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rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: shonrayarockss
awesome update
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
amazing i m droolng over them thnks for pm

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rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
sorry for late replys all parts read in one go amazing thnks for pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: tinni55
nxt prt...plzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: rampriyarocks
Finally done 9 parts...
loved it sooo much...
pls post soon other parts...
rosi didi :P :P

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Riddi Dear, finally you commented😊
I am going to update now 😛😛

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Dhristi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Di pls update naaa pls pls i m missing ur story

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rosinagoor

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#267

Hi Friends ,

Thank u so much for your lovely comment, Here the next Part. Hope u all like it 😃

Part : 10

They walked to the gym, Ram was trying a new machine and Priya was doing her regular treadmill. Ram was observing the way she ran on the treadmill, her ponytail dancing along with her, her hands swaying. He would happily sit the whole day watching this. "Uncle what are you starring" the boy asked. Ram looked at him and smiled "champ first thing you need in a gym is concentration, so stop looking at me and do your workout" Ram told him politely "Uncle but you're not concentrating either, your keeping on starring at aunty as if you're going to eat her" he said. Ram sighed "Ok ok. I was seeing my friend to know what workout she was doing" Ram said. "Oh but she is my aunty" the boy fired. "Oh she is my friend better remember that" Ram said back "no she is my aunty and only mine" saying the boy ran to Priya. "Aunty" he shouted. Priya stopped her work and came to him "Aren't you working champ" she asked. "Aunty tell me whether you love me or Ram uncle" he asked. Priya looked at Ram who was eagerly waiting for her answer. She bit her lips and hugged the boy and whispered something in his ears. The boy kissed her back "Okay" saying he ran back to his place. "What she is mine right" Ram asked the boy. The boy saw him and laughed "my mom told me not to talk in workouts" saying the boy turned away. Ram looked at him annoyed and turned to do his work.

"Ahhh" Ram shouted suddenly. Priya stopped at looked at him "Ram are you ok?" she called. "Ouch" he whined as he tried to move his hand. She immediately went to him "Ram..! I told you not to try on new things, you should have listened to me" saying she helped to sit on the nearby chair. "Well I lost concentration" he said. "Day dreaming?" she asked as she went behind him. "What .. What are you doing?" he asked. "A little massage will help you Ram" she said "What...?? Are you gonna give me a massage" he asked stunned. "Yes what's the big deal in the massage, now sit straight" she ordered. He obeyed her like a student. She gently pushed his shirt a little aside, her cold fingers found his bare skin. It seemed like the fire and ice met. His whole body felt electrified with the touch. She very gently massaged his neck. His eyes closed as he enjoyed her touch. "Ram feeling better" she asked after a few minutes. Ram woke up from his dreamland. He wasn't even sure which side was paining. All he could feel was her touch. "Ram" she called again. "ya its fine now. Totally good" he assured. "Ok then shall we move?" she asked. He nodded and got up. "Well Priya what did you say the boy" Ram asked as they made their way to the room. "Well I told him I love both of you the same, but in a different way." she said. "what way" he asked. She smiled. he felt her smile was something beautiful that the stars. He felt himself loosing senses now and then. "ram fresh up and we will have breakfast, and have bath in warm water if you can" she bringing him back, he nodded and left.

Ram came out his washroom dressed in a brown shirt and brown trousers. His phone rang "Hi ma" he answered. "Son you seem so happy, what happened early morning" she asked "ma please don't start now, nothing happened, just happy like that" he said "Ok Ram it's been a long time I have seen you, can you come on video chat if free?" she asked. "Sure ma I will there in 2 mins, see you" saying he turned off the call and searched his laptop, and entered video chatting. He settled himself in the bed. A broad grin came across his chubby face as he saw his mother "Wow mom you look so happy without me" he said. She smiled at him "Well I am really happy that you finally fulfilled my goal of sending you in the cruise". Ram scratched his temple "Please ma, not again" he said. "Ram you have become more handsome" she said "Oh so I wasn't handsome first" he asked. "Well you were, but you were missing the inner happiness, there was emptiness in you, seems like all are filled now" she smiled. "Mom just now I told you not again" he sighed. "Ram I really know you enjoy these talks, but why aren't you accepting" she asked. "We are just friends, she doesn't even know how I feel for her, I haven't even confessed yet" he said. "son listen to me carefully, Its one thing to fall in love. It's another thing to feel someone else fall in love with you. And the most beautiful thing is when these two happens at the same time" she said. Ram nodded "Ya well said claps" he said as his mom blushed. "Mom seems like you and dad had a big story, you are so experienced" he teased. "Shut up now will you?" she laughed. "Ok when are you going to show me my daughter-in-law?" she asked. "Ma please, friend ok" he said. "come-on Ram why aren't you accepting, you want to marry her right?" she asked. "I haven't thought like that, I just want her to be with me always" he said immediately "oh is she your slave?" his mom asked "Ma please, don't say like that. there are times when I am with her, I am not able to see myself, all I can see is only her. she can catch my attention, no one has ever done this to me" he admitted. "Ram there is never a time or place for true love. It happens in a heartbeat, in a single flashing, throbbing moment. I knew the first day Kevin told me about her that you would fall for her. I know you more than yourself son" she said. "Ok Ok I admit yes I do love her, The first time I saw her I knew in my heart that I needed something in her, but it took me so much days to realize that it was she whom I needed" he smiled. "Aha see whose talking these lines Ram Kapoor" his mom laughed. He blushed. There was a soft knock "Ma someone is coming, I will be back" saying he left to the door.

