A Very Short Love Story

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sorry guys ,i am writting for the first time in my life I hope u will like it plz tell me how it is. jalal nd jodha had a fight on their relationship,so they both thought to meet tommorow in park to take a discussion on their relationship. The day arived,jodha got ready to go nd met jalal nd to talk about their relation. jodha just prayed in her mind that everything goes good. nd she left for the park on the another hand jalal was planing a big thing . jodha reached park on time nd was waiting for jalal to come but has usally he was late ,jodha was boiling in anger has if she is going to kill him . she sat on the beanch waiting to come . after half'n hour jalal came he saw jodha sitting on the beanch. full of anger nd then ,he said in a load vioce jodha do u love me? jodha looked backwards in anger, nd she said who r u nd why r u talking to me? jalal again asked do u love me? she said no then jalal said th jodha i am asking u for the last time do u love me or not? jodha in full anger said , once i said no means no do u understand or what? ok then said jalal to jodha in a clam voice nd said ,i was just confirming actully ur friend just asked me to go out on a date. jodha got shocked that was she hearing has if some one has break her heart thousand time by saying these words . jalal noticed her face expression chaning nd he said to jodha that lets move on jodha , she was shocked by this jalal said bye to jodha nd turn away jodha in loud voice said jalal wait don't go plz then jalal asked y jodha ? we r move on. jodha with broken heart said I Love U jalal i love u more than anything in my life ,i love u so much u stupid[nd she started crying] jalal plz don't live me nd go plz jalal was shocked what to say then he took a long breath nd said jodha plz, don't cry plz i was just kidding baby , I Love u too then he hugged here nd kissed on her forehead. nd said sorry jodha i had to do it , nd he went on his knees nd , he said to jodha Johda Rajput Will U Marry Me nd showed her ring which he had brought for her jodha was shocked that she was hearing was true or dream jodha with a loud voice siad Mr Jalaluddin Muhammad I Will Marry Stupid nd then jalal put the ring in jodha's figner nd the both hugged THE END I hope u all liked nd sorry for any misket in spelling plz comment or hit the like button😊😊😛

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marshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaat short but u should write more
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sorry couldn't writ more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww...so sweet...very cute...write more darling...it is really a very very sweet OS.keep it up jaan...👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti22

aww...so sweet...very cute...write more darling...it is really a very very sweet OS.keep it up jaan...👏👏👏

Thanks a lot I'll try next time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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short nd cute story...sry luv story
👏👏seriously awesome dear...👏👏
i really liked it a lot🤗
next time i want a longer os😆
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Originally posted by: aisha...11110

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#0000ff">short nd cute story</font>...sry <font color="#ff0000">luv</font> story</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">👏👏seriously awesome dear...👏👏</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">i really liked it a lot🤗</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#6600ff">next time i want a longer os😆</font>

thank u so much next time I will try to give long one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pretty adorable...😳😳...write more dear!!! would like to read it!!😉😉
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u loved I happy
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Originally posted by: J2lover

pretty adorable...😳😳...write more dear!!! would like to read it!!😉😉

thanks alot

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