Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi )ff 6th CHAPTR UPDATED... - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chaptr 1

Character sketch aak: Aak the superstar in the city of Bhopal...all gals hav craze for him...he is a passionate singer...rude ..he thinks everythg shld be according to him he loves perfection..he choses frnds who r perfect nd talented

His galfrnd afreen is a symbol of perfection...she is his neighbor..nd frm young she is inspired by aak's singing nd his number 1 fan...she is doing her 2 yr M.com... nd usually tops in her college

Aak likes her perfection nd is very much attracted to her perfection.. aak is 25yrs old

Afreen 24 yrs old.aak has finished his engineering nd now done wth his MBA

Kabir : aak's big bro...who looks aftr the whole khan empire...he is looking aftr khan chain of hotels nd companies...

Rashid nd dillshad :aak's nd kabir's parents

Rashid has 3 children ; kabir aak nd najma...

Siddiqie mansion

Gaffur has 3 young daughters

Zoya: 20 yrs

Humaira: 18 yrs...

Nuzzat ; 16 yrs..

Zoya doing her 3rd yr bbm...in excel college..she is bindaas gal...fun loving carefree she enjoys life to the core

Nd an averager in college...usually she likes extra curricular activites more than studies...

She is uaually into sports dancing nd dramatics

Gaffur house sm

Gaffur shouting zoyaaa...

Zoya ; uff abu...whts up...kyon chila rahe ho...

Gaffur : beta...tu tho janthi hai...tera nikaah bachpan se hi...humne kabir ke saath fix kiya hai...mere dost Rashid ka bada beta kabir...aur kal hum sab mazar jaa rahe hai... unse milkar risthe ke bharemain baat karne

Zoya : yep abu...waise bhi muje kya tension...I trust ur choices...nd moves to her room

Zoya humi nuzzat...all three discussing waise humare jiju kaise dikthe honge

Zoya...: obiously handsome dashing cute hoga voh..bas mera hoga voh

Humi ; accha agar gussewala ho tho

Zoya : Tho main usse icecream kilakar usska gussa gayab kardoongi making pouts

Nuzzat : giggling nd saying api icecream kya roz available hoti hai...

Zoya ; shut up nuzzi..main kudh hi hoon na icecream...meri pyaari pyaari baathon se usse pigalna hi hoga

Humi ; dont u think tume lov marriage karna chayiye..

Zoya : nikaah ke baad lov hojayegga...it will happen aftr marriage

Humi : par kya tumare khwabo main koi aatha hai aftr all every gal drms of a prince charming

Zoya : waise aatha tho hai..but sirf khwabo main..reality it never happens..nd zoya starts singing up in the bed

Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye
The one who comes into my dreams
Aake Mujhe Ched Jaaye
Comes and tease me
Usse Kaho Kabhi Samne To Aaye
Tell him to come in real life sometimes
Mere Khwaabo Mein Jo Aaye
The one who comes into my dreams

Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Vo Jaane Kahan Hain
How is he? Who is he? Where does he live?
Jiske Liye Mere Honthon Pe Haan Hai
For whom I have affirmation on My lips
Apna Hai Ya Begaana Hai Vo
Is he mine or is he someone else's?
Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsana Hai Vo
Is he a truth or just a story?
Dekhe Ghoor Ghoor Ke Yuhi Door Door Se
He stares at me from a distance
Usse Kaho Meri Neend Na Churaye
Tell him not to steal my sleep

Jaadu Sa Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai
It seems that some sort of a magic is surrounding me
Main Kya Karoon Dil Machalne Laga Hai
What should I do, my heart is
restless
Tera Deewana Hoon Kehta Hai Vo
I am Your Lover, he says that
Chup Chupke Phir Kyon Rehta Hai Vo
Still why does he stay away secretively
Kar Baitha Bhool Vo
He made a mistake
Le Aaya Phool Vo
He came with a bouquet of flowers
Usse Kaho Jaye Chand Leke Aaye
Tell him to bring the moon for me

Zoya :Waise itna kuch mereliye karnewala paida nahi huva hai...he is imagination...nd all three laugh

Next day all go to mazar... mazar scene

Rashid dillu najma kabir

Aak comes wth afreen...nd says aaj kabir bhaijaan ki would be annewali hai...my bro's dulhan

Aftr tht next number tho najma ya fir humara..

Afreen: asad bas tumse nikaah ke sapne hi tho dekthe hai always dream of marrying u...roz kuda se tume mangthe hai...bas humara ristha humesha keliye kayam ho...

Asad :laughs...accha waise tum fikar math karo humare bharemain... main ammi ko bata doonga ...bas kabir bhaijaan ke nikaah ke baad bol doonga...

Gaffur razia Zoya humi nuzzi all five come wearing designer dress

Zoya flaunting her pinkish white anarkali nd humming..chod chad ke apne salim ki gali anarkali disco chali...

