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simran422

@simran422

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

This is awesome!

Poor Zain!

Thank you for the PM and do update soon 😊

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Aastha

@craziness05

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

res...baad mein reply karungi

Unres...!!

Sorry vinu main unres karna bhul gai thi...!!

Main bahut badi bhulakhad hoon😆

Par what to say about this chapter it was awesome!!👏

Fan ho gayi main teri after this chapter..!!😃

U also never fail to suprise me😊

Aur haan jaldi update karna next chapter😉

Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago

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sahar

@...Smile...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Amazing update vinu👏

zain finally found aliya😛

Thanks for the pm

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Aneesha

@Ashis

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Vinu it was damn emotional...I got tears in my eyes...as I'm so connected to zaya tat I cn feel zain's pain.N sorry to say bt I dn't want cv's to shw sumthing lk ths I cn't see zain in so much pain.

I get so emotional reading ths...

very well written 👏

amazing

waiting for next part...hope its aliya only in the classroom.

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Radikx1705

@Radikx1705

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

You say it's popped out of nowhere?
For me, it was an amazingly written chapter!!
Awesome! Please continue, if possible! :D

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
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Hold,lemme go read!!
accha yes,i remember 😆
i just didnt recognise the title 😆
lemme go read the update 😛

written amazingly,they are finally going to meet 😳
could imagine Zain's anguish when he told his dad a white lie.
and whatever happens,and i don't know why,i am unable to hate suraiya like i hated Bobby.
this was a pretty emotional update... the peace zain gets while he visits dargah is depicted beautifully👏 keep it up 👏
And sorry,i quotd instead of editing

Edited by arshipotterfan - 11 years ago

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Sanika

@Legilimens

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: vinu127
thanks a lot.. feels great to here from such a good writer😳
@bold- neither will i ! melodrama quotient may be!🤔😆
thanks again😳

A GOOD WRITERRR!!!!!!!!! 🥳 thankkk youuu :-* :-*

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

*Reserved*

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Bari he daash ho Vinu! Saray flahsback aur purani cheezein dikha kar you didn't show what happened in orphanage 😛 Anyways, you're no less! The way you have penned down Zain's emotions, situation is brilliant 👏 And you write so well aur phir bhi you're saying it's not up to our expectations 😡 pagal! it's awesome 😃

Update soon 😉 Thanks for the pm 😳

Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 11 years ago