Arjun Os: A Dead Lock! - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

superb...loved their tiny sweet moments...but what ya?? where did that man stop..🤢🤢

yeah now have to wait..nd i hate it so much..

continue soon...though i know i am late this time..😳

thanks for the pm😊😊

it happens even to ACPs dr 😉, and no prob but u made it at the last moment well.
thanks dear!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

A dead Lock!


It's my duty to remind u something here dears,

It seems u can't see where he left, just remember the lines,


He looked down at her lips.

Something was keeping him from action, still. And suddenly it came to him in a flash.

I was born with a silver spoon in the mouth. But you?...'

He stopped short and said, hastily,

"Wait! I've to go out!"


Right? He went to see her father.

Now the last part!


Part-6:

Anti-Climax Part-2:


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."

Judy Garland

She heard the door bell and moved the curtain to see who it was.

He was standing there with a smile playing on his lips. He could not wait to share the news with her. He again jingled the bell, that suppressed the sound of her shouting, but he got her lost words well.

"...Duur is uppan!"

He bounced in, threw the sweet pocket on the table and started searching her.

He found her in his bedroom. He flew towards her who was facing the mirror.

He lunged at her, grabbed her by the shoulders, turned her in one stroke, ignoring her pleadings leaned forward towards her lips and backed away from her the next instant with a pricking pain on his lips.

"Ouch! What the?-"

He turned to the mirror to examine his lips and saw that she was in sari.

He brought that for her once she moved in to the apartments.

The yellow- maroon sari suited her well.

The pinching pain on his lips demanded his attention.

She, the sari pleats still in one hand, pointed his lips and shouted," Bulad!"

"What?"

She madly spat the pin from her lips and shouted again," Blood on your lips!"

"What was the rush for?" She complained.

She struggled with the sari in one hand and the pin in the other a moment, but the next -stood on the balls of her feet she wiped the blood from his lips with hers.

Suddenly she felt a hand encircling her from behind.

As moments passed, the hug tightened. She forgot the pleats and the pin soon.

When he released her she tasted blood, but not his!

-THE END-

Thanks,

saKthi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb.. Thanks for pm.. Love it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
What the hell.
It was going so good.
And where did u ended it!!!
I am damn confused.
She wiped blood from his lips with hers.
So, obviously they were facing each other.
But who hugged her from behind??
And whose blood she tasted??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it shakti
awesome End
But u did it so soon 😭
But awesome work dear
Thanks for the Pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

What the hell.

It was going so good.
And where did u ended it!!!
I am damn confused.
She wiped blood from his lips with hers.
So, obviously they were facing each other.
But who hugged her from behind??
And whose blood she tasted??

it's just him and his, quiet obviously dr!
then who wud touch her????

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ending
Love it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: greensakthi

it's just him and his, quiet obviously dr!
then who wud touch her????

Okkay.
Got it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
its just awesome..
thanks 4 pm..
plz do write more stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ending...
But What was the news he wanted to share???😕😕😕
And why he left last time???😕😕😕
Thanks for PM...

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