*NAMELESS* A SanDhir OS

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

The last part got to me so much that I had a lost smile on my face. The anguish within her, wanting to know his answer, beseechingly looking at his face and hoping that he wouldn't disappoint her.

'I wouldn't even have waited for the rope, I'd have jumped right away'.

This part just did it for me. Brilliantly penned, and so lovely. Kudos!

-Raina

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Appy, I can't describe the feeling after reading this OS.man I badly wanted my SanDhir. At first when Vid drowned, I wanted Sanyu to be in her place but then we wouldn't have have gotten that breathtaking line at the end. He sure could do anything for her. And look at her, feeling so jealous and insecure which eventually led to a blurt. Great going. Hope your exam went well. Good Luck. Thanks a lot for the pm as well, continue writing.

Lots of love xxx

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

It is wonderful awesome superb os

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hema

@froots93

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Arpita how can you write so beautifully!! This was so awesome!!

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Greeshma

@pulu1995

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

What a beautiful piece.

I wanna read more of ur works now.. where can I find 'em?

The dialogues, their expressions.. written soo well

Perfect.

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

WOW!!!!!!!!!

Superb Arpitha di!!!!!!!
I just loved it!!!!!!!

Dialogues...restlessness...everything was perfect!

Keep writing!

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

It was so good Arpita... Randhir and Sanyukta are not even on talking terms... Sanyukta felt neglected and jealous, when she saw the proximity between Randhir and Vidushi. Last part was my favourite as expected when she asked what would he have done, if it were her instead of Vidushi and he replied that he didn't even ask for rope, he jumped right away.