"Ram it's me, it's pretty late and I wanted to know whether you were coming for breakfast" Priya asked him. She was standing in a blue salwar. He scanned her a second "Oops sorry was talking to ma and completely forgot. "Give me 2 mins" he said, she nodded and he went in. "Ma, Priya is calling for breakfast, I will talk to you later" "Ram please let me talk to her son please" his mom asked. "Not today ma later ok" he said. "No just 2 mins" she asked again. Ram never denied when his mom asks anything for the second time "Gosh mom you know me so well, you know I wouldn't deny that's why you asked again right?" he asked. She smiled at him "Go, call my daughter-in-law son" she said as Ram left. "errr.. Priya mom wants to speak to you, if you don't mind, can you?" he asked. "Yeah I would love too" she made her way in. "Ram do I look good?" she asked. "ufff is she going to select you as a model, just go yaar" he said. Priya carefully sat on the bed and looked at the woman on the screen. She didn't look too old for her age; she was smiling warmly at her. Priya smiled back "Hi Ma" she said. "Hello Priya, its really so good to see a face whom I have died to see so many days" she said. "Same here aunty, feels like seeing my own mother" she said. "Come on I am your mother" she said. As they chatted Ram called Kevin to bring them food to the room. "Priya can you just call Ram want to say him something" His mom said. "One sec ma" Priya told her and called Ram. Ram came and sat by her "yes ma" he asked. "Nothing I just wanted to see you both together, you both make a awesome combo" she said. Priya smiled "That's enough now ma, else her father will file a case that I am not feeding her daughter well" Ram said "Priya can you just take some pics of the place your going and send me, Ram denied to do" his mom complained "No worries ma I will send it" she assured. his mom bid bye. "shall we eat" Ram asked rubbing his tummy. "Yeah let us go. I would die in hunger" she said. "where????? I told Kevin to bring here" saying he indicated the tray of food in the table. "awww. So sweet" saying she hugged him lightly and ran to the table. Ram stood mesmerized by her hug when his phone buzzed. He took and saw a message from his mom "Ram I never thought you had such a good taste. She looks so heavenly. And you both make the best pair. Don't leave her son. Love you." he read it and smiled. "Ram are you coming?, else I will eat everything" she warned and Ram left to have his breakfast.

The morning and noon passed away as Priya told him a story she read. They were inside his room. Ram half dozing, dreaming, admiring as he listened to the story. He ended up getting caught to her when she questioned him at last. "Ram so you didn't listen at all" she asked. "Priya yaar I did listen, but you know sleeping is not in my hands, it felt like a lullaby the way you said" he said childishly. "Oh was I singing here" she asked. "Well your voice was ringing in my ears, my eyes drooped and I entered the dreamland" he said. She smiled. "Ok Priya just tell me, do you get dreams often" he asked. "Well I do get, not very often" she said. "Oh what do you dream about?" he asked. "IT depends, usually I dream if I think about something a lot" she said. "hmm..! You believe in dreams coming true" he asked. "Well I actually believe in making them come true" she said. He looked at her, their eyes met "Well then, I am dreaming about something a past few days, now I am going to make all measures to make it come true" he said looking into her "What is it?" she asked. "I will tell you when it happens, for now the dream is something which can change my whole life, something I never thought would happen in my life, but now I desperately want it to happen" he said slowly "I wish your dreams come true very soon" she said. He nodded "I am sure it will" he said. "The climate looks so good" she said looking at outside through the balcony. "Shall we go to the deck" he asked. "Sounds good" saying they made their way to the deck.

They walked around the deck looking at the people there. "Attention please" Captain Mark voice heard and all turned their heads to the loudspeaker.

