~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed' - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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luvd d whole series...
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koi hai kya meri madad karo... isko jara pareshan karo... maine bahut bar bola par likh nai rahi hai update..
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Sorry I'm late..
but uh write amazingly... <3

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Plz update sooon..
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Chapter 5- Happiness or sorrows

She has to go, but where? course her love. She needs to make him understand why she did this. She will tolerate his aggression but now she needs to talk with him, else she can't communicate with him after today. She has now guessed the storm is heading towards their life. She knows Love makes Life but after today her life will be love less.

She followed him till the car, he sits inside and she too takes the passenger seat, he looked her, his anger is clearly visible in his eyes. But the pain he went can only seen by her. After all he is her soul. And she knows his inner as well as outer side. He is like a coconut, soft from inside and tough from outside.

"Drive" she said, looking straight, not meeting his eyes. His red and teary eyes said her everything he is going through.

"I didn't asked you to come"

"But I wanted to...now drive or else I will take that seat"

"No need of that... I can" he said driving the car in a high speed.

The car's speed was increasing rapidly, but he as a stubborn gave a deaf ear to her voice, he is hell angry on her. It didn't made him angry when his bff concealed the truth but she should have told her, he trust her more than himself, but she broke it. She broke it.

"Rey stop" she screams

"Why? Why? Did you do this to me? Why?" he was about to hit a car but balanced it.

"Rey...for god sake just stop the car"

Sharon was hell worried about Kriya. She indeed allowed her to go to Rey but is scared about her bff reactions. Mean time Swayam came to her.

"Sharon"

"Yes"

"Sharon... at least let me speak...about why I did it?"

"What will you speak Swayam?" she pulled his collar.

She hadn't expected from him. He was about to slap her sis and she did a mistake telling him the truth about them as sisters. She now feels of doing the biggest mistake of her life.

"Why? Why the hell you slapped her?"

"Sharon... it's only because I wanted to know the truth"

"But... you knew it right?"

Yes, he know the truth but he wanted to know the reason that why they hide of being sisters from them. Though, he knows about Kriyaansh, but, what reason cause them to hide a big truth. At least he had told his bff about him and Sharon but she didn't give a chance to trust him. Not at least him. But Rey wasn't he too capable of being trust according to her.

"Yes... but I want to know the whole truth Sharon...the whole truth" he said

She didn't told him, as the whole truth only is with Kriya and she had told her, the truth will never be disclose, till Kriya is alive, and if any day she feels herself to be alone than she can read Kriya's diary, where she would get her every question's answer. She thought many a time to read the diary, but Kriya had kept it on a secret place that she never finds it out.

"I-I don't have the answer Swayam" she helplessly speak.

"What do you mean?"

"Answer is with Kriya only"

Both sighed. And decided to wait for Kriya, and they will ask her the whole truth.

He stopped it in a jerk, in a nearby park. He came out and also pulls her out, and drags her inside the park. She didn't ask anything. He made her sit in a bench and he too sit next to her.

"Now split out... what the need to do that? Why did you hide it from me?"

"Rey... I was necessary" she sighed.

"Necessary... oh common ...get some guts to say" he burst out.

She looked him, still the pain was visible, and she can't see him like this. he saw her and when his eyes meet with hers, he almost forgot about the world, they were telling him, how much she love him, how much she care for him, and if she hide it then must be for his sake only.

"Rey... I...I...I" she sobbed.

In a instance he pulled her and kissed her lips beyond limits. She didn't responded, she was like a statue, and this time she needs this. He tried to play with her tongue, but she didn't responded. He pulled back and sees her sobbing. He wondered the cause and asked her but she didn't spoke.

"What's the matter Kriya?"

She didn't respond and walks away. He followed her.

"Kriya...wait... I know why you are leaving... I forgive you"

She stops and turns. He blinks in a yes. But she again walks away, and the next moment he saw her love hit by a car and was lying on the road, blood oozing out from her head. His soul went away, he was blank already, the crowd has arrived but he was rooted at his place. He hadn't thought the sudden change in life.

"Kriya..." He screams after getting his sense. He rushed to her and sits keeping her head on his lap.

"Kriya...open your eyes... see I am here... you are gone to be fine... Don't worry..."

