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I absolutely vehemently dsagree that Laila needs either a janwar (Rudra) or a virgin (Danveer? Hai Khodha!) . In my head, she needs--the mysterious stranger. The dark guy with the smirk and the helping hand, who she doesn't know. Grey and black in spots, with no conscience, but a moral compass about who he trusts and who he does right by. Who's loyalty is to himself, and because he likes her, who keeps a bit of that loyalty for her, too. The man who leaves her to face danger and saunters off because he know's she'll make it--but waits with a car and a drink down the road because he wants to take her home. The guy she cannot con because he's conned her first, but who still sometimes lets her win because he likes her grin and evil laughter when she does. The guy who will ether ravish her against a tree in the rain or offer her his jacket because shes trembling ...or ravish first, jacket second--- to really drive her nuts.
She is such a man eater, such a firebrand, the doodh peena baccha will be an afternoon snack for this woman--she cannot value innocence when I have a feeling her innocence and childhood was taken from her quite early on. I doubt she came into the flesh trade willingly, yeah? That tough shell wont melt before someone without life experience of his own, and I see her with not a rogue as much as a self made, ruthless man who laughs at her, challenges her, indulges her and still gives her the kind of passionate, raw, no holds barred sex our Rudra banna is probably hoarding like a volcano for his Paro.
But this being India, we'll have to suffer sugar-bimari along with our consumashion scenes when the time comes for Parud in December of 2017. Thanks a lot by the way for spinning out completely alternate stories into my head when i was innocently trying to carve out time to comment on a bunch of the hated reserved spots I've held down on excellent stories for a while now out of sheer overwork and procrastination.
She is such a man eater, such a firebrand, the doodh peena baccha will be an afternoon snack for this woman--she cannot value innocence when I have a feeling her innocence and childhood was taken from her quite early on. I doubt she came into the flesh trade willingly, yeah? That tough shell wont melt before someone without life experience of his own, and I see her with not a rogue as much as a self made, ruthless man who laughs at her, challenges her, indulges her and still gives her the kind of passionate, raw, no holds barred sex our Rudra banna is probably hoarding like a volcano for his Paro.
AND--for once, I love the idea of Laila really giving as good as she gets in the bedroom with my mystery man with the humor and the danger and the sex appeal. I hate the whole "I am a virgin, so please take me against white sheets in the moonlight among many many fire hazard style candles with In Lamhon Ki Daman from Jodha Akbar blaring in the background." It truly makes me laugh because your first time should be panting, desperate, shirt ripped off, half clothed, screaming to the rafters stuff---or its not being done right.
But this being India, we'll have to suffer sugar-bimari along with our consumashion scenes when the time comes for Parud in December of 2017. Thanks a lot by the way for spinning out completely alternate stories into my head when i was innocently trying to carve out time to comment on a bunch of the hated reserved spots I've held down on excellent stories for a while now out of sheer overwork and procrastination.
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