Critique: Go easy on me...(May 29) - Page 2

Originally posted by: desi chic

Sana Di, I'm telling you... drop everything and go to Balaji or Bwood for that sake! Only an utter fool could turn you down at this pace... You're dipped in finess~

👏👏

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: happyface

Yeah today's epi was one of the best

karen and shubanghi rocked 😳

Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

aweosme critque! u r so right! i was thniknig that 2 about robbie putting kasturi's hand on her heart and making her listen to her heartbeat i must say this has been the most romantic sweet and cute epi till now and hope 2 see more with improvements that u have talked about! anyways i wish u were the creative director at least we would have got to see a lot or romantic and cute scenes! 😳

2. Moreover, instead of breaking his embrace and telling Kasturi that he would never leave her n stuff, he could have simply thought out the same lines instead of verbalizing them.. I mean he could have narrated the dialogues in his thoughts and as a promise to himself and to the world that he would never leave Kasturi... (Unless daal mai kuch kala ho.. which I doubt .. But hey, its an Ekta serial and anything is possible here.. )

After watching the episode three times, the whole daal wich kuch kala ho notion, I'm expecting something to happen to make this all go poof. After all, this is Ekta's Serial as you said, and in one week, I'm all EEEing and the next week, I'm wondering WHAT! Watching her serials, it's like being on a roller coaster, up and down, up and down and at times, it's a neverending cycle.😊

4. When she hugs him.. Karan's arms were extended as if he anticipated the hug.. Instead, they should've shown him to be shocked n puzzled at the hug as if he didnt expect it and later on extends his arms to embrace her fully in them... Just a mere suggestion..

YES YES! That's what I was hoping to happen, he should have been a little shocked that she's hugging him. I love the hug and all, but the expression should have been of shock...

5. I hope there is no ONS.. I hate those.. Love isnt only that.. For heaven's sake, I hope they show the side of love where u can spend the night away staring at your beloved and simply enjoying the silence in his embrace rather than doing other things..

WORD! Why can't they just get into the cottage and stare at each other and give us some inner dialogue instead of ONS! I mean, they already have enough problems to deal with, let's not add the ONS.

I loved Tere Bin and Bheegi, and Karan Patel's expression during those sequences, were fabulous. He's impressive. Another great analysis/critique, I love reading different POVs on the same episode, it makes me notice things that I didn't before.

Skylar

Originally posted by: smartc

Hey guys,

I just watched the episode..Twice.. 😆😆😆 Me too, couldn't help but watch it more than once.Well, had to.. Needless to say, it was one of the best episodes ever I agree with you completely, one of the best episodes till date in Kasturi...Amazing song choices, brilliant execution of them (hats off to the director/choreographer again) and above all, great dialogues/story pace/acting.. Karan keeps on overstepping his own limitations in terms of acting.. Not that he has many but he simply blew me away.. Kasturi was quite better than previous episodes and I have to say that she didnt dampen the scenes too much today.Aah so true, when you think Karan can't impress anymore, he shocks you again with another dose of fantabulous performances -- god do I even need to mention his eyes? He steals the limelight from around everyone, when his eyes are concentrated upon and he emotes through them👏. I am not going to analyze the episode cuz we already have some brilliant analyses today.. But here are few things that I wanted to change a bit...

1. The hug scene.. The director should've treated it like one of the scenes where he sighs looking at the stars.. with expressions of both unbearable happiness and the "khushi ke ansoo" that keep rolling down his face.. Rather than having him simply hold Kasturi's head with one hand and closing his eyes..I think Karan Patel is capable of carrying out such a scene with quite a perfection.. I wished I'd seen that instead.. 😍

Hmmm, Sana you definitely have traits of a director inside of you😆😛 You know even though I'm quite satisfied with the scene -- some more focus onto the elements you just mentioned, would enhance the scene and it's impact much more. I kind of wished whilst Kasturi was realizing her love for Robbie, he took tiny steps backwards, and she came forward and hugged him, and he slowly hugs her back and then tightly(I don't know, do you get what I mean?)😳

2. Moreover, instead of breaking his embrace and telling Kasturi that he would never leave her n stuff, he could have simply thought out the same lines instead of verbalizing them.. I mean he could have narrated the dialogues in his thoughts and as a promise to himself and to the world that he would never leave Kasturi... (Unless daal mai kuch kala ho.. which I doubt .. But hey, its an Ekta serial and anything is possible here..😕)

Yea, I felt when they broke away from the embrace -- it was an interruption -- I agree they could have had him just say those lines in his mind -- this way the hug wouldn't be interrupted and we could see more of it😆😉 Hm, I hope the daal is healthy -- cause Robbie's love seems genuine and his state of mind, state of behavior, state of emotions all seem to point towards that, esp Devika's feeling of uneasiness of noticing something is different...

3. When he told Kasturi to put her hand on her heart.. He should have held her hands up high and placed it over her heart.. That way, it would seem as if he is making Kasturi listen to her own heart beat... Like Kasturi does it but rather at his directives than by herself..In my humble opinion, that would've rocked!!!😉

Hmm, you know when I first saw the scene, I thought Kasturi had placed her hand on Robbie's chest😆 cause of the coat, but then I realized and remembered she was wearing his coat😆 I liked how they played heart beats in the background -- somehow I think they should've just played that and left out the song and then continued the song when she hugs him..

4. When she hugs him.. Karan's arms were extended as if he anticipated the hug.. Instead, they should've shown him to be shocked n puzzled at the hug as if he didnt expect it and later on extends his arms to embrace her fully in them... Just a mere suggestion.. 😳

5. I hope there is no ONS.. I hate those.. Love isnt only that.. For heaven's sake, I hope they show the side of love where u can spend the night away staring at your beloved and simply enjoying the silence in his embrace rather than doing other things.. 😊

OMG I hope not...I would want them to have snow ball fights instead and talk the night away, staring at stars (sounds cheesy, but I would love to see it😳) Also, like you said spending the night in each other's arms with silence voicing their feelings definitely would be amazing as well, just not ONS -- I'm so sick of these...just because you're alone with your lover, doesn't necessarily always have to constiitute to ONS..please BT something different😛

Alritey.. that was it.. Hope I didnt bore y'all.. Not at all, it was a pleasure reading your thoughts

love

Soni