T2 Sameer Rathod FF: betrayal of love new thrd pg 152

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

finally they know the real identity of Chai wala.

RR confrontation made me miss Arjun serial. I love reading their angry nokjhok.😆

The description of bomb sounds scary. I literally mean it. I am already imaging massive death losses🤢

But we all know ETF is more than capable to solve such kind of casses. BTW, did I ever mentioned that I just love your mysteries & cases. I am not reading this FF for raesha or for Anu though I like her very much But the thing which has hooked me up is your brilliancy in the case. The way you are joining every piece of puzzle is brilliant.

Last part was superb. Anu is finally here in the ETF office. If possible PLz made RR Run & turn on her innocent yet devilish orders that would be a treat to read.

BTW, Captain spark always brough a big smile on my face.

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Awesome update...
Finally they know who the.chai wala is...
Love RR... And their anger..
The bombs 🤢 um soo curious to know who they will find the correct date.and time of blast
and ofcource our anu..aka captain spark 😆
plz add some fun in it
contd. Soon
Thnx for pm

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123pritha

@123pritha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

hi buddy

a big thank u for all ur updates

sorry comment nahi kiaya

exam chal raha tha

ajjj katham ho gaya finally

coming to ur updates

ROCKING UPDATE

ARJUN u are true detective👍🏼

BOOBS... KYA HO RAHA

MYSTERTY IS BECOMING COMLOCATED OR SIMPLE😕

BUT ETF HAI TO SOLUTION TO HAI

i am loving the way story id moving foward

i can't wait to read the next update

arjun ka reaction😉😉

aisha seems disturbed i am hOpe all is well

i love rathod and AISHA 'S DAUGHTER CONVERSTION

I WANT MORE AND MORE UPDATES FROM U SO PLEASE UPDATE

JALDI OK

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

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@ishi : the update is not about the fun element..she isnt the one where the story revolves...so i dont pay heed to your kiddish demands...after all you are a kid too..😛

ek bache ki umeedein...thanks ya...love you my little kiddy...😳

@skrafty : thanks dear..😃

@najaan : thanks..keep reading..😃

@radha,@unishaz, @zubiya,@megha,@pravalika,@nikita,@ : thanks😳

@jia : glad you liked keep reading..😳

@sneha : thanks dear...confuse nehi hui??i failed again..ab to next update kuch karna hi hoga...a lasting confusion coming up..😃

@deffa : thanks for reading deffa..keep reading..you will get to know everything..😛😛

@aditi ; thanks dear..glad you liked..keep reading..😊

@harisee : thanks dear..stay tuned..updt coming up..😊😊

@goldie : thanks partner..glad you enjoyed...keep reading..updt coming up..😳😳

@atisha : captain spark is one of my fav character...if you know where..meine kaha hai ura do..per usko kuch aur karna hai shayad..tor tension er solution take annu with you..stay tuned..updt coming soon..😳

@ariya ebstfan : read the missing parts toegther..good you liked both..thanks for the comment..keep reading..updt coming soon..😛

@subhkamal : thanks dear..omg thats a high compliment..i really dont deserve it..glad you liked..keep reading..😊

@kuchu : thanks dear..😃

@aradhya : thanks dear..glad you liked..keep reading..😊

@pritha : long time..missed you and your sparkling comments..hope your exams were good..its absolutely fine dear..keep readign and commenting..😊

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Note..

well first replied to everyone in the post above..do take a look...😳😳

next about the update..i tried to supress the update in a single part but failed miserably, kya karu sometimes i get carried away...🤪

so i have divided the whole update into two parts...😳

i am pming the first part to all my readers and the second part would also be sent in a couple of days(how many i still dont know but ill try as soon as i can..plomis..😃)

sorry if it gets a bit too long and boring...😛

the update would be send soon in a couple of minutes..😃😃😃

PS those who hardly comments ever...please dont ask for the update to be pmed stating some excuse...i wont pm..you got to start commenting on the earlier parts...or the later ones...nd one line comments, awesome update comemnts, the same comment on every update...wont be entertained henceforth...😳

PSS sisky my love...sorry for the blabber...about your lolipop..its coming soon in the next update...hope you like it along with my revenge, for you know what...😆

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...

