|| No need to explain || SANDHIR OS !

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Posted: 11 years ago
#1

"No need to explain"

Sanyukta had won her task and now the Vidhushi's task had to take place the next day..

Randhir ordered everyone to go to their rooms ..

He was applying ice to his lady's burned feet..

S : " Randhir..."

R : " Hmm...? "

S : "Badii ajib baat h na.."

R : " Kya ? Dard ho rha h kya..? "

S : " Ofoo Nai voh baat nahii hai... tum .. The Gr8 Randhir Singh Shekhawat.. rubbin ice.. on a GIRL'S feet .. Male ego hurt nahi hotii.."

R : " Tumhe aese dekhkr kahin aur hurt zaroor hota h ..." he murmerd..

S : " Kya..? Kyun galiyan de rhe ho mujhe man hi man meii.."

R : " Ek toh tumne meri baat nahi maani .. jhansi ki raani chali gayin task krne.. ab chapad chapad kr rhii ho.. Sanyukta tum thakti nahii ho.."

Sanyukta started smiling..

R : " Kyaa..?"

S : " hanso toh dikkat .. Ro toh dikkat.. chahte kya ho...? "

R : " Hanso Hanso.. pr mere upar nahii.. mere saath " .. he made a puppy face.. he didn't realise what he meant..

S : " Koi kese hase tmhare saath.. tum toh apne aap ke sath bhi nahi haste .." She looked deep down in his eyes..

R : " Hasta huun.. jese tmhre parth ne aaj mar pit ke vh task kia.. uspr hasta huun.."

S : " Haan uspr hanste ho na.. Apne aap ke sath nahi hanste ho...Kisse darte ho Randhir.. baaki sbse ya apne aap se ..? "

He looked down and said , ' mujhe yeh sab typical batain nahi samajh aati hain..."

S : " Samajh aati nahi yeh baat nahi h.. samajhna chahte nahii ho.."

R : " Acha thik h ho gaya tmhara gyaan.. lg rha h parth se baat nhi ho rhi toh bhoot agaya haii uska tm meii.." ab chalo..

She tried to walk but it pained..

And her pain reflected on randhir's face..

In one go he picked her up..

S : "Kya kr rhe ho..?"

R : " Bodybuilding ! " He made a face..

S : " I can walk .."

R : " Ya you can walk.. as soon as your feet are healed.."

S : " Uff ! Yeh MCP .. Kbhi samajh nahi ayega mujhe.."she muttered..

And Randhir smiled the way she made faces.. It seemed cute to him...

They were in the corridor when the LITS boys saw them..

D: " Yeh dekho.. bas yahi kr skta haii yeh.. ladki ki seva.." he smirked saying so..

R : " Aur tu bhii bas yahi kr skta haii.. competition haarke .. aur kuch kaam toh aata nahii hai.. apni behen ke sath bhi aesa hi behave krte ho na... Fatttuu.."

And he walked away meanwhile the boys hung their heads in shame..

Sanyukta kept glaring at randhirr..

" Aese na dekho .. pyaar ho jayega .." He smirked..

" I am not scared of that .." she smiled ..

And he turned his face away..

He was shy ! ..

" Kyuun krte ho yeh sab..? Kyun acting krte ho itnii..

Engineer bn na haii ya sharukh khan...? Vese you are no less than him I must say.."

" Bas kro agarwal.. chodh dunga tmhe tmhare room tak bina buttering kre.."

" Voh toh mujhe pata haii.. mere na chahte hue bhii you won't leave me..."

" bas kro.. Mujhse nahii hoga maii abhi bhi keh rha huun..I am warning you agarwal stay away.."

He looked away..

They knew they loved..

They knew dey cared..

They knew that each of them knew this..

But still here someone was scared..

" Mai give up nahii krti kabhii bhi.. I won't give up on you either.. "

" Mai nahi krta tmse pyaar.."

Maine kab kaha mujhse pyaar krte ho tm ? "..she laughed..

He was going to say something when they reached her dorm..

She got down and put her hand on his mouth...

" No need to explain.. I can read you like an open book.."

She pecked his cheek and said " Good night Love ! <3 "

And she ran away.. !

