ISHQ KI INTEHAA!!~Beintehaa 2 Shot..(strictly 16+) :P (COMPLETED)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tere haath mein...
mera haath ho...
saari jannatein..
mere saath ho!! <3

Zain miyaa aaj kuch zada hi romantic ho rahe ho...
kyaa baat hai?? Aaliya asks zain as he was holding her from her waist..

Ab mujhe romantic hone ke liye bhi tumhari permission leni hogi? :P
says zain...holding her tighter ! more close! that close..that he could hear her heart beat..

Kya kr rahe ho chhodo mujhe...yeh maamu ka room hai..hamara nahin..plz zain agar kisi ne dekh liya toh?
kya sochega woh?
Aaliya said nervously..

Tumhein sab logo ki padii hai...kabhi apne shauhar ka bhi khyaal kar liya kro...
kya yr..achha thik haii..i want u in OUR room in 5 minutes.!!
thats it!
(Zain gave a naughty smirk n leaves)

Shukar hai allah gya yeh ladka!!
pta nahin kya kya krta hai!
bt jaise bhi hai..
bahut CUTE hai..:)
says a blushing aaliya..

Suna maine!!
Zain comes n kisses her on cheek..

Kya kr rahe ho?
tum jao na plzz...
she makes aa puppy face!!

Ab itne pyaar se kahogi toh jana toh padega!
achhha bt jaldi jaldi aana plz :*

n he leaves..


Yeh kisi din marwayega!!
chlo jldi kaam khtm krke jaati hoon..
nahin toh phir se aa jayegaa..

aaliya did all her work n then leaves for their bedroom..

when she reaches..she sees a rose and a beautiful red saari and a letter...
Arrey..yeh toh wohi saari haii...jo usdin party pe pehni thi maine..

She reads the letter...
Hn hn yeh wohi saari hai...jo tumne party mein pehni thi..
usdin hi main tumhein apne dil ka haal btaana chahta tha..bt

anyway..main chahta hoon..aaj tum yehi dress pehno!
LOVE ZAIN

Allah!!
iss ladke ko kya ho gya hai..itni sweet letter..
yeh aaj raat kya krne vala hai.?
chlo ready ho jati hoon..nahin toh fir se kitkit krega!

Aaliyaa leaves for washroom to dress up...meanwhile zain enters..

Usse toh bhej diya..ab main kya pehnu?
vese kyaa pehnna chahiye SR pe?
he searches his almirah for right clothes..

Kya yr...kya pehnu?
after thinking for a while..

kuch bhi pehn leta hoon..
vese bhi aaj raat toh...n he smiles..

Aaliyaa enters their room..
their room smelt of roses..n she sees candles all around..
WOW!! its soo beautiful..!! said she..

bt tumse zada nahin..zain interrupts.!!

Yeh sab krne ki kyaa zaroorat thi zain??

Zaroorat kyn nahin thi?
nn vese bhii..mera dil kiya toh krdiya,,.
tumhein koi problem hai?

Nahin woh baat nahin hai par...

Par var kuch nahin...yeh shaam main tumhare liye sab se khaas bnana chahta tha..
jo tumhein hamesha yaad rahe..
n he leans forward..cupped her face..n says..
I LOVE YOU AALIYA..
bht zada...sab se zada..itna ke main khud bhi nahin jaanta..

I LOVE YOU TOO ZAIN..

N then he switched on the music player...

Muskuraane ki wajah tum hooo...
gungunaa ne ki wajah tum hooo...
jiya jaye na jaye na jaye naa...oh re piya reee...


DANCE??

Sure..:)


part 1 ends..


hmmm hmm hmmm...
don't throw your jootaasss n chhapels on me plzzz..:P
next segment mein sb kuch ho jayega...which u people want!!

hope you lyk it...
do review plzzz...

n criticism is always welcomed!!
bt review zroor dena!! :)
Thank you :D




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Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm start
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting fr next part Eagerly 😳.😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this is really nice and romantic dear!! Zayaliciously written<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i will complete this tomorrow..for sure..
n tomorrow..thoda long update hoga!! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!
this is realllyy nice!
when are you updating the next chapter??
do update soon and plzz PM!
WAITING :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well written!
Update soon! 😆
And please PM me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww this ones a nice one❤️
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LOL striclty 16+... 😆😆😆
Gud one !!! waiting for the next part... 😳😳😳
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This is really good! 👍🏼 😃
Update soon!

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