inside with me why okay fine ill come with you
he waited and waited for her to come out she screamed he could hear her scream and he wasnt even in the same room as her he ran into the room and said wot is it

nurse - look sir your wife isnt taking the injection
manthan - hah ahha shes not my .. anyways take the injection your not some kind of baby take it he snatched the injection of the nurse and sat next to the girl and he said look just be brave okay he put the injection in her skin tears was dripping through her eyes but suddenly he didnt like this he couldnt see her in pain
manthan - its done now are you okay
girl - yeah im fine thanks and im sorry for shouting at you not hahahaha
manthan got soo angery shut up i wish i could just leave you in this hospital but no i cant come lets go he soon dropped her to her house she went out the car and asked him by the way whats your name oh its manthan
girl - oh my name is ..
manthan - dont want to no he ran off in his car she felt soo angery and wanted to punch him on the face
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay i am the first one to comment

yea it's a nice fanfic i want the girl to be wit manthan!

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3




Manthan returned home his mum was worried where he had been he went inside his room and started laughing because he kept on rembering the girl he had just met tanya was suprised he was laughing she had not seen manthan laugh for soo long she came and sit near him
tanya - manthan whats dis your laughing ?
manthan - nothing mum i just met this stupid girl
tanya - hmm so how did you meet this girl
manthan - oh well this accident
tnaya - accident !!! she paniced are you okay tumhe cohrt ne lagi
manthan - no mum actually umm i kind of hit her when i was driving and took her to the hospital wow my ears hurt a lot do you no how much she talks shes like a parrot she goes on and on never stops
tanya - so do you like this girl ?
manthan - are you mad shes soo annyoing i was only laughing because she did something funny dats all doesnt mean i like her i hate her ahh shes got the biggest mouth ever next time i see her im ganna run over her again or worse
tanya - manthan your not going to do anything like that i think this girls really sweet the way your describing her she must be .. anyways i want you to apolgize to her
manthan - what mum tanya gave him that look
okay fine mum ill go tomomrow but i forgot where she lives now i cant go
tanya - Manthan jao i mena not now first have some sleep later you go
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i love your ff this is got to be one of my fave dont be sad coz people are not replying they will soon when they find out how much this ff rocks so people reply heheh welldone 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
wow this ff rocks please continue

😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4



Manthan was soo angery he didnt want to apolgize to that girl !! but had to he looked dashing like always he was wearing some jeans and his favourite top he soon reached to the girls house and knocked everyone around him was staring at him the girl opened the door and relised it was him and shut the door on his face this was her chance to do something
he was still watiing outside mad he couldnt bealive that girl just shut the door on his face soon she came out with eggs in her hands and chucked them at manthans face and it fell on his favourite top he was brusting with anger
manthan - what the hell are you doing she kept on laughing
girl - umm hehe did you know you look like a chicken
manthan grabed her oy dont run away from me you stupid girl dis was my favourite top you know and how could you do that no girl has ever had the guts to do that and to manthan virani you pagal ladki the girl felt very uncomfortable when he started grabing her really hard and pulled her hair you could see she wanted to cry and she did
manthan - yeah thats more like it cry , cry i like to see you in pain soo whats your name ? i said whats your name he pulled her hair even harder
girl - .... all you could hear is her crying soon this little girl came and said sapna !! and ran away
manthan - oh soo your name is sapna ha ha ha if you ever do something like that your serioudly ganna get hurt baby and if you try this again ohh you wil see what i can do and it aaint pretty your prob thinking why did i come to your house huh ? well my mum told me to say sorry to you so i came her and you made me into a ommlete watch your ganna pay for this he let go of her and gave her a dirty look



HEY guys please reply or ill think u hare my ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
hahhaahh that was soooooooooo funny please continue 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#9
i loved it
please continue
i love your ff your really progressing in your writing 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
thats really good
continue soon pls 😆

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