Arjun received heated glares from a trained soldier...🤣🤣🤣

Arjun following her command...😲😲😲 😆😆😆

Arjun took her in his hard crush arms...

Arjun enjoying her beating...🥱🥱🥱

She started crying that to be so much loud that Arjun closed his eyes...🤣🤣🤣

Arjun climinal...🤣🤣🤣

Annu glaring with teary eyes & blood red rose...awww sooo cuuuttteee...🤗🤗🤗

Annu eyeing on Arjun looks...😆😆😆

Arjun thought Annu to be Sameer & Sushma's daughter...🤣🤣🤣

Annu ne Arjun ko chair par nahi bethne diya...🤣🤣🤣 👏👏👏

Liked Arjun slip for dost...😃😃😃

Annu called Arjun climinal bcoz he throwed file towards Sameer...😲😲😲 🤣🤣🤣

Annu giving him murderous glares...🤣🤣🤣

Annu vll give Arjun punishment...🤣🤣🤣

Waiting for punishment...

Shree thought Annu as Arjun's daughter...🤣🤣🤣

Third file mein kuch nahi hai???...agar kuch nahi tha toh usko code kyu kiya hua tha...😕😕😕

Annu doubted on Shree's intentions...🤣🤣🤣

Shree shocked bcoz Annu turned her face from him...🤣🤣🤣

Loved Annu's silent glares to Shree...LOL...Poor Shree...🤣🤣🤣

RR...yamdut...🤣🤣🤣

Baat toh sahi kahi Shree ne ki Annu is boss of their bosses...😆😉😛

Annu Arjun ki tarah gurati hai isliye Arjun ki beti...🤣🤣🤣

" 'dost' kept speaking with the 'climinal' "...🤣🤣🤣

Home Minister Khanna is the one about whom Ranbir was talking???😃😃😃

But why Khanna vll be Sushma's target???😕😕😕

Was he involved in Anna's case???😕😕😕

Annu muttering Climinal...🤣🤣🤣

Sameer said sorry for ignoring her...😃😃😃

Liked Annu's answer on Sam's sorry...😃😃😃

Loved the way Annu was looking at Sam with hope & Sameer giving in her demands...😃😃😃

Annu brought smile on Arjun's face...😃😃😃

Everyone shocked seeing him smiling...😆😆😆

Sakshi's double promotion...bhayankar beti in her dreams...🤣🤣🤣

LOL...even Sakshi got glare from Annu...🤣🤣🤣

Sakshi ki futti kismat...🤣🤣🤣

Annu observing her surroundings...😃😃😃

Now since Annu is conference room team ka discussion shanti se hoga...I really had a doubt...😆😆😆

What Aisha found???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

rrr

unres

oh wow!! annu ki jai ho!!
annu glaring at arjun...poking him to move forward...bapree...isse to mai v panga ni lungi...
'waha jao, aur khale lehena, bilkul
bhi maat hilna,' ...lol..hhehehe
😆 😆
arjun ...annu ko pareshan mat karo..
tum sach me climinal ho...bache ko tang krte ho 😡 😡
annu ka revenge..ro k kan fad dia...gud work.
aww...dost ne bacha lia climinal se..

hehe..arjun ko laga k sushma n rathod ki beti hai.
annu revenge part 2..arjun k chair pe nai baithne dia..kyuki wo uske dost ki chair hai..
'nehi, tum dost ko marne aye ho,
you climinal,'

Sahi insan ko sahi nam dia...
Arjun's slip of dost was very nice...
Annu wl punish arjun..i m waiting!
Oh..us third file me zarur kuch gadbad hai. .agar khali hai to itna protected kyu!?

Annu skeptical about shree..ye to heights hai...shree,sakshi n chhotu thought k annu is arjun's daughter..bcz wo uske jaisa ghoorti hai...hehe..kya pata ...arjun annu ka mama ho..mele me bichra hua..
case to gol gol ghum raha hai..
then comes aisha...humesha dant ti rehti hai...kitni pyari bachi to hai...
ETF officer ki beti..." wolk (work) comes flist"
finally she left with her dost only...annu n her antics...
annu in conf room...case kitna agey badhega..i doubt...
annu hlaring at sakshi too..sach me footi kismat. ...
annu..d most attentive participant in d discussion...
ummm...wat did aisha find out...waiting to know...
update soon...n...
i lubh u too..

Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago