short story.Decieving goblin part 2pg 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys and moderators.... I havent finished my earlier ff...so please dont close it. this idea just struck me. I am posting this. hope it isnt offensive.

its a short story ...it wont be very long so please bear with me.

hi friends

I ma back...yes I know after long time. I will eply to all the pm's. Please give me some time. Sheena, ridhi, jaz di, krishna di, rivya keero navs and all my other friends please dont be angry

ok now my post

this is a prologue

The deceiving goblin

He packed his suitcase and headed for the huge mahogany desk..shuffled a few papers and placed it haphazardly in the suitcase. The man in black took long strides towards the main door and exited from his office, a luxurious and spacious room, a room too little a word. Immaculately designed with glass ware and huge and intricate furniture's of Spanish mane, his office was more like a the largest room in white house. Nah not an exaggeration.

It the clear midnight sky one could still see the tingling smile on his well cut face. He lit his cigar and walked stately through the spectacularly designed corridors. His office had only one living creature present ..he himself. The security too was given a holiday. Glad by getting and unexpected holiday the security personals ushered him with flowering thank you's. He was more than glad to receive them.

He walked out of his office main building and seated himself in his new Bugatti. After incessant ringing on his phone he atlast picked it up. "yes ..I am coming don't you worry!! I will take things in my hand from now on. I think you have done your job fairly well. My act starts from now on."

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two questions..lets see your guessing power

Q 1 Who is the person described

Q 2 Who is he talkin to

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good start. The last line full of intrigue, so we want to know who is talking to who?
Edited by divan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this isnt very fair..there is 52 hits and 1 reply
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Posted: 18 years ago
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itz jai talking to some other person
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Posted: 18 years ago
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darling...its great beginning...could be anyone...not sure...
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK, I will venture a reply, but no laughing if I am way off....AD is the guy talking??

Do continue,
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

The black bugatti swiftly made its way through the Mumbai traffic. The man punched a few numbers and waited for the phone to be received. A female answered the phone " Yes sir, they are absolutely well. You need not worry""can you put them on line Mrs Stefens" "yes sir hold on…"

"elloo .."butted in a immature voice. Jumping in joy on finding out who the caller is he shrieked out…"papa".."yes beta ….how is mine son doing today. And are you taking care of your little sister."

"yes papa..but you know she is being a little naughty..not much but little. I told her not have the whole bar of chocys but she wouldn't listen. But don't you worry I will take care of it. I am a big boy now. Am I not.."

"oh my dear you surely are..take your food on the right time…go to bed… I will call you up again…now say a bye to papa"
"bye bye..and you take care too. Can you do a thing for me.."
"sure son.." "please papa take care of the batman.. I think he has not been served his food.. if I am not at home no one takes care of him..will ou do this for me"

"sure son…now go and have you dinner..bye"

He let out a laugh after disconnecting. His 5 year old son has surely learn to speak.
He reached the Walia entrance. The grand hall had seated Rano, Ranveer and Aditya. " Jai I need to tell you something." quibbled Aditya. " Go ahead" .." we won over the contract.."

"Hmm..well done"

He looked towards the door and saw the three women entering. Somehow the resembled the witches in Macbeth. He smirked at his deduction.

He turned around totally unperturbed by the usual shrill voice calling him. He particularly detested the look of this female specially when she pronounced his name in faultily.
He picked up his phone and started punching digits.

"Mr Vollaya .. I am talking to you. You mind to give some attention." "yes pia.. I do mind.." "Mr Vollaya I have made all the arrangements for our wedding. This is going to be grand. Just the way I have had always wanted. Paris decorators, Italian, Mexican, Continental all kinds of food lavishly spread, especially order designer wear from all over the world. And all this for just you and me…"

"yes pia.."still engrossed in his mobile and now shifting his attention to the business magazine.

" Mr Vollaya be ready ok , your kids.."

"pia my love don't worry.."he got up an stood in front of her.

"I always dreamt of such an occasion, so you need not worry. I will be ready. I am particularly thrilled to be a part of this"

Edited by frndsnstrngers - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow g8t beginning 👏

r jai n pia going to marry 😡 😡 🤢

continue soon

ps. one question what was jai's child talking about, someting like take care of batman????? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice start! I'm liking it already!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start dear continue soon
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