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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina

Heyy Di sorry foh my late reply n abt d update m jus speechless 😕 what shud I say it's such an awesome, wonderful marvellous update...👏 every tym u made me speechless n surprised. 😳😃

LOVE u jaan... everytime your comment make me speechless...

I jus loved it v much 😃👏

Enjoyed reading it👏

How incrediblely u've written di. 👏. Hats off to u.⭐️👏

Yaar I am blushing ... I am speechless... Yaar U encourage me to write ... love u so much Sometime I feel I am writing for you only... 😆

I hv read ur update thrice😃

bas tin baar😆 kese tu zel sakti hai tin baar😆

its jus phenomenal I loved how Jo takescare ov jallu n how she gave him body heat though she has done foh medical purpose 😛😳but I loved it.👏 I so much want dis to happen but u fulfilled my wish unknowingly.😉😉 . Tq jaan 🤗

jaan telepati... mere dil me ghati bazi... alina ko body heat chahiye ...aur mene likh diya😆

Loved d way she cooked foh him with ameri style n d way she helped him n make him sit n jallu has recognized her jo. . 😃😊

With her moves,touch n voice jus loved it. .. 👏

Loved d song too n it's perfectly suited foh his condition d way he sang was jus heart touching🤢😳 n I loved d shayaris too 👏

Beautifully written ⭐️

Aww... Yes the way Jodha took care of him... But Jodha kese soch sakti hai Jallu use nahi pehchanega...😆

I loved when he broke down when he came to knw abt hira n nandu he must b thinking he tot her as jo but later he knew dat she's her jo. . 😃

too sad part...

Loved Der sword fyttt

Loved derr romance

Romance in rain ☺️

Wow d way he kissed her.☺️ . Well what shud I say abt dat romantic part u r d queen ov romance n no one can beat u.😃😛.. u r d queen ov romance mm SR .. 😃😉

Rommance is my fav part to write... me gm mind too😆

"Loved it totally. . 👏

Loved d scene whr Jo came to knw abt d culprit of Dat incident n her happiness has no bounds.🥳 . D way she hugged him tyt n kissed him. . Jo is amazing she keeps sayng jalal hame jaenedijeyeh yeh apka raj mahal ni h yaha log rhtey h koi dkhlega n jallus dialogue Hawn toh ek shauhar ko apni begum se milne k liyeh Woh jagah ya waqt ka mohtaj nahi hota.😃 Well said jallu n v well written Di. 👏👏. Jallu bada besharam h Jo k khne per b nahi chodha. . 😆

mere Jallu ko besharam bol rahi hai😆 jallu to bilkul siddha hai jalebi ki mafiq

When she said every thing to jallu ov how he gawt nandu n when I read nandu it reminds me ov shakti kapoor😆 "nandu sabka bandu" 🤣 from raja babu. . Apko ow koi nawm nahi milaa dii.😆😆 . I was rofling. . 🤣

Shakti Kapoor... Nandu😲🤣

I loved how jallu tried to play his tricks on Jo when he was sitting topless on d bed I was like chalo Ab toh wild body heat hojaye but what he gawt kadha 😆😊

Jo is v smart Jo jallu k tricks samajgai h... 😃

I loved when she said apko puraskar toh milna hi chahiyyeh n how jallu was waiting foh her inaawm. . 😃😉

Jallu badmas company number 1 hai.. aur jo bhi kum nahi hai

I loved her inaawm d way she gave him n when she kissed him jallu didn't respond coz he wants to feel enjoy but lastly d way she bites him v hard. .. aaaooocchhh kuch zyada hi bite krdiya Jo ne. 😆. But loved it. . N inaawm toh rehgaya hi n Mujhe jaanna h kab inaaawm milega jallu ko Ab.😉.

Pakka Jallu uska Inaam chodne vala nahi hai

pls update d nxt part soon. 😳😡. I can't tell u how much I loved dis update. U r simply genius. 👏🤗. Take a bows foh writing it brilliantly. .. 👏

Bless u jaan 🤗

Love u sooo muchhh 🤗

Love U JAAN🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I loved, loved loved loved loved loved dis update... ⭐️👏

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1022

Originally posted by: hely
wow...
itz soothing n luvly update...😳😳luved whole part..
beautifully written👏fab job gazal😉
finally they met...jallu is vry excited...☺️
krti hu update ki request ...gaur farmaiye...
iss gane ko copy krne k liye
pehle star fir 9 dbaiye😆

Meri biwi ko meri update pasand aai ... ME SO HAPPY love u meri Shayri... Aaj kal aapka shohar... war pe hai... koi biwi aas paas nahi hai... bas aapki yaad hai...😃

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1023

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1024

Amazing chapter... main to kehti hu kin next ff baad mein update karna... pehle is vale ka hi next chpater update kardo.. ab aur intazaar nai hota. .i just love ther nok jhok... but jalal shouldnt have slapped her... chalo koi baat nai.. thoda sa to chalta hai... and that kanika.. bas..rd... hate her... but thankfully jodha supported jalal.. i liked how he was affraid about jodha's behaviour.. everything is written so beautifully. i just love it.. continue soon dear 15 days bohat hote hai.. kuch karo .. humein aise mat tarpao... request hai next ff baad mein update karna...😭😭

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1025

Res

Unres😊

First of all thank u for posting it today😃

I just loved the whole chapter...How well Jodha knows Jallu, her letter was too good👏

Par Jallu is angry on Jodha😭

Loved how he pulled her out from crowd and asked NOW SING😆

what a sharp mind he has to recognose that its not Jodha on the bed but Lila👏 and then his dialogues that Jo is motti and he will first kiss her then see her face...it was so much fun😆 Naughty Jallu😳😳

That INAAM that he took from her was😳😳 ooo i m still in Akdha la la land maza aa gaya!!

