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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 23

Geet ka mission shuru ho gaya...

Geet ke jaane ke badh Maan bahut akhela mehsoos kartha...

Itne din toh akhela hi tha, par ussko kabhi itna bhura nahi laga...

Pehle toh Maan ke zindagi mein Geet nahi thi...ab th aagayi haina? Aur ab toh Maan ko Geet ki saath ki aadat padgayi hai...hamesha nahi toh bhi weekends mein saath thi...aur jab Maan ne socha ab Geet hamesha ke liye meri ho gayi hai aur 24*7 mere saath hogi toh ye pagal ladhki ne toh Maan ko phir se akhele chod dhiya hai...

Aane do ussko, mein usse strictly keh doong ki abhi kahin bhi jaana hai toh mujhse pehle permission lena padega...ye samaj thi kya pane aapko? Yahan koi akhela reh reh ke pagal ho raha hai aur ye toh chali gayi chutti manane...

Ye koi bachi hai kya? chutti manane jaane ki?

Usski shadhi ho gayi,aur bechara pathi usska kab se intrezaar kar raha hai...

Usske saath batein karne ki, shararat karne ki, aur thoda romance karne ki...

Then Maan thinks that she is still young and he shoudn't expect more from her...

It's the time to enjoy life, if he has missed it, why should Geet miss it too?

But Geet, you should be missing your MSK, haina?

Or is that only me who is missing Geet so much?

No no, she would be thinking about me only...

Maan keeps on thinking some thing or the other about Geet...

He couldn't even call her and speak with her as her mobile is not reachable...

Maan hates this place? Why on earth she should go hide in such a place?

If it's somewhere else he would have followed her easily...

But this place is a mystery for him...

But Maan has conveniently forgottem that he also used to go fpr his jungle camps and Dadi would be worried about his whereabouts...

Now he realizes his mistakes...maybe that's why babaji is punishing him...

What? when did Maan start thinking like Geet?

Maan toh yahan soch socch ke pagal ho raha hai...

Ab patha bhi nahi ye kab aayegi?

KC is suffering the most...

Maan stays at KC longer for he hates going home without Geet...

All the staff, specially Adi is having a nightmare...

He had to stay back at KC & work in the late hours of the night...

What's even worse is that Maan never thinks about dinner?

Poor Adi, Geet hothi toh kitna achch hotha?

Pinky bhi saath hogi aur kahne ko kuch na kuch toh hotha hi rehtha...

Adi is also getting tired of this long hours at work and he too decides to take a break...

Romeo and the others too feel that they needed a break...

They decide to go on a vacation...

And who will get Maan's permission?

That's the biggest problem...

Some have gone on sick leave and a few have asked permission for personnel reasons...

Maan is getting angrier day by day...and he is waiting to explode...

As usual it's Adi... poor Adi...Maan calls Adi...

Adi doesn't realize the seriousness of the situation...

He jokingly tells Maan that they have completed the last project well before time and the next project is scheduled for the next week only...

And they are all getting paid for no work at all, moreover they are tired of over working and it would be nice to take a break...

Maan gets furious but later thinks it's better for him to get this break...

He has to make some changes at home before Geet arrives...he had to shift his things...

And so he gives permission for Adi & party to take a break...

Adi thinks that Maan is also planning a jungle camping...

For those who are back working at KC it's just like a vacation as Maan is on leave...

Maan is busy thinking how to surprise Geet...

He keeps shuffling his things and arranging and rearanging things...

Also the garden is almost in full bloom and makes sure everything is perfect when Geet comes...

The servants are surprised by this new interest of Maan...

They are also much happier to do their work as it is being appreciated then and there by Maan along with the criticism...they are used only to the criticism and it's good to hear a word of praise now and them from your malik, haina?

Even without being present Geet has changed Maan so much...

He is now enjoying whatever he does...not like before, he is not only concerned about perfection of his job but also has time to appreciate the efforts put by the staff and also has the heart to look at the joy and happiness the work brings...

Now the satisfaction is there, yes , he is happy about the changes...

