MG SS - Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh updated last pt on pg 39 jul 2.. - Page 14

Part - 21

Geet is excited to hear him say it...

Geet closes her eyes and sharpens her ears so that she won't miss those beautiful words from him for the first time...

Maan: tum bahut pyaari ho

What? Geet is disappointed...Geet feels like banging her head on the wall...

She wanted to hear something else...

" Geet, tum bahut sundar ho, aur mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon Geet, I love you Geet"

Maan ko aaise kuch kehna chahiye tha, haina babaji?

Mein kya koi kudhiya hoon? Pyaari khudiya?

Mein toh ek sundar 18 saal ki ladhki hoon, aur inko abhi bhi mein koi bachi lagthi hoon, haina?

Geet: aapko yahi kehna tha?

Maan is surprised...

Maan: nahi toh

Geet: phir, yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: tum mujhe galat samaj rahi ho Geet

Geet: kya? Mein galat samaj rahi hoon? Hare babaji? Ab inko kya karien?

Maan: tum meri fikar mat karo, aur bathao, tumne apne exams kaise kiya?

Geet: ab inko meri exams ki padhi?

Maan: Geet, mein kuch pooch raha hoon

Geet: bahut achche kiya hai, aur abhi sirf ek aur paper bakhi hai, mere exams katam hothe hi mujhe koi kaam dhoondhna padega, aap mere liye koi ahchca kaam dilwa sakthe ho kya?

Geet turns to this boring topic as Maan is only interested in that...

Maan: very good, I'll think about it

Geet: ho gaya? Gud night

Geet tries to cover herself and sleep...

Maan tries to stop her...

And between their push and pull Maan falls over Geet...

And they freeze for a moment...

Maan keeps staring her for a while...

Geet anticipates something...

Maan leaves her saying...abhi nahi

Maan: Geet, mein tumme kuch bathane aaya tha aur tumme dekhthe hi sab kuch bhool jaatha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: aao mere saath

Maan takes her to his room...and he opens his cupboard and takes out an album...

It's his little sister's b'day album...

They are at their village home...

It looks very elegant and beautiful...

Typical Indian farmhouse with serene surroundings and simple but colorful interiors...

And Geet immediately recognizes Maan...

Geet: ye toh aap hi haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: ye dadima hai

Maan: tumme kaise patha?

Geet: meinne unki tasveer dekha haina?

Geet shows the one on the table...

Maan: aur ye meri choti behen hai, ye maa aur ye papa, aur ye dekho Vicky

Geet looks at Maan and tears fill his eyes looking at those pictures...

Geet: aap ro rahe ho?

Maan hides his tears...

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: ye sab ab mere saath nahi hai Geet

Geet: par ab toh mein hoona aapke saath

She goes and hugs Maan...

Maan feels better now...

He hugs her back...

Geet: aur mein bhi ab akheli nahi hoon, haina auntyji?

Geet remembers her aunty and uncle...

Maan: Geet, tum bahut achchi ho

Geet: bas, achchi hoon?

Geet looks at herself in the mirror...

Maan: aur bahut samjhdar ho

Geet: aur?

Maan: aur kya?

Geet: koi ek ladhki ko aaise tareef karthe hai kya?

Maan: phir kaise karthe? Tum hi bathao

Geet: woh tum bahut koobsurat ho, tummra chehra, chandini ka chand hai

Maan smiles...

Maan: tumme aaise tareef ki kya zaroorat hai Geet?

Geet: toh mein sundar nahi hoon?

Geet is disappointed...

Maan: tum toh kuch zyada hi sundar ho Geet, issiliye toh mein tumse itna dhoor rehtha hoon

Geet: kyun?

Maan: kyunki

Maan gets closer and pulls her into his embrace...

Maan: jab tum paas hothi haina? Kuch kuch hotha hai Geet

Geet steps back...and runs away...

Maan: hare, Geet, rukh jao

Maan runs after her...

Geet goes to her room and closes the door...

Maan: Geet, darwaza kholo

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap chale jao

Maan: nahi jaaoonga

Geet: mujhe sona hai

Maan: par mujhe neendh kaise aayegi?

Geet: woh aapki problem hai

Maan: meri problem hai?

Geet: haan, gud night

Maan: gud night Geet

Maan keeps standing at the door and Geet too stays close to the door...

