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reemamariyam

@reemamariyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Amazing update loved it thank you for pm. 👏😳

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: gowtu
Sch an amzng story
Loved it

Read all pets in one go
Pm me when u updt

Nd my like bttn doesn't working
Sry.. Count me in :-)

Hey r u from south ??
U used meena pic for arnav's mother charectr

Well me from south :-)

YUP I'M FROM SOUTH
FROM ANDHAR PRADESH 😊 DEAR

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

PART-1
PART-2

At the Airport...

Khushi was finally relieved to get rid of the arnav...even though she could feel his presence she dint see him anywhere around her...
She collected her luggage and went out of the airport to check for her ever soo late friend NK...
Khushi took out her cellphone from her bag to call Nk to know about his whereabouts...
She switchedon the phone and was shocked to see arnav's pic in her phone...

"How did my wall paper get changed?and that too his pic..."Khushi was confused when the phone started ringing...
Caller ID:Lavanya...
"Who is this lavanya?"Khushi thought to herself and lifted the phone...to her ear...
"Hey Arnu...we are on the way...and everything is done...dont worry 😉...will catch you 10 minutes bye..."Lavanya spoke and cut the call without giving a chance for the other person to speak...
She checked the phone ones again and finally understood that it is not hers...but HIS..
"I think he did this wantedly...how dare he exchange the phones..."Khushi fumed...
Khushi tried to register what happened when her mind went to the name lavanya has just spoke...'Arnu'😉...
"Arnu??what kind of a name it is..."Khushi thought...
"Its Arnav..."Arnav almost whispered in khushi's ear making her jump off the place...
Khushi was shocked to see arnav standing and smirking at her..."So thinking of me?"Arnav smirked again...while khushi was still in a shock...she became angry and spoke..."Why would I think of you?dont give too much inportance to youself...mr."Khushi spoke with anger...
"Well now itself you are thinking about my name...i just heard like you said Arnu 😉"Arnav spoke immitating khushi...
she spoke again..."Yes...your girl friend just called in this..."She stopped showing the phone to him and then understood the phone was indeed not hers and is exchanged...she looked at his smirking face..anger rose in her and she spoke again with rudeness..."How dare you change my phone?"...

Arnav was surprised for the sudden change...and before she could speak anything he spoke..."Well yes,our phones got exchanged...but i dint do that you did it.."..
Khushi was surprised at his response..."Why would I do that?"she asked...
"I think they were exchanged in the airport itself..."Arnav spoke calmly...while khushi was about to speak something struck her mind...

FLASHBACK:
Arnav was busy talking on the phone when he felt some strange feeling in his heart...he felt the breeze at his back and looked at the people who are staring at some particular person ...
He thought, may be they are staring at some celebrity and resumed his call...when suddenly someone bumped into him making him fall on the floor...
He slowly opened his eyes and look over the person who bumped into him...
A beautiful 21yrs old girl wearing a peach color designer lehenga...her hair was open,she dont have any jewelry on her except the simple bangles adorning her wrist...she was looking damn beautiful...and was standing infront of him staring at him...
Khushi was looking down at arnav whom she bumped into accidentally...she extended her hand to help which arnav took easily and his mind screamed 'SOFT' 😉 and stood up staring at her and almost standing too close to her...
Khushi heart raced feeling him soo close to her...she clutched her dupatta to control the sudden heart beat and she raised her eyes to meet his dark chocolate brown eyes that are staring at her shamelessly...
Arnav was soo much drawn to her beautiful face...he scanned her face completely, starting from her caramel eyes to her trembling luscious lips which are inviting...he was completely lost in her beauty...
Khushi was trying to take off her eyes off his but she was too much drawn to those chocolate eyes...Both are too lost in each other and their trance was broken by the announcement of the flight...
Khushi was the first one to come out of her trance,she immediately diverted her gaze and released her hand from his grip and ran away from there taking her hand bag that has fallen down(her phone fell on floor...she took the phone and went away..)
Arnav stood still not able to get off her from his mind...he was still not able to register what had just happened..
A small smile crept on his face remembering her and he thought to himself...'Beautiful'
he took his phone which fell downand left for the flight... (since both their phones are same they mistook the phones and left and dint notice till now)
FLASHBACK END

