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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sandra22

hey... amazing,,, seriously... and the kid... whoa... ditto randhir... loved it...

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Thankyu soo much :)
I know. :D
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Amanda ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyu soo much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ranyu

Hey..

nice one..
Ranveer is so cute..😊
Really liked the father son conversation..
whats the suspense? update soon..




Thankyu :)
Suspense ? If I tell dont you think you'll get bored reading the story later on ? :P
Stay tuned :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: namya

Awesome update!😊

Good start...very interesting
What happened to sanyu? cant wait to see what happens next
I need long updates don't shorten them😃
Btw thanx for the pm
Update soon




Thankyu soo much :) Wait and read ! :D
Sure :) I'll try to increase the length ! :)
Welcome :)
Sure :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: don girls

Just read this story and it is amazing
Please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on thanks




Thankyu soo much :)
Sure I will.. Accept my Buddy req for that ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update..n intresting too!!
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Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Lovely update..n intresting too!!
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Thankyu soo much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Aiyoo !! This was so cute!!
I can almost imagine Ranveer talking abt deafeating a girl and randhir's thought procees!! And The way he said Genes!! OHHLLaaLLaa !

Amazing!! Do Continue pls accept my buddy request and PM Me When ever u update!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Thankyou sooo much for the response guys. I never expected anything like this.

*sheds happy tears*

Love you people.

So enjoy the 2nd chapter!

This is the first time I am ever dedicating anything to anyone. Well this chapter is for Ayesha (Craziness123) - My first friend on IF ! Thankyou so much for the support ! :*


Chapter 2 :

Randhir returned home late and was tired after a frenetic day at office. He knew by this time champ would have been asleep. He opened the door slowly and looked at him sleeping peacefully.

He went to his room, kicked his shoes off and changed into a t-shirt and black denim shorts. He looked around his room only to find that he was alone. "Emptiness," he thought. A tear escaped his eye. He opened corner most cupboard of his room which contained all the machines he had made. He closed the cupboard angrily sauntered towards the window, his thoughts playing havoc in his mind. He shoved those thoughts away and tried to sleep.

Morning...

Ramu kaka hadn't even come to wake him up, then he realized it is a Sunday and he can have fun with Ranveer. He looked at the clock, it showed 7.30am. He got up holding on to his neck and walked lazily towards the washroom to freshen up. He came out and went to Ranveer's room. He kissed him lightly on his forehead, pushed the strands of hair falling onto his face, which were disturbing his sleep. He then left to have breakfast and allowed him to sleep for some more time.

He came down and asked Ramu kaka whether he had received any letters, Ramu kaka nodded in yes and handed him a few letters. He shuffled through the letters, found nothing and threw them on the table but one letter in particular caught his attention and he picked it up with trembling hands. It was an invitation card.

He read it with twitching hands. He was shocked. "How could this happen?" he thought.

Just then his phone started ringing, breaking his trance, he went to pick it up. His hands felt numb after seeing the caller's name. Had he received the call before reading the letter he would have jumped up with joy. But now, after reading the letter, he was scared to pick up the call.

The screen displayed, "Dada calling."

He didn't know what to do. He was numb. "Why had everyone decided not to let him shrug off his past? Why is his dada doing all this when he knows what effect it has on me? Here my stupid mind is determined to keep recalling all those past moments and on the other hand, his dada wasn't helping him either!" he thought. Shoving away all these thoughts, he looked at his phone's display which already showed 6 missed calls from dada. He impelled the letter and his phone in a drawer and closed in angrily. He refused to have breakfast and silently ascended the stairs and went to his room.

He was engrossed in her thoughts after a long time, he thought, atleast that's what he told himself. Though in reality, she had never left his mind, not even for a second. He thought about her eyes, those olive-grey orbs you could keep looking at for a lifetime. Her hair, those silky, long, waist-length, pin-straight hair. Her lips, pink rosy ones, whose slight curve could melt anyone. He loved her more than anything, than anyone. He thought about the moments they spent together. Gosh, they had so many, in every corner of FITE.