Geet: aap jaoona

Maan: tumme kaise patha ki mein yahi hoon?

Geet: patha hai

Maan: toh darwaza kyun nahi kholthi?

Geet opens the door...

Geet: ab kya hai?

Geet pretends to be angry...

Maan: kuch nahi

Geet: toh, jao, sojao

Maan kisses her gud night and leaves...

Geet likes it very much...

Next day Geet goes back to the hostel...

Geet thinks about Maan and his family...

She realizes that Maan too needs help...

Just as Maan had helped her get out of her mess she has to do something to make him happy...

She knows that Maan needs love and a happy family...

And to start a family we need atleast two people, we have Geet and Maan...

But they are still like well known starngers...

Geet has no idea how to get closer to his heart...

How to assure him that she is there for him...

She doesn't mean anything physical, that she knows very well that Maan is into her long before... And that will happen by itself...

Maan is slowly but steadily progressing anyways...

But the problem is to make him feel that he has got someone to share not only his love but also his worries...

He has made the first step forward by letting her peep into his lonely world...where everyone close to his heart and soul just remain in his memories...

Geet is frustrated that she couldn't do anything...

It's not her fault, she is still young and immature, not even strong enough to face her problems, for that too she needed Maan, now how would she help him...

And she has got only two more days to think...

She had to come up with an idea soon, for then she will have to start her life afresh...

She knows that Maan is desperate to have her home, start their life together but he is hesitant b'coz for him she is still that innocent girl who accepted him b'coz of her terrible background and she had no other option than to come with him...

Geet decides that she needs more time to accomplish her mission so she opts to go for a short tour with her friends...

Why not? This maybe the last chance for her to be with her friends...and everyone is so excited about this tour...

The only one who is not so happy with this plan is Maan...

Maan has been planning a surprise for Geet...

He is thinking of moving into her room itself...

It's not fair for them to stay in two rooms in the same house after they have vowed to be partners for life...haina?

Geet wouldn't mind sharing her room...

But maybe she would demand Maan's room if he moves to her room...anything is possible...she is so possessive about her house...and also very much like Maan, ziddi...

Whatever, Maan has decided that it's time for him to break his bahelor's vow and become a family man...with atleast 3 or 4 kids...

A couple of children like him and a couple like Geet, and maybe if Geet wants she can have a few more...he wants a very big family...

He wants to make her his wife in everyway, he wants to have her totally for himself...he wants to take their relationship to the next level...he is fed up of being lonely and single...

How could he not mingle with such a beautiful wife at home...

Geet is so near yet so far...he is just waiting for her studies to complete...

This separation is too hard for him...he is not ready to wait any longer...

nice one😉
poor geet is not happy with the way maan is praising her😆
both planning some surprises to each other...dekh the hai hota kya hai😃

nice update

Part - 22

Finally the wait is over...

It's time for Geet to say adieu to her hostel...

He himself goes to take Geet home on the last day...

But Geet is yet to tell him about her plans...

She is afraid that Maan would get angry with her for not asking his permission...

MSK is now her hubby haina?

She is waiting for the last minute to reveal her plans so that Maan won't be able to stop her...

Maan comes and finds everyone ready to leave...

Yes, it's must be very hard for them to separate...

And it must be hard for Geet too as she is going to enter a new world alltogether...

Geet is busy shouting instructions to everyone...

Maan already knows about her bossy attitude but finds it amusing to see her friends running around her and taking orders from her...

Maan thinks about himsef ordering everyone at KC...

But that is different, they work for him and he pays them for that...

Here, these people just do it out of love and also there is no ego between them...

It's nice to have a group of crazy and true friends around you...

Geet: Pinky, ye Pinky kahan chali gayi?

Geet is shouting aloud and searching Pinky...

Maan keeps looking at her and is admiring evrey bit of her dramebazi...

He had already seen her doing this at KM with the KC staff but it's always amusing to see her like this...Maan then imagines her joining KC and for a moment Maan imagines taking orders from Geet at KC...ohhh no...what about his reputation as DD at KC...

For a minute Maan has doubts about offering her a job...

It may not be a good idea, he can offer her a partnership, that would suit her better...

And partners can have equal say in the decisions, haina?

Pinky: Geeet, Geeet

Pinky stops seeing Maan...

Only she knows Maan and not the others...

Geet has not yet noticed him for she didn't expect that Maan would come to take her...

