Salvage- A poem

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dedicated to SaHil...

DO NOT COPY, STEAL OR USE THIS PIECE OF WORK WITHOUT PERMISSION.

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~~Salvage~~

Amidst the Beast's counterfeit

Lays his benevolent heart

Untouched my warmth

Waiting to be clench with love.

Soulful heart, beautiful soul

The Angel smiles, waiting for love to happen

But when destiny leads her to darkness

She has to choose death.

He saw her, hearts beat faster

Curious at the angel he found in hell

All against his ethics,guilt-ridden

He found solace in her.

Closing in spaces, fatal attractions flittered

Hate to lust, lust to truth and more he found

His thatched hearts were mended with concrete

Concretes made of love, by her.

The scenarios changed, the inferno washed away

The curse was lifted by her

But the angel behind the happiness caught the fire

And was bound to get death.

The panic stricken Beast transformed into

The Angel's savior, her knight in armor

She instantly recognized the emotions she had wished

As he kissed away all her pain.

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Hey, I wrote that in like 10 mins max😆

Tell me how it was...The Angel aka Sanam and The Beast aka Ahil!

Ciao!

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Diya Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ooommgg!!!

Its amazingly beautiful🤗

From now I a fan of your writing

Its really really nice.

I totally loved it❤️

I have a request for you if you can than plz plz write a poem for asya/kabhi.

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sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written
Wow just loved it
Wanna hear from you 😊

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Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

I don't like SaHil but I loved this poem.❤️

You're talented :)

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh my god! All those comments mean the world to me! I'm so happy, thank you guys!🤗

Of course I'll write something on AsYa/KaBhi

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever
Ooommgg!!!
Its amazingly beautiful🤗
From now I a fan of your writing
Its really really nice.
I totally loved it❤️

I have a request for you if you can than plz plz write a poem for asya/kabhi.

Thank you sooo much!that really means a lot to me!

A poem on Asya/KaBhi,Of course! 😳

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Diya Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 713_Sparkles

Thank you sooo much!that really means a lot to me!

A poem on Asya/KaBhi,Of course! 😳

your welcome dear😛

And thank you so much and whenever you write poem on asya/kabhi can you tell me.

And best of luck.

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever
your welcome dear😛
And thank you so much and whenever you write poem on asya/kabhi can you tell me.
And best of luck.

Sure, I'll PM you 😃

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fatal attractions flittered.

This part.

Wow wow wow.

Oh my.

Closing in spaces, fatal attractions flittered. (filtered?/flattered?/ fluttered?)

Amazing you are.

So in depth.

I have an interpretation!

She's an angel yes...but upon death, she's the inferno too (coz she caught the fire, as he found solace)! Him a beast, yes, he's the fallen too. And then ultimately the one that needed saving does the saving-he saved his angel. And all that burning...

All that fire. All that passion. A d I'm brought to just one thought.

Junoon.

You just gave us a masterpiece.

This beats anything I've read on the forum.

A lil too far? Heee!

Mwahhh!

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713_Sparkles

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Fatal attractions flittered.

This part.

Wow wow wow.

Oh my.

Closing in spaces, fatal attractions flittered. (filtered?/flattered?/ fluttered?)

Amazing you are.

So in depth.

I have an interpretation!

She's an angel yes...but upon death, she's the inferno too (coz she caught the fire, as he found solace)! Him a beast, yes, he's the fallen too. And then ultimately the one that needed saving does the saving-he saved his angel. And all that burning...

All that fire. All that passion. A d I'm brought to just one thought.

Junoon.

You just gave us a masterpiece.

This beats anything I've read on the forum.

A lil too far? Heee!

Mwahhh!

Im out of the world😆 Seriously, thanks ALOT, im really flattered!

Your interpretations are correct! The angel waited for love but destiny made her chose death(she's a fallen angel). Then the Beast, he's too fallen. Then the inferno get washed away by the angel because she perceives that she could spread happiness in hell too. And amongst that, the angel catches fire. the beast was the one who needed help but he turned out to be her savoir.

And flittered...damn,😆 I took forever to remember!

Thanks Farz! It really means alot to me. Muahh!!😳

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