His thoughts drifted off to the Fresher's party. *The first time he had ever saved her.*

FLASHBACK :-


Yoyo had spiked Sanyukta's drink to take his revenge as he was slapped by her in front of the whole college during ragging, when he asked a fresher-girl to kiss a desperate guy who was shamelessly staring at that helpless girl.

"OMG Sanyukta, your drunk. I am sure that stupid Yoyo must have spiked your drink," told a furious Kaustuki. She left her bestfriend in this condition alone and went to fight with Yoyo for his blatant behavior.

"Kaustuki..." Sanyukta started but trailed off as she didn't find her bestie anywhere around her. All she could see was a guy coming towards her, unnecessarily close to her. She was uncomfortable and pushed him with all her might and only then she saw his face clearly. It was Rajeev, a guy she hated because of a characterless person he was. He was trying to take advantage over her drunken state.

When that guy was too close to her and had locked his hands over her slender waist and when she was about to shout for help, he was pulled back hard and seeing the guy who pulled him back, he couldn't help but run. Yes, it was Randhir.

He tried to take her back to her dorm but she was making it too difficult for him due to her constant muttering.

"You know I hate you, don't you?" she asked poking her index finger on his chest.

"Yeah I do and am sure you know that I hate you more than you hate me," he replied angrily.

She took a look at him and found him really hot. She didn't know if it was due to her hormones or due to the alcohol in her veins, she started smiling looking at him.

"Tumhe pata hai Mr. MCP," she told sweetly looking into his eyes, "Tum iss pooore college mein sabse handsome ho aur aaj toh bohot irresistible lag rahe ho."

He was shocked to hear that from his mortal enemy. He knew she had told it from her heart, an alcoholic person never lies. He simply smiled at her not knowing what to reply.

She continued, "and when you smile, it makes my heart skip a beat."

"Hmm," he replied.

He didn't know what she might tell next and what she might do. He had to do something to go away from her. He hated her but he had to admit that her drunken sweetness was making him lose his mind. He had to something before the situation goes out of control he thought. He fished for his mobile in his pocket, took it out and called up Kaustuki and asked her to come to the Mechanical Lab as fast as possible.

Suddenly. out of nowhere, she came dangerously close to him. Her scent was blowing his mind off. His mind asked him to push her away from him but his heart did not agree, instead it gave him some crazy encouragement. He knew that he should push her away but he was numb and if anything happens today then he will regret it forever but she wouldn't even remember anything. "Oh god! She's safe!" he thought. How he wished it was him drunk instead of her and she would be facing all these stupid feelings and not him. He silently prayed that Kaustuki would be here before anything happens. But no, she was late.

"MCP! Tum dar rahe ho?" she asked sheepishly and backed out. She sank on to the floor with Randhir sitting on a chair beside her.

Finally, after what seemed like an eternity Kaustuki reached there. He first scolded her and then handed over Sanyukta to her roughly and walked away from there without even waiting for a thankyou.

He didn't know what was happening to him. He was shocked and at the same time was jubilant at what Sanyukta had uttered. "Why am I happy?" Randhir thought. He knew he didn't have any answer to that question. He decided to stay away from that good-for-nothing girl.

Meanwhile, Ranveer woke up and was surprised to see that his dad didn't wake him up. He looked at the clock which showed 10.00am. His stomach was making all kinds of scary sounds. He ran to the washroom, freshened up. He quickly went to eat something to stop his stomach's unnecessary sounds.

He searched for his dad but was unable to find him anywhere. He started climbing the stairs to go to his dad but was stopped by Ramu kaka.

"Chote baba, Randhir baba ko akele rehne dijiye. Aap aake khana khao," he told.

"Par kaka, Sunday ko hamesha main aur senior saath khana khate hai na?" he retorted back.

