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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow tis is wonderfull...

beautifull...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is such an emotionally beautiful OS.

So descriptive and intense and in depth it is...you're truly very talented in capturing the emotions behind the scene.

So heartfelt and expressive!

Truly one of your best!

Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful piece of work!

Mwah!

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Dear,

I have no proper words to describe how Beautiful this os was. I Loved it!! You really are a good writer. This one was superb. The way Asad portrayed his feelings was just too good, his pain & yearning for Zoe was so evident & heart breaking.

Please continue this & give it a happy end. Can you, please??

Love..

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful...!!

Loved it...!

Simply loved it...!!!

Just awesome...!

Write more.. and soon...!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey, that was gorgeous! Super-sad, but really nice. <3

I loved your use of repetition. :)

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully written!!!
Loved it!!
But sweetheart u should knw many of AsYa KaBhians cry with dem':, laugh with dem

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