Nikumbh-Yamini OS: Swapped Identities

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is just a preview.

"I don't need your help!!!! I am not like the other weak girls who wait for their prince charming to carry them away to their magical dreamland!"

"But I was just..."
"Didn't you hear what I said, just leave me ALONE!!!"
Startled, he stepped back cautiously slowly maneuvering around the furniture until he knew he had enough space to turn around and run. He didn't want her to see the disappointment and hurt that was smeared across his face. He knew one thing that if she didn't need him, then he didn't need her.
She took a deep breath and moved her messy hair away from her ashen face. He had created enough problems for her, now it was her turn to make his life miserable.
How was it? Should I continue?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh i am a big sucker for angsty romances. plz continue sweetie ! and congrats for writing the 1st os on baawre forum.
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Thanks! Surely I will continue. I love writing and this time I would like to complete my story lol as on previous forums I had written FFs but never got to finishing them. So I am thinking on doing some OS and TS and also have a few ideas like Azam-Nikumbh's friendship or the equation between Daddu-Nikumbh.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveleen12

Thanks! Surely I will continue. I love writing and this time I would like to complete my story lol as on previous forums I had written FFs but never got to finishing them. So I am thinking on doing some OS and TS and also have a few ideas like Azam-Nikumbh's friendship or the equation between Daddu-Nikumbh.

never mind...ab ap yaha likhna suru kar dijiye. baware has so many fascinating characters that u can just pick up one for an os or drabble and write...apart from the lead duo.say the chemistry a grandmother-granddaughter share...a strained,oppressed-oppressor relation yamini's parent's share. the funny,fliry spirit of shazam relationship...the victim of an overambitious father,the fatherly nawabsahab,his indifferend son and nikumbh's own way of mitigating his emptiness...u can even write a drabble series, even i am planning to write one !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks LovetoLaugh and Shreya you surely should write a drabble.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveleen12

Thanks LovetoLaugh and Shreya you surely should write a drabble.

yes i will, loveleen, but pehele aapne jo suru kiya unko aage badhaiye...we r waiting !!😃

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