Zaya OS: Don't leave me

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, it's my first first time writing any piece of writing on zaya, I am not sure how it will go but it starts after aliya is shot by bobby while saving usmaan and usmaan and zain have brought her to the hospital, and bobby is sent to jail.
Don't leave me
In hospital:

Usaam: himat rakho zain, aliya ko kuch nai hoga

Zain(while crying😭): ache logo k saath hi aisa kyu hota hai, kya bigara tha uske kisi ka

Usmaan: aliya Allah miya ki ladli hai, woh use kuch nai hone dege, ur phir tumhari ur hum sab ki duaie bhi to uske saath hai, bharosa rakho Allah par, sab thik hojai ga.

Zain nods, just than the nurse come in

Nurse: Excuse me, ye consent letter hai, isme patience k husband ka signature chahiye, iske bagair operation start nahi ho pai ga

Usmaan: consent letter? par iski kya zaroorat hai bhala?

Nurse: zaroorat hai, ismain ye likha hai k agar operation k doran patience ko kuch bhi hota hai to hospital aur doctor responsible nahi hoge

This was enough to shatter zain, he cannot even think about his life without aliya

Zain: main use kuch nai hone dunga dad, use jina hoga, mere liye, hamare liye

Usmaan: mujhe pata hai bete, par is waqt tumhe iss letter pe sign karna hoga, hum zada waqt nai le sakte

With much hesitation, zain sign's the consent letter, and hands it over to the the nurse, the nurse makes her way to the OT while the rest of the abdullah family comes in, along with ayat and rizwan.

Fahad: dad, zain sab thik hai nai, aur aliya kesi hai?, kaha hai woh?

Surriya(all tensed): ap thik to hai na usmaan sahab, kuch whoa to nai na apko?

Usmaan: main bilkul thik ho surriya begum, is waqt hum sabko aliya k liye dua karni chahiye, agar woh nai hoti to aj main yaha sai salamat khara nai hota.

Usmaan: app sab log ghar gai ur aliya k sehat k liye quran khani karvai, main ur zain yahi uke ge.

Everyone leaves except for zain and usmaan

Zain: dad?

Usmaan: haan bete, bolo

Zain: dad kya ap meri madat kar sakte hai?

Usmaan: madat, kesi madat ?

Scene shifted

Mosque

Zain and Usmaan are praying for aliya, zain is praying with the help of usmaan.

Zain(dua)(tears in his eyes): aj peheli par tere dar par aya hoon mere mula, woh bhi us insaan k liye jo tujhe kitna manti hai, usse bacha lo, woh meri zindagi hai, aj peheli bar tujse kuch maang raha hoon. meri zindagi mujhe luta do, meri aliya mujhe wapis dedo.

Just than usmaan's phone rings, he picks it up and talks to the person on the other side. After a minute or so, he tells zain something and both of them rush out of the mosque.

In hospital

Zain(panicked): doctor, aliya kesi hai? thik to hai na woh?

Doctor: dekiye mr. abdullah, jis condiction main unhe yaha laya gaya tha us main unka bachpana muskil tha, lekin.

Zain's heart stopped for a moment

Usmaan: lekin kya doctor?

Doctor: lekin ap logo ki dua ne unhe bacha liya

zain and usmaan breath a sign of relief

Zain: kaya main use mil sakta hoon?

Doctor: abhi hum unhe ICU main shift kar rahe hai, uske baad ap mil sakte hai.

In ICU

Zain entered the icu as quietly as possible, so that he does not disturbed aliya.
He sat on the stole next to the bed, aliya felt his presence and slowly opened her eyes

Aliya: dar gai the?

zain(trying hard to control his tears): nai to, bilkul bhi nai.

Aliya made a knowing face and therefore zain gave in

Zain(😭): haan

Aliya: aliya zain abdullah itni jaldi zain abullah ka picha nai chore gi

Zain(while smiling): pakka

Aliya(While smiling): pakka

The End

Thank You so much for reading guys
Please do leave your reviews and comments behind😊

Edited by zainaliya-12 - 11 years ago

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Vishi- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Awesome I just Loved it ❤️
Can imagine the whole sceneiro
Well written 👍🏼
Perfect ⭐️ ⭐️ . ⭐️ ⭐️ . ⭐️
Thanks for PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
awesome os...
i loved it...
awww zain is was worried for aaliya so he went to the dargah...
such a heartless nurse... saying "agar unhe kuch ho gya toh doc aur hospital zimmedar nahi honge"...
i hate her...
but awesome one...
keep writing plzzz...
its too good for the first time...
and dont think you dont write well...
you are awesome...
thanks you soo much for the pm...
thanks a lot... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Beautifully written ,loved it dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
reswa
unres

this is really good if its ur first time..
i really wanted to write on this but was busy
accha hua u did it and saved the forum from my torture😆😆
it was really nice esp zain praying for aliya
well done Sahar and keep writing😃
Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awsm os
Loved it
Very nicely written

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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
I sooo wanted her to get shot ...

Ausum os btw
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Hi !!
It's too cute n simple 😃
I liked it ⭐️
I would've loved this track in the show 😳

Sasha😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Its realy nyc n simpl pls continue writing😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
you just pulled it off. AMAZINGGG❤️👍🏼

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