It's never wrong to change for the better...

What's life without change? It's boring and you get tired of the routines...

So, let's keep changing for the better...

Now Maan has leant one more lesson, if oyu think whatever oyu do is the best then you will never improve, if you want to improve keep looking for the changes...that would take you forward, else oyu would stagnate, Geet is like a river and Maan was like a stagnanat lake, she has flowed into him and taken him on her ride along with her ...

Maan has started to enjoy life, even tries the swing, enjoying the evening breeze that brings the fgragrance of the blooming garden and this place is full of life, with the bees buzzing...and the only disappointment is, Geet is not with him...

As Maan tries his hands at cooking to Nakul's surprise, he learns to make Geet's favourite Gol gappe...but poor Nakul had to suffer a lot, Maan gives him a hard time till he perfects the art of making gol gappe...'

This is crazy...Maan had never thought that cooking can be so much fun...

Definitely not for Nakul...with Maan donning the chefs cap it's nothing less than a nightmare...but thank god Geet balled Maan that evening and Maan is all set to go take her home...

Nakul is very happy that the kitchen is all for himself now...he hates intruders...specially MSK...

Geet asks Maan to come to a certain place...

When Maan goes there and waits for Geet, he only finds Adi...

Maan is surprised...

Adi says that Geet had arranged a surprise for Maan and takes the drivers seat...

Maan keeps wondering what are these guys up to?

He s sure that all this is Geet's plan...

And Adi and party have been working for Geet?

What's this babaji? Maan pays them and they serve Geet?

Maan is not angry this time and Adi is also surprised like Nakul...

Maan has been surprising everyone nowadays...all thanks to Geet...

Maan keeps staring Adi and looking out ...

He is clueless to what Geet is upto...

She is literally kidnapping him with the help of his own aadmi, Adi...

Adi couldn't control his laughter watching Maan s plight...

If it were another day Adi wouldn't dare to take a ride all alone with MSK that too when it's nothing official...

Adi breaks the silence...ha ha ha ha ha haha...

Maan: Adiii

Maan loses his temper...poor Maan he had been controlling himself for long...

Now he has to get an answer...what's wrong with everyone, they all behave strange...

But Maan has forget that nothing has changed but Maan and his attitude...

Maan: Adi, yahan koi tamasha chal raha hai kya?

Adi: nahi sir

Maan: aur tumme patha bhi hai ki hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Adi: ji sir

Maan: hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Adi: hum Geet m'am se milne jaa rahe hai

Maan thinks that this Adi is of no use...

Maan stares him...

Adi pretends to have taken his drivng too seriously...

He keeps looking forward...

Maan is puzzled as they seemed to be heading nowhere...

They aren't taking any familiar route...

Are we going to join Geet's camp?

Then Maan has not come prepared...but what's Adi doing here?

Maybe Geet invited him? Maan is suddenly disappointed...

Geet didn't invite Maan, is he too old for them?

Maan looks at himself, he is not that old...

Maybe these two years seemed to be like two decades for him as he was all alone...having no idea what he wanted and having lost interest in everything...

Maan keeps thinking and thinking but couldn't figure out anything...he gives up and decides tp ask Adi itself...maybe he should call geet...

But Geet is not attending his call...

Pinky attented and said Geet is too busy to talk with Maan...

This angered him, but he is getting restless, what's going on?

If this girl insane? Yes, she might act mad at times but what about the others?

Has everyone gone crazy?

Maan: Adi

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha

Maan: tumme ho kya gaya hai?

Adi: Maan sir?

Maan: I mean, yahan ho kya raha hai?

Adi: aap ko patha nahi sir?

Adi is surprised...

Maan then pretends to be knowing everything...

Maan: woh...aur kitne dher lagayega? Humme jaldhi pohunchna haina?

Adi: sir, we will be there soon, don't worry sir, I have informed Geet m'am that we will reach in time

Maan: haan, Geet must be worried

Adi: yes sir, Geet m'am toh bahut pareshaan the, achcha hua sara kaam waqt pe ho gaya

Maan ko patha nahi ye kaise kaam ka baat ho raha hai...