"Aaj unko akele chod dijiye. Aap kha lo," he told.

Ranveer reluctantly agreed and had his breakfast half-heartedly. He wanted to go and talk to his dad but remembered kaka's words and understood that he needed some time alone. So to change is mood he decided to watch TV. He started searching for the TV remote but suddenly stopped due to some vibrations. He made out that the vibrations were coming from a drawer beside him and so he opened it. He found his dad's phone ringing and a crumpled letter beside it. He saw the caller and immediately his lips curved into a broad smile. He read out happily, "Dada calling," and answered it.

"Hello dada," he told super-excited.

"Oh my, mera chota champ, kaisa hai baccha?" he asked equally happy.

"Main toh waise bhi super hoon, bas pata nai senior ko kya hua hai, subah se kamre se bahar bhi nahi aaye and kaka ne mujhe unse milne se hi mana kiya hai," replied Ranveer sadly.

"Matlab?" he asked over the phone.

"Pata nahi.. Aaj senior ne mujhe uthaya hi nahi!" Ranveer replied.

"Kaka ko phone do," dada told.

"Okay," Ranveer replies and hands over the phone to kaka.

"Haan beta boliye," kaka told.

"Kaka, Randhir ne aaj apne letters pade kya?" dada asked.

"Haan beta, padhe! Ayur padte hi chup chap khana khaaye bina upar chale gaye.. bata nahi kya hua hai unko!" kaka replied.

"Main jaanta hoon," he told softly, "champ ko phone do aap."

After taking the phone, "Chalo champ, main rakhta hoon, when your dad comes out tab mujhe pata dena," he told.

"Okay dada. I'll inform you," he replied and hung up.

He put the letter, without reading it at the same place. He took the phone and put it on the couch. He could not bear his senior's absence anymore and decided to break the awkward silence in his house.

His thoughts were interrupted due to the constant banging of his door. "Shit," he thought, "champ!" and ran to the door and opened it. There he was standing with his arms crossed towards his chest and looking angry. Randhir was now scared. Looking at his father's changing expressions, he could not hold his laughter. Randhir understood that it was a prank. He stretched his arm to reach out to him but Ranveer was fast too. He dodged his dad and ran downstairs as though challenging him. Randhir ran down after Ranveer trying to get hold of him. After a lot of trying he caught him and started swinging him around.

"Aaj mastii," Ranveer shouted.

"For sure champ!" Randhir replied.

"Senior mujhe juice chahiye," Ranveer told.

"Wait laata hoon," Randhir replies and goes in.

After Randhir is out of sight Ranveer silently takes Randhir's phone and sends a text to dada saying that Randhir has come out and then he deletes the message. Randhir comes back with a glass of juice and handed it over to Ranveer.

"Arey mujhe nahi chahiye," Ranveer told.

"What? Why did you tell me to get it?" Randhir asked.

"Simply I asked you to get," he told and put his tongue out and ran off away from there.

Randhir laughed at his junior's antics and drank the juice himself! He decided to spend the whole day for his junior and have fun with him. He was a caring father, there's no denial is that.

They decided to play games. After a lot of argument on which game to play they settled down to Counter Strike' and started playing.

After an hour, suddenly, the doorbell rang and Randhir went to attend it. He opened the door and saw the person standing at his doorstep.

He froze.

There ends my second chapter. Excuse the mistakes please; I haven't proof read this one either. It was smaller then the first one. I think this chapter's length is okay. Hope you liked it. Let me know your reviews. They boost me up. Bye :)

Well, I have something for you, guess who dada is! :P Let's see where your imaginations take you.

P.S. For PM's buddy me.

Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
res
unres...
i am the frst...yipeee😆

this update ws so gud...u knw u r expresing senior and juniors realtionship so nicely ...

dada ka to pata nhi per ha kuch bura na ho...

fresher party ka irresistable thng ws also gud

Edited by chowanisha - 11 years ago

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