Critique: Go easy on me...(May 29)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

I just watched the episode..Twice.. 😆😆😆 Well, had to.. Needless to say, it was one of the best episodes ever...Amazing song choices, brilliant execution of them (hats off to the director/choreographer again) and above all, great dialogues/story pace/acting.. Karan keeps on overstepping his own limitations in terms of acting.. Not that he has many but he simply blew me away.. Kasturi was quite better than previous episodes and I have to say that she didnt dampen the scenes too much today.. I am not going to analyze the episode cuz we already have some brilliant analyses today.. But here are few things that I wanted to change a bit...

1. The hug scene.. Where Kasturi hugs Robbie... Well Karan should have been directed to act like a person who just saw light at the end of a tunnel.. No doubt he was good but he could have rocked the scene more had he acted with his eyes open, looking to the sky as if telling God that he just can't believe his fate.. that his dreams are becoming a reality... and the very girl he so terribly loves is in his embrace at that moment... The director should've treated it like one of the scenes where he sighs looking at the stars.. with expressions of both unbearable happiness and the "khushi ke ansoo" that keep rolling down his face.. Rather than having him simply hold Kasturi's head with one hand and closing his eyes..I think Karan Patel is capable of carrying out such a scene with quite a perfection.. I wished I'd seen that instead.. 😍

2. Moreover, instead of breaking his embrace and telling Kasturi that he would never leave her n stuff, he could have simply thought out the same lines instead of verbalizing them.. I mean he could have narrated the dialogues in his thoughts and as a promise to himself and to the world that he would never leave Kasturi... (Unless daal mai kuch kala ho.. which I doubt .. But hey, its an Ekta serial and anything is possible here..😕)

3. When he told Kasturi to put her hand on her heart.. He should have held her hands up high and placed it over her heart.. That way, it would seem as if he is making Kasturi listen to her own heart beat... Like Kasturi does it but rather at his directives than by herself..In my humble opinion, that would've rocked!!!😉

4. When she hugs him.. Karan's arms were extended as if he anticipated the hug.. Instead, they should've shown him to be shocked n puzzled at the hug as if he didnt expect it and later on extends his arms to embrace her fully in them... Just a mere suggestion.. 😳

5. I hope there is no ONS.. I hate those.. Love isnt only that.. For heaven's sake, I hope they show the side of love where u can spend the night away staring at your beloved and simply enjoying the silence in his embrace rather than doing other things.. 😊

Rest, I loved the episode.. I was sooo damn happy that they played "tere bin".. If u guys recall, I made a video mix on this song a few days back.. So I was quite ecstatic to see this song.. Simply fabulous treatment.. 👏👏

Alritey.. that was it.. Hope I didnt bore y'all..
Love, Sana~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u and bore us sana! 😆 😆 😆 lolz!neva dat's not possible! 😆 😆 😆
awesum critque!yah i totally agree wid u on ur pointers maybe u should join da creative head team! 👏 👏
robbie should've held her hand and placed on her heart and yah wneh she embrqaced him he should've been suprised and puzzled and then slowly embraced her!😳
it was a superb episode!finally kasuri expressed her luv! 😃
but dey left us at a cliffhanger!can't wait 2 c wat robbie's mother tries 2 do now! 😉 like dey say luv always finds a way! 😉
awesum job sana! 👏 👏 i enjoyed it! 😉

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dii, ur direction seems more interesting...more at karan being shocked at the hug...tht would have been awesome.. 😳

amu~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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You guys are so funny! 😆 This is'nt an "analysis" all your doing is pointing out mistakes.what about all the stuff that WAS done right..... 😳 😳 😳 and besides we should'nt be bothered by RObbie cause he did excellent as compared with Subhangi!..she's rally making Karan look bad here.....and im still not won over by her acting.... 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smartc

Hey guys,

I just watched the episode..Twice.. 😆😆😆 Well, had to.. Needless to say, it was one of the best episodes ever...Amazing song choices, brilliant execution of them (hats off to the director/choreographer again) and above all, great dialogues/story pace/acting.. Karan keeps on overstepping his own limitations in terms of acting.. Not that he has many but he simply blew me away.. Kasturi was quite better than previous episodes and I have to say that she didnt dampen the scenes too much today.. I am not going to analyze the episode cuz we already have some brilliant analyses today.. But here are few things that I wanted to change a bit...

Haha... I know there has been some brilliant anlayses today, with the humble exception of my ramblings😳 kya karoon... couldn't help it😆 But I agree Di, the episode was on the shores, and Kasturi wasn't all that bad today either. Songs "Tere Bin" and "Bheegi Bheegi" pulled some heart strings as did the heavenly "Mitwa" once more... Karan did a mighty job once more, that's improvement. The man has more than just words to express. 👏

1. The hug scene.. Where Kasturi hugs Robbie... Well Karan should have been directed to act like a person who just saw light at the end of a tunnel.. No doubt he was good but he could have rocked the scene more had he acted with his eyes open, looking to the sky as if telling God that he just can't believe his fate.. that his dreams are becoming a reality... and the very girl he so terribly loves is in his embrace at that moment... The director should've treated it like one of the scenes where he sighs looking at the stars.. with expressions of both unbearable happiness and the "khushi ke ansoo" that keep rolling down his face.. Rather than having him simply hold Kasturi's head with one hand and closing his eyes..I think Karan Patel is capable of carrying out such a scene with quite a perfection.. I wished I'd seen that instead.. 😍

