I SEE YOU - RAHAT/HAYA OS

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As requested by farz_parachute. I hope you enjoy it. 😊

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Rahat's eyes scanned the words on the newspapers looking for anything of value to read. It seemed as though everyday there was the same depressing information on the pages. Murder, corruption, discrimination... was there no end to the criminal rampage that was constantly gripping the country. With a sigh, his fingers brushed the edges of the paper in his attempt to turn the page when the guest door to Haaya and Mrs. Dilshad's room opened.

With veiled interest, he glanced over the paper at the welcomed interruption, his heart unintentionally leaping in excitement when he saw Haaya exit the room with her badi ami. To mask his interest, he glanced back at the paper momentarily before resting his eyes on her once more, his expression softening ever so slightly as he observed the admirable tenderness with which she cared for her grandmother. It seemed that the innocence which caressed her beautiful face was thoroughly pure, for her act of benevolence towards her badi ami reflected nothing but an angel's touch.

As Dilshad continued to cough, his brows furrowed slightly in concern and he followed Haaya's every step as she walked over to the cabinet to withdraw what he could only believe was medication. Her every movement seemed to play in his mind in slow motion as he drank in the tenderness with which her hair brushed her soft skin, the silky strands cascading elegantly on her shoulders. When the cabinet door slammed shut, the thought snapped out of his mind and he felt his muscles stiffen in tension once more when he saw the blood tainting her finger.

The pain which was reflected in her eyes, in her every expression seemed to stab his very heart and his fingers grip the edge of the pages in his effort to use every bit of his self control to remain sitting on his seat. Keeping his mask of neutrality on, he looked on as she approached her badi ami once more before they re entered their room. Each second that ticked by was akin to physical agony until finally the door closed behind them.

He glanced at the door once more to confirm that it was indeed locked before folding the paper and walking over to the cabinet. Quickly, he ruffled through the contents until he found the bandaid and antiseptic liquid. He checked the expiration date on the bottle before walking over to the small table next to the Haaya's room and placing the contents there.

Once more, he looked at the room but this time he walked towards it before coming to a silent stop in front of the door. Slowly he raised his hand and brushed the white surface, cursing his misfortune that his sister had told him to stay away from Haya. Because of that, he had been constrained in his efforts to assist her the moment she had gotten hurt. I can't see you in discomfort..' he thought as his hand slid off the door, his expression pained. With a deep breath he turned away from the door and walked back to his room.

Haaya exited the room after her badi ami had informed her about the medication, pure nervousness coursing within her. It truly hurt her to see her badi ami unwell and she hoped with such sincerity that she could bear the illness of her grandmother instead. As she took a step further she noticed the bandaid and bottle lying on the table. Curious, she picked it up wondering which kind soul would have left it there.

Her question was answered when she looked up and saw him walking towards his the room. Unconsciously a small smile tugged at her lips and she glanced back at the objects in her hand once more. For all his harshness, his coldness and his blatant indifference, it seemed that Akdoo had a kind heart, she thought.

Perhaps there was more to him that she had allowed herself to understand. Beneath the stern exterior she was certain that there was someone gentle and engaging, someone capable to empathy and tenderness. She had seen a glimmer of it when he played his instrument. And today again she had seen it, regardless of how much he had tried to conceal it.

"I can't hear you.." - she thought- "But I can see you.."

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TVD-IANcrazy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mine
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Me first. Me first. Faruuu, me first. 😉 😆
Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.
I am absolutely amazed by you.
I just cannot tell you how terrific you are. I mean seriously. The scene just aired like some few hours back and you captured it so beautifully.
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great job 😃 👏
Amazing os 😳
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Damn!


Well at least page 1
farz_parachute thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay just saw my name up there.


You wrote this. For me?




Running to go read.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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you are amazing 😎 i absolutely loved every bit of it !<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh I remembered that in my sangeet chapter in my EMA fanfic I made a few couples perform and one of those couples was Rahat and Haya. 😛 It was a bit out of character but I am sharing it anyway for anyone who might want to check it out. This was their performance.

Soon the melodious lyrics filled the atmosphere, complimenting the melody which preceded it only a few moments ago.



Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe
Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re

Rahat glanced down at the children with a small smile, as his fingers continued to strum the guitar, the lyrics flowing smoothly from his lips.


Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re
Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan
Kehne lagega aaina

He closed his eyes, picturing Haaya's beautiful face, the irresistible shyness which clung to her every expression making him smile even more as he continued the song.

Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua, Subhanallah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua

Slowly he opened his eyes and glanced back down at his instrument, the smile lingering on his face as the lyrics continued to flow from his lips.


Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)

A soft hand touched his shoulder and he glanced up, his expression softening when he saw Haya moving to the front of him, her usual shy face now staring at him with a soft smile which warmed his heart with such comfort he did not even know was possible. As her hand slipped from his shoulder and came to rest on his arm, he stared into her beautiful eyes, totally captivated by their enchanting depths as she continued the song, much to his surprise.

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon
Taareef meri hai khaamakha
Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

Someone touched his arm and he blinked, glancing around in slight shock before he realized it was just a moment of day dream on his part. He looked at the child who touched his arm and smiled at him before continuing the song, the lyrics filling the atmosphere in serenity as he continued to play the guitar.



Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare
Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re
Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai
Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re
Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta
Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa
Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah
Aisa hua.. Subhanallah (x3)

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah
Aisa hua..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow.


Oh wow wow WOW!



This is amazing. Thank you.


Trmy thank you.


Can't say anything else.


Still in shock. To see the scene. In writing. And better still those add ups...


I shall come back. After I recover. If I recover.




I mean. How long did it take you. The episode just aired like few hours ago. And my request was made hours after that.


How.


How?



You're something else.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yumna.imad

Great job 😃 👏
Amazing os 😳
Loved it



Thank youuu 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my goodness.



There's more.




There. Is. More.

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