Khushi understood how their phones were exchanged...arnav gave back the phone and took his phone back...
khushi felt defeated...
"Your boy friend called you"Arnav spoke with sarcasm...
Khushi was stunned...she checked her call logs and dialled Nk...but Nk cut the phone...
She was hell irritated with Nk...when arnav spoke adding fuel to her irritation...
"I think he is mad like you...never listen to anyone before speaking"..."Not more than you and your idiot girl friend"khushi spoke immediately leaving the surprised arnav...
"My girlfriend?"...
"Some lavanya..."Khushi said jelousy 😳and sarcasm visible in her tone...
Arnav smirked..he was about to continue his irritating session when a car halted infront of them...
Nk and Lavanya got down the car and came to their friends
Khushi felt relieved to see NK,while Lavanya came to Arnav and hugged him..

"Hey Arnu missed you..."Arnav too reciprocated the friendly hug..."Missed you too.."He spoke...
Khushi was shocked and felt so unconfortable seeing lavanya hugging Him...she felt like slapping lavanya for unknown reason...
While hugging lavanya,arnav saw Khushi feeling unconfortable to see the scene infront of her...he broke the hug and smirked..
when she saw arnav observing her she imeediately diverted her gaze to NK...
"Nk why the hell are you late?"Khushi spoke with anger...
Nk expected this and tried to calm her with his cool words...
"Khush i'm sorry...i'm really late because of this lavanya.."Nk spoke poiniting towards lavanya...
"Who is she?"Khushi spoke seeing lavanya with anger...
"I forgot...this is my close friend Lavanya,we both are neighbours khush.I told about her you many times na"Nk introduced her to Khushi...
"And ya lav's this is Khushi my friend from India... 😊" nk introduced khushi to Lavanya...to which lavanya gave her hand with her dimple smile :)
Lavanya too introduced Arnav to NK...
"Ok now lets go..."Nk told and got into the driver seat...
Lavanya was about to take the seat next to Nk...when khushi almost ran towards the door and spoke"I will sit here.."
to which lavanya agreed...
Nk started the car with him and khushi in front,arnav &lavanya at the back...
"So did you find the house?"Khushi asked Nk...
Nk's face suddenly went pale and he spoke "Hooouuseee...yaaa...found it.."stammering.
"Lavanya so did you find a house for me too?"Arnav spoke to which Lavanya gave a smile...
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They were passing by the beautiful Tower bridge of London...Khushi was memerized to see the beauty of london...visiting london was one of the dreams of khushi and is gonna fullfill...

Arnav saw the little smile on the face of khushi...he was observing her since the time the car started...
Smile crept on his face...
Khushi wished krishna was with her...the smile on her face faded as soon as she thought about her brother...
Arnav observed her sudden panic filled face...
Khushi turned to Nk and spoke..."Bhai teek heina?"Khushi spoke to Nk...
"Yes...but you know right we cant call him..."Nk gave like a warning to her.and khushi felt sad...
"What happened?"Arnav spoke trying to know what the problem was..."Its none of your business."Khushi spoke rudely...
"What the...I'm just trying to know your problem so that I may help you in that..."Arnav spoke...
"No need...thanq we can clear our problems on our own.."She spoke with sarcasm...
Nk and lavanya saw the growing storm and tried to stop it..."Ok guys chill down now.."
Arnav decided to stop and not disturb her for sometime...
He kept quite mumbling to himself..
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The car stopped infront of a huge and beautiful house...there are beautifully curved steps leading to a pool at the entrance...

