If I were the story writer, I would....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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What would you do?

I would make this all a dream sequence from the time that Kaajal picks up Karan's phone. I'd make her fall asleep in the car ride home and have this intense dream, like a what if I don't believe dev. Then have her totally trust Dev, and go on with marraige and capturing Ameesha and Veer. AND don't have Rati Agnihotri leave the show. Plus I think this would totally be unpredicatable and shock the viewers, esp after the rumours of Rati quitting. Thus people would watch, just to find out if she was quitting or not, meaning if Karan and Ameesha succeeded or not. And I don't think Rati should tell the press that she is staying, this would make it more interesting

Come on company, apologize, consider what it would take to bring her back, and don't take no for answer. Do what you have to keep her and raise your tpr's. I am not happy with the story line right now, cause I think it lacks some common sense, which I explained in the discussion of the week. I really don't see Karan' s phone call as one for "Kaajal to see the light"

Just a thought by me, what about you guys, What do you think of this scenario? And what would you do differently or the same if you were in charge?

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AcquaDiGio thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PS. I did get this from the preview, the dream part. But somehow, I don't expect them to make the whole entire sequence a dream, which is why the above is stated.

And granted if you are thinking if Rati isn't happy she shouldn't stay, I agree, in which case, leave her for a few episodes, again don't leak to the press if she is staying or leaving, but rather make it a suspense, on will Karan and Ameesha succeed, or will NT die in their hands.

Also I really don't think Ameesha earned the right to stay in the house. I think that is bizzare, only going along the lines of Kaveri and Sindoora and all the other vamps. Come on one mistake and the herione is shunned while the vamps get forgiven....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Well i m just hoping that the writers don't drag this dev hating kajal thing for weeks ..lets hope that dev somehow comes to know that karan is behind NT'S death as he had thrown those marbles on the floor and this way dev forgives kajal 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey AcquaDiGio, i see we r on the same lines buddy,. read my fan fic, its named, FF-love will find D & K, part 3 pg 2. i have it going exactly there.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: thesaint148

hey AcquaDiGio, i see we r on the same lines buddy,. read my fan fic, its named, FF-love will find D & K, part 3 pg 2. i have it going exactly there.
😊

Yeah, I will try to take a look soon. Thanks!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope, the writer fix the story little bit and make Dev and Kajjal go together again. Its ridiculous to change the interesting story to a crappy twist like every other Serial maker did in the past.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: NKSUDHIR

I hope, the writer fix the story little bit and make Dev and Kajjal go together again. Its ridiculous to change the interesting story to a crappy twist like every other Serial maker did in the past.

we have progresed beyond help with the storyline......😕

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