RaYa OS-Raining Love - Page 3

Originally posted by: sneaky-aj

Hey, Loved the story..it has been beautifully written. I could just imagine all these delicate scenes

But a word of advice: Glare means to stare in an angry way...so just alerting u that the use of this word is wrong in this story...u could say stared...but definitely not glared lol😊

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

Hello there :)

thank you glad you loved the story😃

thanks for the point you made I actually don't know how I wrote glared instead of stared lol *laughing at myself here*😆

also I wrote this story and quickly posted it without going over spelling check or grammar adding to that it was 2:00 a.m. so I won't be surprised if there are other mistakes.

thanks for pointing it out will replace the word right now😳

Originally posted by: sneaky-aj

i know right! I mean the rest of the story was written so nicely and then this word made me laugh so much! I knew u couldnt have done it knowingly lol😆 or there would definitely have been more mistakes😳

I mean...just imagine Raahat glaring at Haya for looking beautiful😆 I couldnt stop laughing! But definitely a hilarious twist to a great story😎

All's well that ends well😉

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

Thanks to you😳

I have a bad habit of not proofreading or reading my work again. I know I know Such a bad habit but I'm so lazy what can I do lol

OMG I just imagined that LOL

like how dare you look this beautiful Haya

don't you know you're affecting my innocent hormones🤣

thank you again hun

loved your presence 😳

cheers!

Hey this was a great OS for RaYa. Im sorry I have not been commenting recently as have been really busy with exams. In fact just saw this OS now, need to catch up on all the reading on this forum lol. I am totally loving RAYA story in qubool hai so this OS was a treat to read so thank you so much for such a beautiful story. Hope to read more soon!!!!

Originally posted by: nawshi

Hey this was a great OS for RaYa. Im sorry I have not been commenting recently as have been really busy with exams. In fact just saw this OS now, need to catch up on all the reading on this forum lol. I am totally loving RAYA story in qubool hai so this OS was a treat to read so thank you so much for such a beautiful story. Hope to read more soon!!!!

Have you wrote any other stories on this forum, would love to read them as this is the first one i have read of RaYa, pls let me know

Beautiful... I'm in my dreamland. Rahat keeping the anklet reminded me of Asad keeping Zoya's earring. Good job!👍🏼

Originally posted by: Cindrella3

Beautiful... I'm in my dreamland. Rahat keeping the anklet reminded me of Asad keeping Zoya's earring. Good job!👍🏼

Originally posted by: karanasya

Nice one liked it.