And his heart skiped a beat ! :D <3

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Sheron18rockerz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Plz change ka colour

Apart of colour prob the os is damn good..!!
swarontruelove thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Resss!!!!!!!
Moi second??? yay!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Unres!
Ok now gear up!!! u R in for a long review by me!๐Ÿ˜‰
First lets start with first thngs!
I have read a lot of your os in Sandhir Cafe! and yeah i do love them.and now i see u on IF too?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
AH welcome welcome Yashi? is that your name?
Ok on fb i m unable to comment because of my stupid phone but as u posted this on IF i can finallly Comment!!!! yay!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†
I loveee your title!!!!!!!!!!!
Its superb nd thought so well!
Mostly i have seen titles but its not connected to the os but u have portrayed the connectivity nd i love it!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Randhir applying ice on Sanyu's feet?????? Awww!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
And then i loved their convo on how randhir doesnt laugh.
THought provoking it was.
sanyu truly said he doesnt laugh with himself so how can she laugh with him?
Ah Jhansi Ki Rani??/ DOnt i love that nickname (not better than farzi engineer though๐Ÿ˜›)
And then when randhir picked her up nd sanyu asked what he was nd he was like bodybuilding! that was hilarious!!!!!!!๐Ÿคฃ
And then he carrying her nd them gazing beautifully at each other?
*drifts off imagining the scene* *Keeps smiling idiotically like a jerk imagining randhir carrying sanyu**Screensaver appears* ๐Ÿ˜ฒ*jolts out of the dream*๐Ÿ˜† *comes back to the comment*
And then randhir out of the blue saying sanyu not to watch him like that otherwise he will fall for her!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ that was unexpected man! but ah!!!! he said THAT!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
doesnt he realise he is already fallen for her? nd fallen hard?
And finally sanyu telling him to remove his facade nd show the world the actual randhir.
but he is randhir! he is insecure! nd it isnt his fault to be that!
BUt i m sure sanyu, as u mentioned in the os, will never give up!๐Ÿ˜Š
and thats what Sandhir is all about!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Commendable job done with the style of writing nd penning your thoughts!๐Ÿ‘
And i loved the concept totally!
Keep writing nd do pm me when u write more!๐Ÿ˜†
Love
Shreya (Well thats my name, if it isnt obvious๐Ÿ˜†)
Edited by swarontruelove - 11 years ago
DoubleH thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Dude, this was so cute ^_^
Loved it thoroughly! <3


+The text colour is kinda too light coz of which the words aint prperly visible >.>
SexySince1999 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
wow...
ossum os...
it was so cutee...
loved it alot...
keep writing more...
love anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
wow superb lovely cute os
loved it
keep writtingg ...dear :))
lovd
anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Unresed above! do check!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: swarontruelove

Resss!!!!!!!

Moi second??? yay!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Unres!
Ok now gear up!!! u R in for a long review by me!๐Ÿ˜‰
First lets start with first thngs!
I have read a lot of your os in Sandhir Cafe! and yeah i do love them.and now i see u on IF too?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
AH welcome welcome Yashi? is that your name?
Ok on fb i m unable to comment because of my stupid phone but as u posted this on IF i can finallly Comment!!!! yay!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜†
I loveee your title!!!!!!!!!!!
Its superb nd thought so well!
Mostly i have seen titles but its not connected to the os but u have portrayed the connectivity nd i love it!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Randhir applying ice on Sanyu's feet?????? Awww!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
And then i loved their convo on how randhir doesnt laugh.
THought provoking it was.
sanyu truly said he doesnt laugh with himself so how can she laugh with him?
Ah Jhansi Ki Rani??/ DOnt i love that nickname (not better than farzi engineer though๐Ÿ˜›)
And then when randhir picked her up nd sanyu asked what he was nd he was like bodybuilding! that was hilarious!!!!!!!๐Ÿคฃ
And then he carrying her nd them gazing beautifully at each other?
*drifts off imagining the scene* *Keeps smiling idiotically like a jerk imagining randhir carrying sanyu**Screensaver appears* ๐Ÿ˜ฒ*jolts out of the dream*๐Ÿ˜† *comes back to the comment*
And then randhir out of the blue saying sanyu not to watch him like that otherwise he will fall for her!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ that was unexpected man! but ah!!!! he said THAT!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
doesnt he realise he is already fallen for her? nd fallen hard?
And finally sanyu telling him to remove his facade nd show the world the actual randhir.
but he is randhir! he is insecure! nd it isnt his fault to be that!
BUt i m sure sanyu, as u mentioned in the os, will never give up!๐Ÿ˜Š
and thats what Sandhir is all about!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Commendable job done with the style of writing nd penning your thoughts!๐Ÿ‘
And i loved the concept totally!
Keep writing nd do pm me when u write more!๐Ÿ˜†
Love
Shreya (Well thats my name, if it isnt obvious๐Ÿ˜†)


I actuallie Dont EVER reply to reviews on IF But well dis .. I had tooo :P Hii shreya ! thnks fr d wlcomee ! Yaa I strtd writing recentlyy and I REALLY AM Amazed at such an amazin response !
Thankyou SO SO SO MUCH !! For this long replyy .. <3 Means alottt.. ALOTT..<3
amulbaby06 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
yaar dats so cute... keep writing loved it dear...
sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Nice one dear
really loved it
keep writing plz

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