[[FF]]~Kahin Pyar Na Hojaye.... UPD!-pg4

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I know I know... Another FF! We have like almost 10 now? Something like that... And I still have to finish Koi Tumsa Nahin! I'm in such a writer's block for that one so I started writing something that was on my mind for a while. Of course I used BMTD characters! It's based on a true story, so hopefully it will be a bit more fast paced than the other as the other was original...

So the story is basically from Vidya's POV (I stole the idea from you Meera! Chowwy!😳). It's about Vidya who is basically a tomboy. She really wants to be a counselor at a summer camp where she used to go to. Her mother finally lets her go this summer. She thinks it's going to be a totally normal summer, but of course, it isn't! It was going to be normal, till she met Sagar.

Haha, I just realized it's my first SV fanfic😆

Okay, so here's a small taste! tell if you guys like, then I will post the first part!


This is my story. My love story. I don't want to sound all filmy but I really did fall in love. My story started at the beginning of summer, not too long ago…

I love my mum. Well I know I love her love her, but right now, I really love her! She's letting me counsel! It took me a while to explain to her that I wouldn't be in any mortal danger and that it's just for 6 weeks and just because it's for girls and boys, doesn't mean my reputation will be smeared. It took a lot to convince her, but in the end, it all paid off!

Then I realized how much packing I had to do. I ran up to my room, taking two steps at a time, and opened my closet door. I'm such a slob! I had clothes on the bed, in a corner on the floor, and probably plenty more in the bathroom. I closed my eyes and wished my clothes packed. I opened them again. Nope, it didn't work. Just then, the door opened.

"You were leaving and you didn't think to even tell me?" he said. I spun around and smiled inspite of myself. I was supposed to be in a fight with him, again, and we weren't supposed to be talking, again, and we were going to make up soon, again.

"Tushar!"


Like it? Please comment! BTW, I can't think of a title, suggestions welcome!


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww darling it simply gr8 yaar...it sounds sooo interesting 👏 oh hoh our gaurie actually felt in love 😉 kya baat hai!cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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am da very first to reply 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haha thank you Aditi! Yay you're first! 😃 You like it? That's good... It's not a very good beginning I don't think... I didn't really fall in love, at least I wouldn't call it that 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No one else to comment?? 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No one else to comment?? 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys, I'm about to cry! No one to comment?? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gaurie!!! I love it...and don't worry about stealing my idea....It's no big deal! 😳 😳

I like the story idea....it's really cute!! Please do continue soon!!! 😳

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Finally! I have 2 commenters!! I'm glad you don't mind Meera! I was kinda worried 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No need to be worried....lol...don't worry, Im sure people just missed the new ff... 😳

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