Sometimes they get so carried away yaar...Jo asked to go sleep with Kanika and Jallu slapped her I hate this Kanika😡 becoz of her Jo got slapped😭

Kanika tried to create m/u between them😡 I am so happy for how Jo told her off👏

Loved the convo between Lila and Jo😃😃 but telll me y they always talk where Jallu can hear them😆😆

Awesome chapter yaar👏👏

Please update sooon i dont wanna wait for 2 weeks😭😭

Lots of Luv

Preet

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08
Amazing chapter... main to kehti hu kin next ff baad mein update karna... pehle is vale ka hi next chpater update kardo.. ab aur intazaar nai hota. .i just love ther nok jhok... but jalal shouldnt have slapped her... chalo koi baat nai.. thoda sa to chalta hai... and that kanika.. bas..rd... hate her... but thankfully jodha supported jalal.. i liked how he was affraid about jodha's behaviour.. everything is written so beautifully. i just love it.. continue soon dear 15 days bohat hote hai.. kuch karo .. humein aise mat tarpao... request hai next ff baad mein update karna...😭😭

Thank u so much for your comment... Yaar...chal me sochti hu... par me usually one by one update karti hu... U know I am so nervous to post this chapter... chapter was ready ...but I was worried to post it... but I am glad U commented and I am feeling relived... u know mere jallu ka gussa har baar nak pe rehta hai...par Jodha ne bhi to galat baat boli na usko jao jake so jao kanika ke sath... Jallu ki Jodha se fatati hai😆 I am glad u like it... and thank u for fast comment... Now I can go to sleep...its almost 2:00 pm in night... I promised to post it today so... I had to post it... Love U so much🤗

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1027

Finally, we got an update and that too a superb one. and if i remember correctly someone on text was telling me that it is "bekar" update and is not confident about it and usual i replied u said that after u write it earlier too but people love it. So, I was right- Wink it is a gr8888 chapter.

first of all thank u so much for not showing Akdha in amer and agra separately for an entire chapter. Second, I relaly liked how jodha highlighted the events of her life sinc ehse met jalal and her emotions on why she wants to remarry and really loved the the beginning part of chapter where she says to give water and akdu jalal and ghubarroe ke jaise mooh phoolana and all. Third, I also like dthat jodha took soldiers with ehr and asked to send more men for jalal safety which was nice touch although jalal did not wait. Then, his excitement to see everyone's happiness when giving news of jodha and remarriage and his announcement to aawam about remarriage and his happiness was clearly visible. Jodha meeting her family and becoming carefree when she was single was delight to read. Maan singh and mirza teasing jalal when he is impatient to c was fun. Jodha and leela throwing stones to catch hsi attentiona nd then their eye-lock.hayyye mere Akdha. I really liked the part where Jalal took blessing of dadisa and how MV noticed how jalal changed for better, Then jodha singing a song and blushing jalal which is a rare sight to watch and he went to grab jodha and make her blush too. Their muh dikhayi part was hilarious and fun when jalal teased jodha and leela both. I understand jalal was mad and liked that they made out but then they both fought and i was like r u kidding me? they should have made up but it got worse. Although, i loved how jodha was distracting jalal and trying to seduce him by showing her back. Then jodha getting annoyed and finding out about surya and sukanya. u know i got so scared when u said surya i was like oh no not again but was happy to find he is over her. But I HATE Kanika. I hate hate hate her i think even mroe than ruq in this story. I thought jalal would get jealous of surya but he saw the change but why did jalal have to oogle at kanika. he came to marry jodha. iknow he was teasing jodha but i think jodha and jalal both took it too far when they were supposed to be enjoying these rituals and best times. I could not believe jodha said to sleep with kanika and jalal slapped her. that was shocking. But, then Jalal hearing jodha's soulful confession too leela that how she realized she is the luckiest and loves jalal so much. the entire confession was so heartfelt and i liked it more because jalal heard it this time just like last time so it shows to him that how much jodha loves him and trusts him and how her feelings have changed and she feels lucky than unlucky. It was nice to c how they aplogize and forgive each other but i hate that kanika and loved it when jalal stood up for jodha and praised her. Kanika is worse than ruq. ruq was at leats his wife so she had haq on him but i can't believe this woman..s he kissed jalal- shahensha how dare she and lvoed how jodha showed her trust on jalal and just wanted to applaud jodha. It was gr8 to c jalal feeling touched with this unbreakable faith from jodha on him and finally they patched up.

Precap is interesting. Btw, thank god u did not stop in thee middle when jodha catches kanika and jalal together. because i would have been definitely mad and annoyed u with text msgs.lol.

Now, pleaseee jaldi update soon. I cannot say to update this before RKG because it's that story's turn now and also Alina will kill me and u if i ask to update this before RKG.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1028

Wow so beautiful that kanika hate her😡

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tehzeeb raina hussain

@Tehzeeb89

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#1029

i was thinking how u r going to further up the marriage chapter without any villain there u go hats off to u what a brilliant idea by re-entering that stupid kanika...

wow!!! awesome update...

love it to the core...

fantastic and no word to describe ur writing...

eagerly waiting for the next update...