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Posted: 18 years ago
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I once heard a story straight from the heart
About a girl and how her world began to fall apart
It all started when she met the boy that made her life complete
Just thinking of him made her heart skip a beat
They were the couple everyone wanted to be
There were no imperfections as either one could see
As the weeks passed they fell more in love and were less aware
Of how often life turns out to be unfair
Until one day she finally gave in
She realized there was no way she could win
She said I'm sorry but i have to let you go
As he reached for her hand she pulled away whispering no
When she turned around a tear slid down her cheek
He just stood there speechless, forgetting how to speak
The next few days were the hardest at home
She truly felt she was all alone
Her mom pushed in her face how she had won
Her dad said "i knew he was just another one"
Her sister said "come on you'll be ok"
And her brother just tried to stay away
At Radio City it was like her friends weren't even there
None of them seemed to really care
Her life had no more color, just black and white
Even getting out of bed turned into a fight
Despite their tries things just weren't like before
Then he decided "i don't wanna try anymore"
At that she tried to cut him out
But the more she ignored him the more her feelings began to shout
When she saw him that day she could no longer just walk by
And before she knew it her mouth opened up and out came "hi"
He looked up and said "so now we're talking?"
She just smiled and join his walking
Everyday they talked a little more
And everyday she began to like him a little less then before
As the months passed by she became more and more aware
About how its ok life's unfair
Because eventually everything becomes your past
But your memories will always last
And with that i hope you see
Not all love is meant to be
But hold on and don't give in
Stand tall, hold up your chin
And believe me when i say
The right one will come one day(dev)
He'll open your eyes to things you couldn't ever see
I know this because..this is a story all about me...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzag

great lines .. 👏

thanx buddy😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow diya good lines and the way you have written it is really cute 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Did you write this??

Its awesome!! 👏

the way everything rhymes...wow!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow Diya, your so creative! 👏 😳
I love the way the poem just flows so beautfully. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gr8 lines widya.......... 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very good poetry, Diya. 👏 you should send it to the shreya people.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey beautiful poem...great job...keep writing
sammy 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Diya, WOW! That was wonderful - so sweet! Two beautiful poems from you in two days! Kya baat hai! 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow 👏 yur soooooo creative itss so cute 😳

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