new Anya STORY Updted PART 2 @ PG 6

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These days my brain is vry active ain't it 🤣 koi na waise this one is seriously not that good ... was drowned in physics so this is the thin i came up with in that one refreshment hour 😆 so i dont guarantee anythin 🤣 read at ur own risk 🤣


"Four Five forty five, yes this is exactly my seat. Excuse me miss, you have taken the wrong place, this window seat solely belongs to me and this is my ticket, you can check it, if you want" says a young boy with a smiling face to a young girl who is just thinking about something leaning on the window glass

She stares at him with a lot of irritation and leaves his place without uttering a word. She basically feels disgusted by his way of saying "solely belong" word

"As if he has bought this property..huh!!!" thinks the girl angrily

"Ananth Baypayee ", log pyar se mujhe Ananth bulate hai and you.." boys extends his right hand for shaking hand with the girl

"Did I ask you anything?" first line is said by the girl

"nah, not at all, but I am telling you, if I don't have any problem in sharing with you, then you must not have any problem in listening to me either" Ananth now laughs loudly, he already has moved back his hand in the initial position.

The girl doesn't find any funny incident in it so that she also can laugh loudly, so she prefers to remain quiet.
"your ticket mam, show your ticket too sir" ticket checker asks for a ticket from the passengers of the Mumbai going bus. This is a AC Volvo bus - a long distance to cover.

The girl tries to find her bag and tickets, Ananth gives his ticket for checking "I always obey the duty and responsibility as a citizen of India, I always buy the ticket with correct money, this is my ticket TC sir, I am going to Mumbai, I will give the Indian Idol audition there, you know what is Indian Idol is ? it's a singin reality show , Singing is my passion, my goal and I will also lend my voice to many actors n den I'll earn a fortune and then I'll..."

He doesn't get scope to end his line. The TC returns back his ticket with a smiling face and again asks for the ticket to the girl, it seems that he is more interested in his duty rather wasting time in world's kahani !!.

"dekhiye, I am not able to find the bag where I have kept the ticket. I think, I have been picked pocketed , I have my credit and debit cards with me, I will pay you once the bus halts " the girl now pleads to TC

"no mam, you have to pay it now, because you will not get any ATM in the way, otherwise you will have to get down in the next bust stop" says the TC rudely

"you know who I am, you think that I have availed the bus without a proper ticket ?!?! " answers the girl now with a short temper

"look mam, I don't want to know you, I don't have much time, I need to check the entire passenger's ticket, so .." TC says in the tone of giving her the warning, but he gets interrupted

"arre bhaiya, tell me her ticket fare, I will pay you, kya hai, aakhir ek passenger will help his co passenger nah" says Anant in between

"Three hundred thirty two rupees and fifty two paisa with penalties, pay it, I will issue a fresh tick for her" says the TC

"Don't worry, I will pay your entire money once I go to Mumbai, that three hundred and thirty two rupees" says the girl now. She feels relieved as she has got the valid ticket of going to Mumbai

"Three hundred and thirty three rupees in exact, after rounding off..he he..Not a problem, Miss.. what you have told your name, I can't remember all time actually" Ananth asks again

" Navya Mishra and log payar se mujhe Navya bulate hai" she smiles

"So, I can also call you Navya nah, Ms Navya !!! because it has not been proved yet ke I can love you or not..wo aap ne bola nah, log payar se aapko Navya bulate hai ..😛 sorry baba..I was just kidding" Ananth smiles. He notices that Navya 's cheek seemed to change in a deep shade of red , so he stops his poor joke (what people hamesha tell him to stop).

