MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

yaha kabb aayi...?

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi every one

you always give me support in my all work a

and expecting same support in this also

just want to write this

this based on Marathi movie

Time pass


in this maan is only 16 year old he don't have dole shole

he is very thin boy so enjoy



upadte today Adoore last part on page 127 please read it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4013164/mg-adoore-sapane-2-thread-updating-last-part-on-page-121-and-today-127




big hug for all you


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Posted: 11 years ago

First dhamaka



today part for Maan



part 1



today is 10 class result there is so tense every wear on boy who get good mark just celebrating with his friends just than someone grab him with his collar and just punch him hard near his eyes that poor boy just cried and lookto that boy who punch him hard ...



a boy in his dark red pant and dark green shirt , rumal around neck , have yellow gogal on eyes age around 16 year



Boy - maaan



maan- yes maan to bhidu to paas ho gaya


boy- nodded in yes



maan - aur main fail ho gaya



boy- nodded in yes again but in fear


maan- to mere baap ko mere fail haone ki happy news tune di kya fattu


boy- just gulp hard and nodded in yes


maan just rised his hand to again hit him but adi , Vicky just hold him and pull him away and say maan ,tera baap ghar pay teri raah dekh raha hai



maan - pata hai meri vaat lagane ko maan just look to that boy who shaking with fear , tei to main baad main band bajaunga abhi to muje baap ka dram dekhana pdega ...


he just went to his home with thinking now have to watch most verst drama abhi ghar jake sabse bada dasu drama dekhana apdeyga kya yaar Vicky ter ko perfect wali coffee thane ko nahi aayi kya , main pass ho jata aur mere baap ka mu band ho jata na

maan just reach to his home with adi and vikcy , and get surpriced with band in front of his house maan just stand in front of door and maan father say pinky beta aarthi leke aa jao tumaraha bhai aaya hai

pinky just come and say baba ye karna jaruri hai kya

maan baba - tu khali aarti naikal uski Ajj bahot bad din hai hamare khandan ke liye pinky



man don't get tont in father words , he just give silly smile to baba tuz ko bhi pata chal gaya main kitan dashu hu , So father you get it hat how much I am clver


pinky just do aarti and maan put step in house and his father just start to hit him with big skale , he just saying arre baba ter ko doura pad gaya kya / you get fit or pagalpan attact kya why you hitting me , mere ko ku mar raha hai baap


maan baba ter ko ku maar rahaa hai TU FAIL hoke aaaya hai aur asking me why tri to aj main vaat laga dunga , tu apne pav pai chal bhi nahi paayega samjaha kya



pinky just come between and say baba please mere liy usko chod do ek baar


baba just sit on bed and cry in pain why he don't get it I don't want he become auto driver like me , I don't want he fight for two time food whole life , idont want he live in poority why he don't get it padega nahi to career kasise banaega ye ...tu bol na main galt hu kya jo iske bare main accha soch raha hu bol mere ko ,he just hide his face and start to cry bitterly pinky just come to baba and hug him , maan also get tear in his eyes



just tham maan other friend come their to give sweet because he get passed , maan father just grab him and say loudly you want to give sweet de do mera naalaayak beta fail hua hai la de sweet la de

that boy just run from there pionky mummer slowly , maan come after some time all just went to their adda near water supplied

maan make sad face and say adi iwant to become successful man yaaar

Vicky think for some time and say than you have fail down in love



maan - mu tod dunga tera ye love wale bath mujse dur rakh samja kya love aur successful man ka kya relation hai



viky yaar hota hai , agar tere ko love hua na to to bahot bada admi ho jaayega , romiyo , ranja ,aur apana Sal**** ke jasia



maan - yaar apne ko kon ghaas daalygi yaar apun thoda wo tip top chore ke jaisa hai hi hello and kya bolte hai yaar lagta hai koi machin bol rahi hai


vikcy you just come tomoorw in front of collage I will show you best girl for love MM wali samja kya next day maan reach there with dark green pant , red t shirt and purple googol



Vicky just greet maan and adi and start to show just than one girl in mini passed from there and Vicky usko dekhana bahi nahi bahot mehga item reahta hai ,bahot saara karcha karna padta hai , film,ice crem, coffee , gift and all y apne ko hazam nahi hoga



just than one more girl pass who wink to them , maan look he like what viky say na ye to her dali pe ghomata hua butter fly hai , aj yaha , kal waha and parso pata nahi kaha kaha


just than maan feel somting different like coll air he just turn and saw a girl 16 age in salwar cover herself with duppata , walking with bending head sh just saw foe second to maan and maan ki to ghvnt baj gayi


maan ye wali


Vicky - perfect for love MM


maan - MM



Vicky- MM marriage material yaar sidi sadi , well culture ,always lesion to elder ye wala stock abhi khatam ho raha hai bahot kam bacha hai

Prrecap

same area in medal class family

a beautiful girl age 16 just taking blessing from her father

Geet - she just say in low voice pitaji main wahi admission lungi jaha app kahenge

she is geet handa , her father word is always command for her don't have her own mind decision , have good voice her father want she become singer always in two choti ... taking duppata like this so nobody look her inch of body always talk in shudh hindi have 85% in 10 th class joining collage which is start in next week

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Dhamaka no.1👏

maan's entry...
"bhidu aaj toh drama dekhne milega"🤣🤣
"tu pass ho gaya aur mai FAIL ho gaya"😆😆😆

pinki maan's sis😛😛
bhai ko bacha liya maar khane se😉

maans papa..
pehle beating then crying😭😭
hes also rite👍🏼
hope his wish comes true soon

maan to frnd
"i want to become successful man"
frnd = 🤣🤣
maan = 😡😡😡
frnd "uske liye tujhe PYAR karna pdega
maan = 🤢🤢🤢

maan sees GEET
our gal a perfect MM😲

waiting for their love story to start😃

👏
Edited by -mirror- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice
there is no effect on maan of hiting n tears of his father

Mahimaan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice

there is no effect on maan of hiting n tears of his father



hu you are right
but watch dear
this is age which friend saying us
we will accept that
he is not bad with heart

his age not such big and not such small 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
so he failed
yet again
his dad beat him up
well what else to do
he wants him not to suffer like he is
cant say he is wrong
his dad is right
i feel for him
yeh maan bhi naa
instead of wasting time in all this if he studies he will do well
so geet hi milli inhe
well not really
geet type ki ladkiyan kam hai
and they are right
cheers for pm
kya beginning thi
aparna3011 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan



hu you are right
but watch dear
this is age which friend saying us
we will accept that
he is not bad with heart

his age not such big and not such small 😉




ya its very true
but some time they choose or pretend to be big or small which ever is in their favour
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by -mirror- - 11 years ago
Mahimaan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011




ya its very true
but some time they choose or pretend to be big or small which ever is in their favour




yes dear if they mistake they will say we are small
or if elder angry on them than say we are big na

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