Maan: kaam teek se hua haina?

Adi: our people did a wonderful job sir, they were so happy that Geet m'am trusted them so much

Maan: what?

Maan gets curious...aakhir Geet ne kya surprise plan kiya hai?

Aur mere hi logon se kaam karwakke mujhe hi surprise kar rahi hai?

Hope she has not done anything silly...

May be she has planned a wedding reception or something?

She wanted to declare their relationship status, she might want veryone to know about their wedding...

Maan is never bothered about others, but Geet might have a few friends to share her joy with which is natural...

But she could have told about it to Maan...

Maan is not against it nor is he trying to hide anything...

For him it's not a necessity to go tell everyone about his life...his wedding...his wfey...

So, Geet wants the marriage to be approved by the so called society...

What if Maan is an anti-social animal, Geet is not like him...

That's why she is reluctant to accept their relationship?

Maan is confused but prepares himself for a nightmare...

He is made a scapegoat...for everyone to have fun Maan has to compromise, his privacy is being invaded the moment he had met Geet, this girl has stormed into his life and made him vulnerable to emotions and relations which he had always kept under ckeck, at a safe distance...

He has been living like an alien in this world and it's time for being human...

Haina Maan sir? Toh aap tayaar ho jao, you have been waiting at the banks all the while and the time has come for you to plunge into humanity...time to brush up your human skills, and smile makes us human, tears and all the emotions make us what we are...welcome to the club Khuarna sab...Geet taught you to smile, to enjoy life, she helped him find his long lost soul...

But one thing is a mystery, if at all they wished to have a reception it must have been in Delhi, why are we heading for the jungle?

Then Maan got desperate to lnow where they are going actually...

Maan: Adi

Adi has been quiet after watching Maan nervous and serious...

Adi: ji sir

Maan: ye kaisa rastha hai?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha , aap hi bhool gaye sir?

Maan: Adiii

Adi: sir

Maan stares Adi and poor Adi keeps looking at the road for he might have taken the wrong route...that's why Maan is angry...

But this is the route, Adi had just been there ...

Adi: sir, rastha toh yahi hai, shayad aap ko teek se yaad nahi hai, woh dekhiye sir

Adi shows a sign board...

Maan is shocked looking at the name board...

Geet yahan? Ye kya nayi misibat hai? babajiii...

Ab toh babaji hi Maan ko bacha sakthe...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!!!!
what surprise geet wants to give maan????
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor nakul n adi
what is geet's surprise for maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
chal kya raha hai yahan...mystery...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
Poor kc staff , nakul...maan want to change things at home ...learning to make gol gappa
Adi taking maan to some place where geet has a surprise for maan
Me too eagerly waiting to know what geet has planned
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 23
awesome dear...
very nice...
Maan is missing Geet so much...
and what has this Geet planned for him?
all are working for her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 24

Maan looks at the name board..."Rohtak 20 km"

This is Maan's native...

Maan has forgotten it after dadi...

How would Geet get here?

And Maan remembers Munshiji's visit...

It must be munshiji...

So he had persuaded Geet to come for the festival...

And see Munshiji had succeeded in getting Maan back to Rohtak...

Maan spent his childhood here before moving to delhi with his family...

So he is very popular among the old people...

They fondly remember his pranks and have been waiting to see him...

Most of them don't know him much for Maan never came back for he is disturbed by his families memories...

Dadi used to come for the festival and keep in touch with the relatives...

Maan remembers Dadi's cousin sister who is also married to the Khurana family...

All of them are very angry with Maan for not even informing them about Dadi's sudden demise...

But Maan was out of his mind and it took some days for him to realize that Dadi is no more with him, Dadi even asked her cousin sister to look for a bride for Maan...

They almost fixed Maan's marriage but Maan firmly denied to come to Rohtak as he was not willing to spoil an innocent girl's life...

Maan didn't want to give false hopes to dadi and told her that he didn't want to get married, never...

Dadi fell sick after that and never recovered...