She thought she would call him and inform hin about the trio and just leave before he could decide otherwise...

She would just let him know that everything has been preplanned and she couldn't change her plans now...

Never in her wildest dreams did she thought that she woukd end up marrying MSK...haina babji?

Geet: Pinky tuh kahan thi? Aur ye tere haath mein kya hai?

Pinky si speechless...also her mouth is full...

Pinky: ohhh Geee Gee

Geet: ye kya hai?

Geet snatches the bag from her...

It's fully loaded, with all sorts of snacks...

Geet: Pinky, tumme wahan bhi aaise hi khake rehna hai toh tu issko lekhe ghar kyun nahi jaathi?

Maan: Geet, tum ghar kab aaogi?

Geet turns and looks at Maan...

She is shocked...

Geet: aap, yahan?

Maan: chalo, Geet, tummare luggage kahan hai?

Geet: aap yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: what? tumme ghar lekhe jaane

Geet: par sir

Maan stares...

Sab ke samne sir sir kehthi toh Maan ko bahut bhura lagega haina?

Geet: woh, mera matlab hai, mein ghar nahi aa sakthi

Ye kya naya tamasha hai? hare, babaji, iss ladhki ko ab kya ho gaya?

Maan: kya bakwaas hai? tum ghar nahi jaaogi toh phir kahan jaaogi?

Geet: hum na, kahin goomne jaa rahe hai

Maan: what?

Geet: Pinky, tu bathao

Maan looks at Pinky and Pinky swallows everything in a sec and just blinks...

Maan: Pinky

Pinky: ji

Maan: ye kya keh rahi hai?

Pinky: ji, hum hum

Maan: jaldhi bolo

Pinky: Geet, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Achcha hua Pinky ko yaad nahi, warna kadbad ho jaatha...

Geet: hum, kahin dhoor jaa rahe hai, bahut dhoor

Maan: Geeet, tum mujhse kuch toh kadbad hai, ye kya ho raha hai

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, hum sab aakhri bar saath mein ek trip jaane ka plan kiya hai, ye toh hum bahut din pehle hi plan kar liya tha

Maan: tumne mujhe batahya kyun nahi?

Geet: mujhe kaise patha ki mein bhi inkke saath jaa sakthi? Pehle toh mujhe yahi doubt tha ki mein apne exams puri kar paoongi ya nahi, par aapka lak lak shuker hai ki aaj meinne bhi apne degree puri karli

Geet tries to butter Maan...

Geet: aur aapke wajhe se mujhe sabke saath jane ka ek mokha mil raha hai, aap mujhe rokhenge toh nahi

Geet makes a sad face and looks at Maan as if she is a little child waiting for her mother to get her a chocolate...

Now Maan couldn't stop her, she has this knack to trap him always, where he has no other way but to accept her wishes...

If he tries to stop her she wpuld think that he is also like that idiot Daman trying to threaten her in the name of marriage and relationships...

Maan reluctantly lets her go...

Maan: mein tumme kyun rokhoonga?

He looks at her and he is really upset...

Aur kitne din Geet, ab mujhse ye dhooriyan bardaasht nahi hotha...

Jadhi wapas aajao Geet, Maan tummare bina adhoora hai...

Geet: thanks, aap bahut achche ho, meinne kaha na Pinky, Maan sir mujhe kabhi nahi rokhenge, ab dekha tumne, woh bahut achche hai

Ab issne sabke mere barein mein kya kya bathakke rakha hai? ye toh isske babaji hi jaanthe...

Hope she has not said anything silly about me...

Maan just wants to escape before he is embarrassed infront of her friends...

Issne sabko mere barein mein bathadiya? Ohhh no...mein kaise kudh yahan aake pasgaya?

Itne din toh log Maan ke barein mein kuch bhi nahi jaanthe the, ab toh issne sabko meri kahaaniyan sunakke mere reputation karab karke rakha hai...

It's better to leave ...

Maan: toh Geet, aap log kaise jaathe ho?

Geet: hum ne gadhi ka intrezaam karliya hai

Maan then calls her aside...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: Geet, tum kab lautogi?

Geet: 10 20 din hoga

Maan: kya? Itne tum akise jaa sakthi?

Geet: kyun? Aap nahi chahathe ki mein apne dhosthon ke saath jaaon?

Maan: aaisa nahi hai Geeet

Geet: phir?

