THE LAST LETTER( sandhir OS ) SHORT POEM updated pg-5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N: Hi guys. I am Rakhi. Though i am new as a member, i am following this forum from a long time and have read many of your stories...inspired by u all i am writing something of my own...i know its a crap but please do read and comment as its on our fav couple RANDHIR and SANYUKTA!!!!And guys plz ignore my mistakes as its my first...so here we go...


THE LAST LETTER

"ishq mehr hai rab ki,

ishq raza hai sabki,

ishq dua hai labki,yara...

ishq likha hai sabne,

ishq para hai sabne,

ishq kiya hai sabne,yara..."

"Some love stories remain incomplete as god doesn't give endings to all his creations, some are meant to be incomplete..." --me

My dear hubby,

Randhir, i have never written any love letter in my whole life and this is also not something like that but this is the last expression of my feelings for you. You know Randhir' i have always respected love but never believed in the word "soulmate".I always thought true love never exists in reality because reality is always harsh. It is Randhir! See my condition! But i was somewhat proved wrong when i was 20 years old completing my mechanical and a boy named RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT stepped into my life.

You know what , i never thought a sincere and practical girl like me could fall for a guy like you. But i think it was harder in your case. Who knew the richest, most handsome, arrogant,egoistic boy and ofourse the topper of our batch,on whom every girl of our college had their eyes on ,would fall for me, Sanyukta Aggarwal,who had nothing except her brains( i was second ranker...bhul to nahin gaye).But you fell( it was your bad luck Randhir, if you hadn't fell, you wouldn't have to go through the pain you are suffering now...) badly ,madly and ofcourse deeply .

You changed my life,Randhir. You changed my view towards life,towards love, beauty, everything. Pata hai, Randhir, the day when you proposed me infront of the whole college, keeping everyone dumbstruck, sill feels like that it was yesterday only when a boy wearing a black blazer over a white shirt, whose first three open buttons were showing his well-built muscular chest, was kneeling before a girl clad in deep blue chiffon saree in their college fest. I can forget your birthday ,our anniversary, everything but I can never forget that day because it was the day when my life changed.

Maine kabhi bataya nehi Randhir, but I felt very special each time when you looked at me with that with that much affection and care, whenever you took my name with that much love, whenever you taunted me stopping me from making mistakes, whenever you took my hand in yours and assured, "mai hu na". They have always made me feel very special , be it your words or actions or your very presence in my life.

Two years back when I got that bloody report saying that i had leukemia , I was broken, not because I was going to die but at the very thought of leaving you. I died a thousand deaths when I realized that you would be shattered by this news. Randhir, do you remember my foolish tries to keep you away from me? Those harsh words which I told you still prick my heart. God only knows how i said those to the love of my liife. But I badly wanted you to leave my life so that you could be saved from the pain you got by loving me (see I failed).

Lekin tab mai ek bat bhul hi gayi thi that RANDHIR SHEKHAWAT is the most stubborn person in this world. Do you still remember how you found about my report by stealing into my hostel room, then searching my cupboard for finding something unusual which could give you the reason behind my weird behavior and you found my cancer report? I still remember how you dragged me to college terrace and hugged me tight. I can still remember how we cried that whole night, my tears wetting your shirt and yours my dress. You were crying like a baby who was losing his fav toy. But yes, he was and is losing his fav toy. Randhir.

I spent the most beautiful two years of my life with you being your wife, your ladylove. You always told me that you will make everything right and I trusted you but god has never been so merciful on anyone, Randhir and so he is taking me away from you and you have to accept it.

Randhir, I am leaving and when you would get this letter, I would have already left. I know you will again see the nightmare which you saw yesterday and you will be shouting my name in sleep but then I will be no more to pat your head.

But I believe that you will soon dream about the beautiful moments which we had spent together. Randhir, I want you to fulfill my one wish, say my last. Please move on, Randhir. I know it will be very difficult for you but I also know that my Randhir is the strongest person of this world. I will always remain in your heart but please give a second chance to your life. You are only 25, Randhir and you have your whole life ahead of you. I don't want my Randhir to spend his whole life with my memories. Please Randhir, fulfill my last wish and stay happy always and remember one thing from today...



"I will smile through your smile,

I will see through your eyes,

I will taste through your tongue,

And I will feel through your touch"

From

Yours forever

Jaan💔


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LAST PART-- Pg 3😊

Poem-- Pg 5😊

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EscaticFantasy- thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Heyya Rakhi!!!
I'm also a new member here... Nice to meet ya...

Speaking of your OS, it is splendid and amazing..
From the heart warming beginning to the heart wrenching ending, everything is awesome.
Sanyukta's emotions are so beautifully penned down with sheer precision. Her predicament, her agony is so well depicted.
I really feel bad for SanDhir... Why do you have to bring this sadistic edge girl?
The write up was flawless and was enticing..
Would love to read more of your stories..

Regards
Aparna..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rekha!
This is your first post? WOW! This sheer beauty. <3
I love this. This so very heartbreakingly beautiful. :')
Shook me up from inside. :)
Write more and mind PM-ing me on update? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dont do such stuffs again, i'm very sensitive person...it made me cry..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww u made me wail😭
but it was a beautiful os...
do write more...
bt wd happy ending nxt time...
love.shreyasi😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!
IT WAS FANTASTIC AND TOUCHING OS...
i even cried a bit...
but i loved it...
such an amazing os...
these lines touched my heart

"ishq mehr hai rab ki,

ishq raza hai sabki,

ishq dua hai labki,yara...

ishq likha hai sabne,

ishq para hai sabne,

ishq kiya hai sabne,yara..."


"I will smile through your smile,

I will see through your eyes,

I will taste through your tongue,

And I will feel through your touch"


keep writing more...*_*
LOVE ANU


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey rekha it was ur first post unbelievable yar such a heart touching update u make me cry :(((( d way u described d story n their emotions was superb keep writing dear :))) n finally welcome to sh forum
love
anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful one..😳 😊
welcome to the forums..😊
and keep writing more and more..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: EscaticFantasy-

Heyya Rakhi!!!

I'm also a new member here... Nice to meet ya...

Speaking of your OS, it is splendid and amazing..
From the heart warming beginning to the heart wrenching ending, everything is awesome.
Sanyukta's emotions are so beautifully penned down with sheer precision. Her predicament, her agony is so well depicted.
I really feel bad for SanDhir... Why do you have to bring this sadistic edge girl?
The write up was flawless and was enticing..
Would love to read more of your stories..

Regards
Aparna..

THANKS A LOT
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Rekha!
This is your first post? WOW! This sheer beauty. <3

I love this. This so very heartbreakingly beautiful. :')
Shook me up from inside. :)
Write more and mind PM-ing me on update? :D

I don't know the pm thing and thanks dear

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