Khushi was totally lost in the house...
"Wow Nk that was so beautifull house.."She squealed in excitement,..."Come lets go.."lavanya and Nk's face went pale all of a sudden.Both of them were looking at each other whether to tell her or not...which dint go unnoticed by arnav.. Khushi took her luggage and was about to go when Nk stopped her...Khushi turned to face Nk...
He felt so weak to even utter a word and asked lavanya's help for it...arnav stood there watching the scene infornt of him..
"See khushi here you cant stay alone."Lavanya spoke to khushi calmly..
"What do you mean that i cant stay alone?"Khushi spoke little harshly.."cool khushi...please listen to me carefully"Khushi was confused seeing lavanya's expressions...and lav continued..."The owners of this houseare indians and they live in this house.since we dont have much time to search for a safe and best house for you we have finally got this house..."She took a deep breath before continuing..."The owners put a condition that you will be staying her not alone but with your partner...i.e your husband"Khushi was shocked for this statement...but lavanya continued looking at arnav and khushi...
"Sooo you both have to stay togeather for somedays as husband and wife in this house..."She completed nervously looking at their expressions...
"Whattt??????????"Both arnav and khushi screamed at a time making Nk and lavanya frighten...

PRECAP
Keep waiting... 😉

Hii friends
I hope you enjoyed the update...
Please LIKE and COMMENT...
My next update will be after a week since i'm going on a trip...
Plzz Buddy me for PM's
I want encouragement from you guys so all the silent readers atleast LIKE the update...
and please try to comment so that I can give my best to the FF...
Thank you...😊

PART-3

Edited by akshusarun - 11 years ago

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Res unres thanks for the pm akshu... Nijanga naku khushi chala rude ga behave chesthunatu undi... Wow arshi in one house , chala bagundi update soon

Edited by Angellic_doll - 12 years ago

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Sydell

@dellzcreationz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

thks for informing me first to comment

so proud of my self i passed with gud first terminal results and got the beautiful opputunity to comment first now coming to the story

it was fab <3 luv how u intro Nk-Lav (hope they become a couple soon with romance in them hehee) Arshi phone got exchange khushi feeling defeated as babaji ka tullu (got dissed on her face)she got when she realized that it was her mistake that the phone got exchanged ooh so arshi living in this beautiful mansion alone😳looks like some romance might be there

Waitin 4r ur next beautiful update

Edited by desigirl_sydell - 12 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Fb scene was simple,but I found it romantic.Khushi feeling bad seeing arnav with La.La n NK r friends.never expected that.loved mentioning abt La's dimpled smile.An unecpected interesting twist.Arshi will pretend 2 b a couple 2 stay in that house just like Housefull.Wow!so exciting.who all r the owners?Any south actors?

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: desigirl_sydell
thks for informing me first to comment
so proud of my self i passed with gud first terminal results and got the beautiful opputunity to comment first now coming to the story
it was fab <3 luv how u intro Nk-Lav (hope they become a couple soon with romance in them hehee) Arshi phone got exchange khushi feeling defeated as babaji ka tullu (got dissed on her face)she got when she realized that it was her mistake that the phone got exchanged ooh so arshi living in this beautiful mansion alone😳looks like some romance might be there

Waitin 4r ur next beautiful update

first of all congrats dear...
Thnks for the comment
i liked it 😊
and a small correction arshi wont live alone the owners will also b here 😊

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Fb scene was simple,but I found it romantic.Khushi feeling bad seeing arnav with La.La n NK r friends.never expected that.loved mentioning abt La's dimpled smile.An unecpected interesting twist.Arshi will pretend 2 b a couple 2 stay in that house just like Housefull.Wow!so exciting.who all r the owners?Any south actors?

thnq dear 😊
well i'm still thinking on the actors...will serch acoording to the character...south if not north ones itself...
wil update next week 😊

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

if its south it'll b fresh n exciting.from 2nd onwards I may not b able 2 comment.i'll b on a long vacation.but keep sending me pms

Originally posted by: akshusarun

thnq dear 😊
well i'm still thinking on the actors...will serch acoording to the character...south if not north ones itself...
wil update next week 😊