"So, you think, you can sing well?" asks Navya

"no no Ms Navya , I actually can, you want to see it?achha ok ok, when the bus will stop for a halt, I will show you an example, then only you come to know who is this Mr Ananth Bajpayee . I am going to Mumbai to win the Indian idol and I waana be familiar to people in every corner of this.you also say something about you Ms Navya " asks Ananth

"I...I am going Mumbai for getting a good job, here you know, I live with my Mama Jee, I lost my parents when I was a kid, mama jee does not want to let me go outside, though he can't afford enough money to live life, mami jee hates me and she doesn't give me the proper food, so I am going to my friend's house in Mumbai so that I can live life independently" Navya says by making sad face

"ohh, so sad..accha cholo, listen, when I will win Indian idol nah, I will give some money to you, so that you can fulfill your dreams too, I don't want much more except my needs, but you have to come when I will perform in grand finale.." Ananth asks in smiling face

"tum hamesha hi aisa bakwaas karte ho? ya fir you start when you accompany some beautiful lady" Navya asks and winks in the mood of cracking joke

" No, main toh aisa hi hoo, by the way, you find it funny, it's bad hah!! I am telling you about my dream" Ananth says in false anger

"Achha sorry baba, of course I will go when you will perform in the grand finale, but before that tomorrow is your audition nah!!! All the best for it" she said

"Thanks, I know I am gonna win it for sure, now you have wished me, achha toh hona hi hai, achha listen, when you will get married nah, I will perform a special act for u , now we have become pakke wale frnds nah toh listen.." Ananth continues his jabber - many relevant, so many irrelevant. some about his dreams, passions, goals - his voice , how he has learned singing , who are his idols, some about his family. But Navya starts liking it, don't know if this is the good way of passing the time, or she actually enjoys to listen it. It seems that both of them know each other since so long.


"Here, the bus will stop for one hour, all the passengers are requested to have their lunch. You can go and freshen up, but please come back before the clock strikes 1 o' Clock . It is 12PM and we will start again at the specific time. No extra time will be given beyond the stipulated time. If passengers will not come back within the time limit, the bus will wait for extra 5mins and after that we will leave and in this circumstances we will not have any responsibility." a voice announces it and the bus comes to a roadside dhaba for lunch session.




this is by far the longest update i have ever written 🤣 i actually dont know how on earth did it turn out to be so long 🤣 any ways do comment ur views 😃


iske updates ke liye no clauses 🤣 will update jab bhi likhuni 😆

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tareyfan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter one - above
Chapter two - coming soon 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you dear :-) kya baat hai. ..good going. .lagta hai passenger ab superfast ban gaye hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update listening to anants continues speech sounding good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahem!😉It seems like someone's mind is working in a gr8 speed thats why starting with another story😆 So first of all I would say that I just luved d first part👏 nd o.m.g Anant is so cute here😳,its generally gals who talk a lot but here its a guy,I was laughing while reading about his life history which he was telling to the TT 🤣nd helping a girl in need,he seems to be a generous guy😛 and Navya is a bit reserved types I guess so its a gr8 combination ahead😳😉,anyways will wait for ur next update!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww awesome update.. Plzzz continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chater pater Anant loved the first chapter

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh Anant is a charter box nice updates loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aree wah yeh kaise ho gaya??!! 😲 😆 Aish & long update? 😲 (just kidding yaar) 😆 Thank u soo much for such sweet & long update dearie.. 🤗😃 Loved the chatar-patar Anant a lot.. 😃😳 His talks were funny but veerryyy sweet..! 😳 Just loved Anya's convo re.. 😳 Literally loved the whole update to the core of my ❤️ Mwahh.. 😛 Overall it was a very chirpy update just like u.. 😳😛 Hope u'll cont. it.. (no insisting dear.. whenever u find time cont. it) 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super script re...awesome...marvelous...fantastic...superb start...
tumne itna bada wala update de diya...😲 😆 aise hi deti reh...

p.s- ye tera barin na full active nahi half hi active hai kyonki tu bohoth slowly update karti hai...lol 😆 plzz atleast ise th jaldi update kar...and tu aise naye naye updates deti reh..y dont u try some SR??? 😉

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