Gaffur; disco nahi kabir ko dekne chali..aur haan beta zyaada bolna shuru math karna...tamez se rehna..

Zoya ; nodding jee abu..aap fikar not...

Dillu nd kabir; dillu says to kabir beta ladki tumare abu ke karibi dost gaffur ki beti hai..tum jaanthe ho na

Kabir; ladki kaisi bhi ho...I'll keep her happy ammi...duniya ki har kushi uske kadmo main dal dunga...nd I'll never let her down...

Dillu : smiles hmm tum tho humesha se ek acche bte ek accha bhai ek accha insaan bhi rahe ho...nd now u'll prove to be a good hubby also..

Afreen takes aak somwher wher people tie a thread of mannat...wishful thread

Nd zoya comes near kabir nd sees kabir nd smiles..

Kabir too smiles...

Nd breeze starts to blow bg music follows...kuch tho hai tujse raabta ..Kuch tho hai tujse raabta.. Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

All see nd start laughing...hmm lagtha hai dono ko ek dusre ka saath qubool hai nd all discuss for 5 min

Aak says afreen do u believe in all this mannat..i don't think anyone can come btw us...nd tum tho kuch zyaada hi worry karthi ho...

Afreen: asad chup chap raho na and plz tie na yeh thread humare nikaah keliye hoga..humare future long relationship keliye...asad tieing the thread on one side nd afreen tieing it on the other side...

Zoya smiles nd moves frm ther...

Aak sees kabir praying nd sits next to him nd starts to pray

Zoya accidentally collides wth peer baba...nd zoya says baba waise mera ristha qubool hogayi...

Peer baba ; hota voh hai jo kuda chayega...har kisi ki takdeer voh likta hai

Zoya smiles nd points her hand at praying kabir voh deko baba...he is the one...but will he always be ther for me..will he be my lov...will he protect me frm all kinds of danger...will he always guide me towards the right path..

Baba who was seeing zoya now turns to see her hand nd kabir who was praying bends nd aak is seen to baba

Baba; baba seeing aak...safar muskil hai...bhouth muskil.. nafrat se shuru hogi tum dono ki kahani..

Nd now Zoya turns to see kabir..kabir who was bending is in original form again... nd zoya remains confused nafrat se shuru humari kahani nd starts rofling...nd starts thinking may be baba pagal hogaye hain

ANd the thread tht aak tied of mannat losens nd falls...🤣🤣

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago
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unres

yipee updt aa gya🄳
congratulations Jilu 4 new startšŸ¤—
wonderful beginningšŸ‘
Asad is rockstar,šŸ˜ŽAfreen his fan & perfection ki dukaan & childhood love🤢
Zoya again average student Abbu ki ladli naughtiness se bharišŸ˜†
3 sis talking about Zoya's woh😳
Zoya dreamingā¤ļø aur udher Asad- Afreen dreaming 4 their marg
after small scene of Kabir I think i would have loved him wid ZOyaā­ļøšŸ˜ˆ
but i know what will happen😭
Asad Afreen ko dekh ke lagta hai Asad Zoya ka jina hram kar dega😲😔
I m scared 4 meri phoolon si najuk ZOya😭
updt soon😃
awesome startšŸ‘

aur Dillu-Kabir convo main tune galti se Rashid ki beti likha hai ja edit karšŸ¤”
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
Kabir & zoya met
She asked peer baba & he saw asad not kabir
So starting their story from nafrat & changed it to undying love
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res

unres

yipee updt aa gya🄳
congratulations Jilu 4 new startšŸ¤—
wonderful beginningšŸ‘
Asad is rockstar,šŸ˜ŽAfreen his fan & perfection ki dukaan & childhood love🤢
Zoya again average student Abbu ki ladli naughtiness se bharišŸ˜†
3 sis talking about Zoya's woh😳
Zoya dreamingā¤ļø aur udher Asad- Afreen dreaming 4 their marg
after small scene of Kabir I think i would have loved him wid ZOyaā­ļøšŸ˜ˆ
but i know what will happen😭
Asad Afreen ko dekh ke lagta hai Asad Zoya ka jina hram kar dega😲😔
I m scared 4 meri phoolon si najuk ZOya😭
updt soon😃
awesome startšŸ‘

aur Dillu-Kabir convo main tune galti se Rashid ki beti likha hai ja edit karšŸ¤”

lolzzz thanks for noticing...ClapClapClapClap aur maine edit karlišŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

lolzzz thanks for noticing...ClapClapClapClap aur maine edit karlišŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

yep asad jeena muskil karega for zoyaOuchOuchOuchOuch
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya tuje kabir pasand aagayašŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜•šŸ˜²šŸ˜²šŸ˜²
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely storyšŸ‘
Rock star asad😊😳
Naughty and bubbly zoyašŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ
Aafreen 🤢
Kabir šŸ˜‰
Super amazing😊
Please pm me if possible 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
jillu jillu ... its amazing

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