He asked a person from the crowd to call ambulance and it arrived. He took her to the hospital. Doctor told him that they need to operate her. He signed the formality paper and the doctors started the operation. He informed his parents and her parents. Swaron and the gang came to the hospital. As now the truth is known to all, girls kept assuring a crying Sharon.

Swayam sees Rey, in a state of shock, he was not at all bothered of his surroundings, and he was like a body without soul. Swayam thought to go to him, but stopped. After a lot thinking he thought to keep the enmity aside and proceed to Rey.

He sits near Rey and kept his hand on his shoulder. And to his surprise Rey hugged him immediately. He caresses his back and assured him not to worry.


"Rey... stop crying... kuch nahi hoga use... she will be fine"

"It's all because of me... only me" he sobbed

"No... don't blame yourself" he cupped his face. "May its destiny... and we can't do anything"

"But Swayam... how will I... she will be alright naa? Tell naa... please... tell she will be fine"

"Yes Rey... she will be fine... don't worry" he said pulling him in a hug.

Reyam parents and Krisha's parents were watching and were feeling glad, how they both connect each other. May be their blood relation connect them. Though they hate each other a lot but the inner connection they have, no one could deny it.

Doctor came out and told her condition is so critical, they may or may not save her life, she is not responding at all, as if she wants to die, doctor told them, if she will not respond then they can't do anything, she must cooperate them but she is not responding at all. Rey pulled doctor's collar and burst out at him, but Swayam pulled him and said sorry to the doctor, the doctor left.

"Rey... control yourself... you shouldn't have hold his collar"

"But... Swayam...didn't you heard; he told he can't save my love. How could he?"

"Rey... lets pray for her... I am sure she will be back to us." Sharon tried to console him. But it fails; he was more aggressive then before now.

Weeks passed but she didn't responded. Kriya's condition made him like a aggressive, possessive or obsessive lover now. He didn't allow any one to see her except the doctor. Not even Swayam or Sharon. Neither his nor her friends. Everyone worried about his behave, once they called a doctor for his mental check up but the doctor told everything is fine. His aggression and obsession was increasing day by day, no one could handle him anymore. He spend entire day talking with her, loving her, trying hard so that she could speak up. But he gets only disappointment.

It's now one month and all became busy with their works except the two love birds, he is still waiting for her to wake up and she is not responding him. In between this one month Reyam's bonding get much stronger. Sharon tried to finds out Kriya's diary but failed. She thought her sis is really clever in this matter and chuckles when a tear of drop escape from her eyes.

She is really missing Kriya, she is the one with whom she spend her daily routine. And her loneliness increases more when Rey didn't allowed her to see Kriya. She curses him for some time and then calms herself understanding he too loves her. Sharon has a belief that only Rey could get Kriya back in their life, so she never protested him.

Swayam too is missing his bff, he sits in the college alone, Kriya and he used to eat their lunch together but since last one month he is all alone eating, not exactly eating, just seeing the food and remembers Kriya and close the lunch box and left the canteen. He madly wanted to see her, but as he know Rey's obsession he never tried to. He gets happy only after looking her picture with him.

Since Kriyaansh aren't in the college but the Dazzlers and Sizzlers fight started again after Shivam's entry. Shivam Singhania, Reyaansh Singhania's brother, who took his place and in place of Kriya, Archana, one of her friend took. The gang was forced to fight, and swaron didn't interfere in it, they were busy in their own lives and used to go to the hospital to take care of Kriyaansh.

Ok so today this much only. How is it? Do like and comments. I know a short little.

Love

Aish

23/6/14

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

NOTE

I was going to finish this. but thought why not i make this a drabble series and now here it is.As this story i have only the short updates. so now on wards it will be short.

I will update twice in a week. hope you guys supports me.

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
OMG such a big twist..

well i knew nd swayam nd rey will go to thier loves..

but i didnt expected Kriya's accident all of the sudden..

but i loved the way u portrayed the emotion of love, sisterhood nd friendship..

aacha now i dont have much time for big comment so is kaam chala nah..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
beautiful update
can't believe that kria is not talking
can't wait to see what happens next
please update soon
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amazing update
update next part soon
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luvd d update...
awesom...
hope kriya gets well soon... 😛

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