You're Mine, Forever :) - A Sandhir FF ! (Thread 1) THREAD 2 STARTED.

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You're Mine, Forever.

A/N :- I am a die-hard fan of Randhir, Sandhir and Sadda Haq. I am obsessed with him - Randhir. I have read many stories on this forum. I am in love with a few of them. I must say, this place has a whole lot of talented writers in here.

This is my first FF. This will be a cute little sweet FF. I am not a gifted writer. Anyways, am just trying. The writings in different colors ONLY are flashbacks. Present will be written in black only.

I will stop my crappy Author's note now.

Hope you like my story.

Happy reading. :)


Do visit my Index :)


Prologue :

"Senior?" he muttered slowly.

"Yes junior," replied Randhir while dressing his son for the traditional day at his school.

"You do know parentsss are invited?" he told mustering some courage, stressing on the sss'. It was a family event and the childrens' parents were also invited to spend a day at school with their little ones. Randhir understood what he wanted to convey. He was indirectly asking about his mom. Randhir, once, had warned his son not to talk about his mother ever again infront of him. He had spoke about this matter previously once and Randhir had scolded him, eventhough he knew he wasn't wrong in asking, he has the right. He couldn't help it either. His hormones were out of his control when it came to this matter. He later apologized because he could not; obviously stay angry with him for a long time. He loved him too much for that. He got angry and looked at him sternly but all his anger melted away looking at his innocent, curious face. He silently stopped dressing him and went out off the room slowly without even sparing a look at him again.

"Arey baapre, yeh kya kiya tune," he told slapping his head as he knew that he had hurt his dad. He got dressed went out and sat at the breakfast table waiting for his dad to come. He knew that he wouldn't come, so he asked Ramu kaka to fill two plates and hand them to him. Holding the two plates he tip-toed to his dad's room silently and kept the plates on a small glass table in front of him. He looked at his dad who was staring particularly at nothing outside the window sadly and he immediately felt bad for his behavior and swore that he will not ever ask him anything about his mom, ever. He sat on his knees behind his dad holding his ears as if asking for an apology and made his presence by clearing his throat. Randhir turned around and looked at his son.

"Sorry senior," he told slowly with a puppy face that could melt anyone, still sitting in the same position, "I know maine aapko hurt kiya hai na? Sorry please?"

"Its okay champ," Randhir told cheerfully as he did not want his son to feel guilty about anything. He sat down on the ground on his knees and told like a baby keeping a hand on his tummy, "I am hungry now."

He giggled at his father antics, got up and pointed towards the food-filled plates kept on the table. Randhir was touched by his sweetness. He picked him up with one hand, walked towards the couch and made him sit on it. They had a hearty breakfast.

Before leaving the room,

"Senior," he told.

"Yes junior?" Randhir asked.

"You.." pointing towards Randhir, he shouted, "..are the best dad ever."

"And you are the best son ever," Randhir replied with a tear in his eye and hugged his son tightly.


Hey There goes the Prologue! :)

*Prays to God* Hope you liked it.

Well, as I have already mentioned I am not a writer, so criticisms and advices are most welcome.

P.S. For PM's buddy me.

P.P.S. For the next chapter, I need a nice boy name starting with the letter "R." So give me names people. :)


INDEX : (Hyperlinked)

Prologue - Scroll up..

Chapter 1 - Page 6

Chapter 2 - Page 12

Chapter 3 - Page 17

Chapter 4 - Page 23

Chapter 5 - Page 29

Chapter 6 - Page 37

Chapter 7 - Page 45

Chapter 8 - Page 57

Chapter 9 - Page 66

Chapter 10 - Page 78

Chapter 11 - Page 92

Chapter 12 - Page 107

Chapter 13 - Page 123

Chapter 14 - Page 138


The rest of the story is continued in another thread! :)

*You're Mine, Forever - Thread 2*

*You're Mine, Forever - Thread 3*

*You're Mine, Forever - Thread 4*

Do peep in. 😊


Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 10 years ago


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chowanisha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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frst time i wud b frst comnting...
its gud...
waitng fr your frst chap...😊
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Aww! This was really cute :')
Do update soon!
And pls PM me if u can 😊

+The name with R - How about Roshan? ^_^
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Interesting concept upload first part soon
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Interesting concept do update soon
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awesome plot u penned very well plz update first part asap n i forward a buddy req kindly accept it n plz pm me :))
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Hey Dear😊
Awesome plot👏
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
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Hey dear that was really a lovely start .Love the dad and son bonding a lot.Please do continue.And for Randhir's son name i think RAYHAN will be nice meaning Favored by god.
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Hey Amanda ,..
Sry for commenting sooo late but was a tad bit busy...
Well u remember me rite??🤣

Well coming to the prologue .. Dude it was mind blowing..
Loved it to bits and peices...

Continue jaldi yaar...

Love
Guess my name..[u better be rite][:X]


Arey ya sry forgot about the names with R

1.Rehaan
2.Rahul(I love this name)
3.Rohan
4.Rohit
_______________________
5.Ramu...🤣
Edited by Craziness123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

Hey Amanda ,..
Sry for commenting sooo late but was a tad bit busy...
Well u remember me rite??🤣

Well coming to the prologue .. Dude it was mind blowing..
Loved it to bits and peices...

Continue jaldi yaar...

Love
Guess my name..[u better be rite][:X]


Arey ya sry forgot about the names with R

1.Rehaan
2.Rahul(I love this name)
3.Rohan
4.Rohit
_______________________
5.Ramu...🤣





Oops.. I forgot ! 😛
C'mon now ! How can I forget you ? My first friend on IF !
AYESHA ! :D
Sure.. :) I will post the 1st chapter as soon as possible !

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