I couldn't have said it better myself! But one point I don't exactly coerce with... The "khushi ki aansoon". I think Karan is capable of getting much more expression through with a single intensive hold of the sky with his eyes... And I think a "glazed" or layer of film indicating the presence of moist passion would have been amazing! The rest is done by the man exquisitely😃 But I also have to say that I think the closed eyes (to me), reflects depth... and so I was good with that. Just at some point while he embraced her with his eyes closed, I think he could have gently lifted his eye lids and looked high up... Meh, what do I know, you're the video genius here!😳

2. Moreover, instead of breaking his embrace and telling Kasturi that he would never leave her n stuff, he could have simply thought out the same lines instead of verbalizing them.. I mean he could have narrated the dialogues in his thoughts and as a promise to himself and to the world that he would never leave Kasturi... (Unless daal mai kuch kala ho.. which I doubt .. But hey, its an Ekta serial and anything is possible here..😕)

110% agree with this point... "Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan"😳😃😆

3. When he told Kasturi to put her hand on her heart.. He should have held her hands up high and placed it over her heart.. That way, it would seem as if he is making Kasturi listen to her own heart beat... Like Kasturi does it but rather at his directives than by herself..In my humble opinion, that would've rocked!!!😉

Again, 110% agree! This scene kinda reminded me of one of my all time movies Dil Chahta Hai, where Preity makes Aamir do something similar. But I think the affect would have been greater had he taken her hand and laid it upon her heart...

4. When she hugs him.. Karan's arms were extended as if he anticipated the hug.. Instead, they should've shown him to be shocked n puzzled at the hug as if he didnt expect it and later on extends his arms to embrace her fully in them... Just a mere suggestion.. 😳

Ditto!! Remember the good ol' KAA days... PS and IK when she confesses... *sighs*

5. I hope there is no ONS.. I hate those.. Love isnt only that.. For heaven's sake, I hope they show the side of love where u can spend the night away staring at your beloved and simply enjoying the silence in his embrace rather than doing other things.. 😊

Agree! Agree! Agree! Heck, I dunno what love is... but from the little I do know, its more than just the meeting of two bodies... Like you said, sitting in one's beloved's embrace or taking them into your eyes whilst speaking in silence is apt.😃

Rest, I loved the episode.. I was sooo damn happy that they played "tere bin".. If u guys recall, I made a video mix on this song a few days back.. So I was quite ecstatic to see this song.. Simply fabulous treatment.. 👏👏

Atif *hand on heart*... sensational stuff~

Alritey.. that was it.. Hope I didnt bore y'all.. never my LWF😉
Love, Sana~

Sana Di, I'm telling you... drop everything and go to Balaji or Bwood for that sake! Only an utter fool could turn you down at this pace... You're dipped in finess~

👏👏

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yeah today's epi was one of the best

karen and shubanghi rocked 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aweosme critque! u r so right! i was thniknig that 2 about robbie putting kasturi's hand on her heart and making her listen to her heartbeat i must say this has been the most romantic sweet and cute epi till now and hope 2 see more with improvements that u have talked about! anyways i wish u were the creative director at least we would have got to see a lot or romantic and cute scenes! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujal_kashish

u and bore us sana! 😆 😆 😆 lolz!neva dat's not possible! 😆 😆 😆
awesum critque!yah i totally agree wid u on ur pointers maybe u should join da creative head team! 👏 👏
robbie should've held her hand and placed on her heart and yah wneh she embrqaced him he should've been suprised and puzzled and then slowly embraced her!😳
it was a superb episode!finally kasuri expressed her luv! 😃
but dey left us at a cliffhanger!can't wait 2 c wat robbie's mother tries 2 do now! 😉 like dey say luv always finds a way! 😉
awesum job sana! 👏 👏 i enjoyed it! 😉

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O



Jasmine..... Oh my gosh!!! Are u kidding me?? I will make omelette of the creativity there if I were ever to join for even one shot 😆😆😆~ I dont consider myself creative at all.. I dont know why but it has never settled well with me ya know.. I think creativity is what my pals Sareeta and Neetu narrate in their fanfics.. U should see the direction there.. In mere words, these ladies end up explaining heavens more than I can ever put into action.. But I appreciate your kind words tremendously and am forever obliged for such confidence that show in me... 🤗

xoxo, Sana~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Spandana*

dii, ur direction seems more interesting...more at karan being shocked at the hug...tht would have been awesome.. 😳

amu~



Spanduuuuuu.. Babez... I concur.. Haye.. Ur pm is soo cute.. Will reply back to ya there 😳~

xoxo, Sana~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara_13_9

You guys are so funny! 😆 This is'nt an "analysis" all your doing is pointing out mistakes.what about all the stuff that WAS done right..... 😳 😳 😳 and besides we should'nt be bothered by RObbie cause he did excellent as compared with Subhangi!..she's rally making Karan look bad here.....and im still not won over by her acting.... 😕



Zaara.. No offense intended but did u see the subject of my post?? It says "critique".. Defined as "article or essay criticizing a literary or other work; detailed evaluation; review"... I suggest reading the subject prior to commenting on the post.. And my pointers are not there to point out mistakes.. Besides, I applauded the director and the actor in the starting words.. Constructive criticism should be appreciated, rather than mocked at..

Sana~
Edited by smartc - 18 years ago

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