"Hope all passengers are enjoying a lot. The next place of our destination will be reached in two week. So as a part of fun, a competition will be held. We have decided to have a proposal competition for the men and cooking competition for the women. It will be held in three days. First day will be proposal and next day cooking. We would like all to take part in this fun competition. And the following day will be just some fun games for children.
The proposal winner, will we awarded a candle light dinner in the garden with whoever he wishes even if it's not his wife" there was a laughter "and, the cooking winner will cook for the whole ship one day, just joking people, will be allowed to spend a night on one of the unseen most romantic place in the ship, it will told later. Of course not alone, with whoever she wishes. So ahem, men and women who really want to do something romantic start you battle. Hope it would be great fun. Cheers all."

The whole crowd seemed elated. Some people were giving words of assurance that they would win. "Candle light dinner?????" what sought of a prize is that" Ram asked. "Ram it's a fun thing, and I think it's perfect, a candel light dinner in the garden would be amazing" she said. "Well so are you in?" he asked. "Maybe, Its going to be fun, I am not going to miss it" she said. "Well I will be in the audience" he said. "No ways you are playing" she said. "No way Priya, propose" he laughed "I would never get it in my life" he said. "Ram you are doing" she said. "Priya it's not funny" he said. "I will train you please" she begged. "Priya anything else, I would have been in, but proposing, this Captain has lost mind I guess" he said. "Ram come-on, you are doing it" she said firmly. "Well you have become so much like my mother" he sighed. "Why so?" she asked. "Well it's really hard to say a no to you both" he smiled. She smiled at him "So you are in right?" she asked. "Ha ok I will do it, just for you" he said. She hugged his "Thank you so much" she said "It's okay yaar" he replied.

The weather was so pleasant, with chill breeze. It started to drizzle and the people made their way to the room fearing rain. "Ram lets go in" she said. "You don't like rain?" he asked. "Not much" she said. He laughed. The clouds opened and the drops grew bigger "Ram inside now" she said and hurried to a safe place. Ram stood on the deck. It was nearly empty. "Ram please come back" she shouted. Ram gestured her to join as the rain drenched his shirt. He was surprised to know that a girl like Priya didn't like spending time in rain. Priya left to get towel for him. Ram made his way to her, he was drenched full head to toe "Ram you may catch cold" she said and made him sit. "Priya rain doesn't come always, I learnt this from my mom, we both have a lovely time it rain, but it's a long time I have don't this" he said. "I don't like it much" she said. "Well mom always says that some people feel the rain, some people just become wet" he said. She smiled and gave him one towel to dry himself; with other towel she dried his hair. "Yaar Priya feels like heaven really" he said. She smiled "I am drying your hair, not massaging" she said. He laughed. "Ok not change clothes, we will leave for dinner" she said "yes madam, as you say" saying he left to the room. Priya stood looking at the rain. He came back in a few minutes and they left to dinner.

"Priya you can leave to sleep, I have to talk something to Kevin" Ram told her and she left to her room. Ram called Kevin "Can you come to the hall need to speak" he said. Kevin arrived in a few seconds and they talked for about 15 minutes. "Ok Kevin you understand everything right, I want to know all these soon ok" he said. "Yes sir" he replied and turned to leave. "Kevin one second" Ram called. "Yes sir" he said "this will be between only you and me, we can tell mom and Priya when time comes" he said. "I understand sir" he said. Ram nodded. "Good night Kevin and thanks" Ram said. "Good night sir" saying Kevin left

Priya stood at the balcony, it was still raining. She flipped the recent pages of her dairy, they held only memories of her and Ram. "I need him like a drowning man needs air" she thought. She smiled "I don't know where this is going to end" she said herself. She made her way to the deck. There was no one. The rain was heavy now. She looked at it and slowly stepped in; she let the drops touch her for the first time. She closed her eyes, stretched her arms and invited them. She wanted to feel what he felt. "It is really awesome" she thought. She opened her eyes and saw him standing where she stood, gazing at her, with a towel in his hand.

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rosinagoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: dhristikpd
Di pls update naaa pls pls i m missing ur story

Updated dear😊

One more thing, Shifra & you , both r same age person
so no di, after her name😊

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Awesome asusaul
Omg that lil champ is so sweet
he nailed the situation and I loved his question
lol..good one
and Ram didnt even realized which side its paining after her massage. ..
loland I loved her answer

different wat ...hmmm good
im eagerly waiting when priya tells that different way to him..

I loved these lines..
Aha see whose
talking these lines Ram Kapoor"

the video chat is lovely ...and his ma msg is super like
the story is good going ..
atlast priya felt the rain and enjoyed it
so proposal competition and cooking competition
no wonder these two going to win

thanks for tge lovely update

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago

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Dhristi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Awww so beautiful ff yaar now really want Ram to win the proposal contest n priya should also participarte in cooking so they can go to romantic place in ship now very very excited to read next part thank u rosi di n shifra di for wonderful story

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