Sometimes Maan regrets that he had troubled poor dadi a lot...he thought Dadi was worng that only marriage could bring him happiness...

Now Maan realizes that Dadi was right...here he is happy and ready for life's challenges...

And the first challenge is minutes away...

Maan has no idea what kind of a reception would he get from the few relatives left...

Munshiji is the only one Maan has met after leaving Rohtak...

Maan comes back from his thoughts...

He is now worried about Geet...

Why did she come here?

And what would she know about this place...

He is scared that Geet might not have had a warm welcome after knowing that she is Mrs.MSK...what if everyone hated her for Maan's behavior?

Ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi...kya zaroorat thi yahan aane ki?

Geet has made a big mistake coming here, that too without Maan...

She might have come here on Munshiji's request ...

So Geet has come to celebrate the festival...

And she brought the whole KC gang here?

And what would they do? Arranging a party?

And what would be the others reaction?

They might have thought that Maan send them here...

Maan ka izzat toh pehle se hi bahut karab hai, ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi kone ka...

It is not so bad as Maan thinks...

Munshiji helped Geet get to know everyone and Geet got to hear a lot of stories about Maan which she would have never known from Maan, she even doubts that Maan would remember them...she might well be using them as bed time stories for their kids...and who knows Maan would also be interested to hear them then...haina babaji?

As soon as Munshiji introduced Geet as Mrs.MSK, everyone showered her with love and blessings, they all are happy to see Dadima's bahu finally...

They are so loving and caring, and Geet wonders why would Maan miss all this affection and love? He has built a forbidden fort around himself which he also couldn't break...

Geet is the only one who had no difficulty in making her way thru it...

Now that the doors are open she needs to invite the others too, that's how Maan's life would be happier and colorful...Geet misses her family very much and she is very unforrunate to leave them, but Maan has a family which he should own with pride...they are such lovely and innocent people...

The girls of her age easily get attached to her calling her babhi or didi accordingly...

Some have even played with Maan and his siblings when young, and a few are also targets of Maan's pranks too...as Geet gets to know them more she gets to know the otherside of Maan...the naughty Maan...Geet has to bring out that Maan...he is still residing inside Maan only...it's time to wake that Maan up...

And when Geet decided to celebrate the festival this tme with them along with Maan they were so happy to help her any way they could...

Geet has got her friends too...

And their mission is made easy by the local support they got...

Adi stops the car and blows the horn to announce Maan's arrival as it is the norm to warn the others about dhak dhak's arrival at KC...

Maan comes back to reality...

He steps out and fnds in front of his home, his childhood abode...

Maan is shocked to see it in perfect shape after all these years of neglect...

This place was a little messy with thorns and bushses grown so high to make is disappear when Geet arrived...

But Geet vowed to fix it in time for the festival and along with her friends and KC staff she accomplished her mission in style...

They have cleaned the mess and repainted it...

Mended some petty damages and now it looks as good as new...

Maan walks towards the door when a couple of aunties run in to convey the message...

And sudden;y Maan finds the other dadi and he remembers her ...she is also like Dadi but Maan couldn't imagine anyone taking Dadi's place...still it's not that bad to be hack here amongst known faces...something tells him that it's only for the good, even if he doesn't need a family Geet definitely needs one, right now...

Maan feels embarrassed facing her...

What would she be thinking about his long absence?

Maan makes slow steps gathereing his strength to face the reality...

He had been escaping this for a very long time...

And now there is no more escape...Maan helped Geet get out of trouble and this Geet is dragging him into trouble...

Maan doesn't want to come face to face with dadi and so tries to enter the house hurriedly...

Dadi chases and pulls him back...

Maan is surprised...he pretends to have not noticed her...

Dadi: kahan bhaagthe ho?

Maan: Dadi? Aap?

Dadi: shaitan, mujhe patha hai ki tum kaise sab ko ullu banathe ho?

Maan: par meinne kya kiya?

Dadi: kya kiya? Abhi bathathi hoon

Maan is nervous...ab Geet ne Maan ke kitne shikayat kiya hoga?

