[Current Track]SwaRon OS- Rest Shocked Love Rocked :D *Part 2 updtd*

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

read both parts and loved these.
finally intelligent swayam is back.

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

amazing os sakshi🤗
loved d title-Rest Shoked love rocked
i so wished dat sumthing like dis would happen
dil ko taslli mili padh ke sacchi me

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

very nice...thnx for d PM

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesome os dear...loved both d parts...

swayam and ruhi's part was nicely penned down...

loved d way swayam confessed his love in front of everyone...

flashback was nicely described...

overall just loved d os...it was simple and sweet.. 😃

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try2149

@try2149

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

This part was just amazing sakshi.

U portrayed swayam's emotions so beautifully.

My sensible n smart swayam is back only bcoz of u.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

You know the OS is kind of perfect!

And it felt so heart warming to see the intelligent and calm swayam back.

Both the chapters were great.

I really loved the way you portrayed swayam's feelings. You truly are a great writer.

Lovely OS.

Please ameeta ko jaake thode suggestions de do. Even better... please go and take her place. 😳

Thanks for the PM

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

really Surprised with the 2nd unexpected part ... which was awsomly written 😛
swayam's reactions and expressions were described beatifully
KEEP IT UP :)

MINI

Edited by minimini66 - 11 years ago

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesome os..
Nd d bst part is d title.
Luvd it.

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