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"beta seat belt please " Ishita asked Adi as he seated

" stop calling me beta , i am not your beta " he pull the belt & tied it

Ishita ignored & started the car , she drives straight to the shop

shopkeeper look at her " see my husband brought this uniform in morning " she placed the bag on counter ,the keeper look at her & then at the bag

" where is the bill ?" he asked her

" i don't have " Ishita said

" please be quick you are wasting my time " Adi said irritatedly

" leave this one you get a new uniform " Ishita kept it back " Adi you go & select " she asked Adi & walked behind him

The Shopkeeper asked him to try ,

Adi walked in trial room as he walked out Ishita walked ahead she fixed his collar

"Please , i can take care of myself " he pushed away her hand

" you don't have my size ?" Adi shouted

" beta your Papa took right size " he said & look at Ishita

" i know myself better " Adi took other uniform & went to try ,he had same problem with it

" Adi yeh try karo " she passed him the Unifrom which Raman brought

Adi snatched & walked in the trail room , as he wore it , it fit him perfectly "Papa knows my size " he look at himself

"Adi kya huwa " Ishita knocked , he opened the door

" dekha i told you Papa know you the best " she smiled happily , he bang the door & went to change

Ishita started looking around , she checked few shirts

" chala " Adi said from behind

" i need your help " she look at him & said

"my help " he stared at her

" i don't know what is your Papa favourite colour , if you can guide me please " she said him showing black & brown shirt

" Papa likes Blue " he pull out a shirt & passed her

" hmmm " she hides her smile " your papa never takes cares of himself , i am a girl i don't know much about gents clothes " she made sad face & said

" i am sure what i select for him he will love it " he said proudly & taken out few more shirts

" you have great choice , you know your Papa cell was out of order , i & Ruhi went to buy it , we selected a pink cell for him" she asked him ,

"really " he smiled but hide it quickly

" your Papa scold us both , today he will really like it " she said happily

" chala " he avoid eye contact with her

"Adi " Ishita hold his arm ,he irritatedly looked at her , she kneel down & tied his laces

" chora i can do it " he pulled away his foot

" your Papa told me that you can't tie it " she smiled & stands

" Papa told you about me " he in shocked looked at her

" Ya your Papa love to talk about you & i love to listen about you " she paid & walked out , she without looking at him hold his arm & crossed the road, he wanted to object but it was too late

" your Papa daily watch late night cricket " she said & drives , he look out " now days he watch football , i & Ruhi are girls we don't like such games , he feel so lonely while watching he always say Adi hota to we had enjoyed world cup

"aap kitna slow dirve karti ho , i can drive faster than you " he annoyingly said

"you drive" she look at him in shock ,at the same time she received call from hospital

" aik min " she parked car & picked " ji DR , Raman reports are ready " she look at Adi who looked at her

" is there something serious " she asked worriedly ." i will collect it in hour " she said & cut . she finds Adi restless but he didn't had courage to ask her

" your papa dont take care of himself , i forcefully took him for a medical check up, i will drop you & then i will go to collect it " he was looking at her but didn't said a word


They reached home

"This is for you " she passed him the bag

" yeh sab " he look at all the bags

" i bought same shirts for you too both father & son can wear together " she smiled

"i don't need " he was about to throw the bag when a boy ran

"Adi come we are playing cricket an uncle had challenge us if we will bowled him , he will give us treat "

"i don't want to play " Adi said


" Raman " Ishita said as she saw Raman batting Adi turn his head towards other side

Adi was surprised to see Raman batting , "Papa playing cricket " he recollected Bala & his conversation

" give me ball i will bowled him " he snatch the ball & walk ahead

"Adi he is too good , we all have tried " boy said from behind

" i know how to bowled him ?" he walked to the bowling end , Raman eyes became moist , he miss playing with Adi. he got bowled on first ball

"dekha " he said proudly

" only Adi can bowled me " Raman gave him bat

"now you can go ?" he said as he tries to take ball from him , he took a step back

Ishita felt bad for Raman he stand next to the wall watched Adi playing Ishita stand next to him ,"Aap thek hain "she caresses his shoulder ,he shakes his head

Adi was taking run when he fall down , Raman & Ishita both shouted together "Adi dekhe kar " with in no time they reached the spot

"Adi thek ho " Raman panic

"Please leave me " he removed Raman hand & tires to get up

"Adi you are hurt " he tries to check his leg

" i asked you to leave , i am fine , i have learn to stand up by myself " he was hurt but he hides his pain & stands,Ishita stop Raman ask him to get first aid box , Raman look at her he with eyes ask him to trust her & go

"you are as stubborn as your Papa" she hold his arm

" dekha i am asking you to leave" Adi shouted

" oh I see you are scared of injection & medicine like your Papa , that is why you are not letting me check " she smiled took first Adi box from Raman

" i am not " he look at Raman & said

"tou dekhna do i am a dr " she smiled & pointed at the bench, ,he walked to the it & sat

Ishita kneel in front & was checking the wound" give me cotton " she asked Raman was in shock ,he at once passed her , she wiped it "bandage" with eyes she asked him to sit , as he seated " Adi it will hurt a bit " she said

" i am scared " he said ,she applied medicine , he unintentionally hide himself in Raman's arm ,"Papa" ,Raman quickly wrapped his arm around him ,after ages he felt his son close to his heart , tears of joy & pain roll down his eyes , Ishita mesmerised both father & son hug with her moist eyes ,she prayed the time freeze & Raman feel Adi presence as long as it was possible . Raman kissed his head ,he with teary eyes thanks Ishita , she wiped her tears , she held Raman hand with eyes she asked him she was done .he control himself breaking down in front of Adi,

As the pain decreased Adi started freeing himself ,Raman drop his arm helplessly, as he couldn't tolerate him pushing him away

"hogaya " Ishita left Raman's hand & wipe her tears

" thanks you have to go somewhere " Adi without looking at Raman got up look at Ishita & said,Raman stands but he avoided him ,he picked up the bags & walked in the house


" Raman" Ishita held his both hands as he drop back on the bench,she felt him trembling

" in pain he calls me Ishita " he cried ,she has nothing to say to him , sat holding his hands tightly

"Raman you know Adi did shopping for you " she tries to relax him

"really " he became happy

"yes , & he cares for you as much you cares for him " she wiped his tears & nodded







i avoid the car mystery as i am not interested in that



i have a feeling the DR will call about Raman tests when she is with Adi

OMG 4 here & i am typing i can keep on writing 😃 please ignore mistakes đŸ„±

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so cute! I really wanna see Ishita and Adi bonding in the real show, hope it's something like this! Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awnn i loved it !!!
Awnn pooR Raman !!
This adi is soo rude man !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is really nice. Hope we can see something similar in the show too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice... Hopefully Ishu is able to bridge the gap between Adi & Raman like how she did with Ruhi & Raman
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Naddiya if I am not wrong Its OS #32...pls check...
You are a great writer yaar...👏superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your os are mesmerizing
loved it
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Brillient story. I wish it happens in real.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so cute...nice os...loved their bonding...hope u cont wth more soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Naddiya if I am not wrong Its OS #32...pls check...really
You are a writer yaar...👏superb...

really I guess I was very sleep last night I was made mistake 😕

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