Dadi: Geeet, Geeet puthar, jaldhi aao, mera potha jo goom ho gaya tha woh milgaya

Geet had already got the news and is running to see Maan...

In a hurry Geet couldn't stop and almost hits Dadi...

Maan holds her back and pulls her towards him...

Geet hits Maan instead and Maan catches her as she falls...

Dadi: wah rabji, kya jodi babayi aapne? Ek gadha hai toh ek pagal hai

Maan to hiss galiyan ko bahut hi miss kartha tha, Maan ki Dadi being a metro resident doesn't use such language, par ye Dadi hamesha aaise hi pyaar se daantthe hai...

She used to say that Savithri ne Maan ko bahut bigadke rakha hai, Maan ko mere paas bhejdo toh mein ussko yuhi teek kar dhoongi...

Dadi sometimes thinks that she should have done it, brought Maan to the village with her always...but Maan was so depressed that he never wanted to come back, and he was also kept busy finishing his studies and taking up the family business...

Dadi was desperately needing Maan's service...

And some how Maan got attached to KC and missed out life...he deliberately made his business his life...

Dadi: Geet, sambalkke beta

Maan wonders how Geet has won dadi's heart within days...

She is so kind to Geet...

Maan: Geeet, ye kya kar rahi ho? aandhi ho gayi ho kya?samne dkehke nahi chal sakthi?

Dadi: usko kyun daandhthe ho? tum itne din andhe ho gaye the kya? tumne toh humme dekhne bhi nahi aaye?

Maan: woh...

Maan ke paas jawaab nahi...

Maan then decides to get inside and hide somewhere...

Jab tak ye Dadi yahan hai Maan ko unke samne hi nahi aana chahiye...

She keeps pulling his legs...Maan couldn't do much for she is the eldest member of the family...even Maan is scared of her...

Dadi: Maan, kahan jaathe ho?

Maan: andar

Dadi: tum andar nahi jaa sakthe

Maan is shocked...now what will happen?

Maan stares Geet...Geet is also puzzled...

Geet looks at Dadi...

Dadi: Geet ko kyun gurthe ho? meinne hi rokha na? Geet kya karegi? Ye meri pariwaar hai aur yahan sirf meri chalthi hai, haina puthar?

Geet: ji dadi, Maan sir

Dadi: kya kaha tumne? phir se kaho?

Geet: Maan sir

Dadi: ye mein kya sunrahi hoon rabji? Ye teri naukrani hai kya? tumne issko itna darakke rakha hai? meinne pehle hi savithri ko kaha tha ki ye ladhka bahut bigadgaya hai, mere paas do din bhejna, par savithri toh sunthi hi nahi thi

Dadi remembers her sister and her eyes moisten...

Geet: Maaan

Maan is shocked...

Geet is trying to distract dadi...she is feeling sad na?

Maan looks at Geet surprised...

Geet apne aakhon se maafi mangthi...

Geet: Maan

Geet's voice lowers seeing Maan's reaction

Dadi also looks a little surprised...

Geet: hum kuch bhool gaye hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: humme Dadi ke aashirvaad nahi lena?

Maan: haan, mein bhi bhool gaya tha

Maan takes this oportunity to cool Dadi...

They bow and get dadi's aashirvaad...

Dadi: hamesha saath raho aur aaise hi kush raho, aur haan, Dadi ko kabhi mat bhoolna

Geet: suna aapne? Aap itne pyaare Dadi ko kaise bhool sakthe

Many heads peep out to see Maan...

Aunties, uncles, cousins, children...

They too want to talk with Maan but is afraid of dadi, they are waiting for Dadi's orders...

Geet: ab chalo, andar chalthe hai

Dadi: abhi nahi

Maan is losing his patience...he is made a show piece...

All eyes are on him, which Maan hates...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Nice surprise geet gave to maan
All waiting to see maan
Dadi ...great
Ab aage kya kya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
bechara maan phans gaya...he he he...maaja agaya...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice
geet is becoming bridge between maan n his family

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