Maan: teek hai, par ye aakhri bar hoga, agle bar tumme kahin bhi jaana hai toh mein tumme lekhe jaaonga, samjhi tum?

Geet: aapke saath jaake maza nahi aayega

Maan: what?

Maan stares...

Geet: woh...meinne bas yuhi kehdhi

Maan: tum kahan jaa rahi ho? mujhe uss kagah ka address chahiye

Geet: address?

Maan: haan, mujhe ye toh jaana hai

Geet: par hum kissi jungle mein jaa rahe hai, wahan koi address nahi hai

Maan: what? aaise kaunsa jagah hai?

Geet: ye bahut remote place hai, hum wahan tents mein rahenge, aur trecking bhi karenge, bahut maza aayega

Maan: kya? remote area hai?

Geet: haan, prohibited forest hai

Maan is worried...

Geet is very careless and it's not safe to let her go...

Maan: Geet, tum nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: kya? par kyun?

Maan: meinne kaha na, tum nahi jaa sakthi, mein tumme kahin bhi lekhe jaatha hoon

Geet: nahi, mujhe aapke saath nahi jaana

Maan: Geeet, ye kaise zidd hai?

Geet: haan, sir, aap itne ziddi kyun ho?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: mujhe patha hai, aap Dhust danav ho, bahut bhure ho, aap bhi mujhe sab ke tarah apne control mein rakhna chahthe ho, haina?

Maan: isse kaun behes kar saktha? Hum kuch ehthe toh ye kuch aur samajhthi aur kuch bhi bolthi rehthi hai

Geet: aapne kuch kaha?

Maan: nahi, tumme jaana hai?

Geet: haan

Maan: toh teek hai, jao, lekhin sambalkke Geet, aur tummare saath Pinky ke alawa kaun kaun aatha hai?

Maan jaantha hai ki iss Pinky toh Geet se bhi badi buddu hai...

Geet: hum sab jaa rahe hai, aapko chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, 10 ladhkiyan aur 20 ladhke, pure class jaa rahi hai

Itne sare ladhkon bhi saath jaathe hai...kaash ye Geet mujhe apne college ke days mein hi milthi? Mein bhi aaise sab ke saath maza kartha...

But those days are gone...Maan had never missed all these, but now he feels as if he had missed out a lot...why worry Maan? Geet haina? Ab Geet ke saath jahan bhi jaana hai jaa sakthe ho...aur jaldh hi Geet tumme bhi badal degi...

Geet: ab kya soch rahe ho?

Geet si worried that he is thinking of some more reasons to stop her...

Maan smiles and he feels as if people are watching them...

Yes, everyone is watching them only...

Maan turns towards them...

They come towards him...

Friends: halo sir, nice to meet you

Maan talks with them and he is convinced that Geet would be safe in their company...

Maan: Geeet

Geet: haan

Maan: yahan aao

Geet: ab kya hai? babaji, inko yahan kyun aana tha?

Maan: Geet, ye lo

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: paise

Geet: mere paas haina, meinne Adi sir se liya haina, pehle hi

Maan had told Adi to give Geet money whenever she neede from the time of the renovation itself and it's still continuing...

Ab Maan ko kya patha ki Geet ne litna karcha kiya hai...

Aur Maan doesn't care about that...

He wants her to feel free , and Geet is not afraid to spend Maan's money...afterall it's now her money too...

Maan: ye bhi rakhlo Geet

Geet: aap ko kuch chahiye? Aap ko kuch lekhe aaoon?

Maan is happy that she asked...

Maan: teek hai

Geet: par wahan toh kuch nahi milega

Ye lo, ye ladhki toh hamesha aaise hi Maan ko pareshaan karthe rahegi...

Maan: what? mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

Geet: teek hai

Maan: OK then, enjoy your trip everyone, bye Geet

Maan leaves after seeing them off...

nice part
geet kab maan ko husband jaise treat kaise

part 20
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan wants to move forward...
though Geet wants the same shes so innocent...

part 21
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan wants Geet to be with him...
but Geet madam is planning something else...
what will Maan do now?

part 22
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet didnt expect Maan to be here...
though he didnt want her to go to this trip he still let her just for her...
hahahah...
cont soon dear...

this is damn damn damn good story i m loving this.. v nice update dear!!😃⭐️

awesome updates!!!!!