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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic
Nice to see you back with a new update

Confused about Arnav behaviour why does allow the family to treat Khushi like a outsider.

Happy he was there in time before Shyam had a chance to do anything bad to her.
Wondering what is wrong with her health hope it isn't too serious.

Looking forward to reading the next update
Thanks for the lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Finally u updated
Plz plz plz continue soon
Can't wait
Hopefully khushi will be alright
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i am reading ur story..hey can u tell me ur story will have happy ending...in ur story arnav is like monster..i didnt understand him..one second he will behave lovely with khushi..another second he will leave her..what he even want from her...it is really very very dark story..but please tell me will this story will have happy ending...will khushi sufferings will end????i really dont think anyone want to have a life like khushi and any one behave like arnav...please i think enough of khushi sufferings...i know how much arnav will repent , he is not going to make it up in his life time...
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks for the notice!

awesome update!

loved it!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for update after a long time poor khushi plz its being so long she has suffering a lot no more bad news plz hope there is no serious issue with her stomach pain n plz clear arnav pov. Does he love her or not next sooon dear đŸ„±
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran94

hey i am reading ur story..hey can u tell me ur story will have happy ending...in ur story arnav is like monster..i didnt understand him..one second he will behave lovely with khushi..another second he will leave her..what he even want from her...it is really very very dark story..but please tell me will this story will have happy ending...will khushi sufferings will end????i really dont think anyone want to have a life like khushi and any one behave like arnav...please i think enough of khushi sufferings...i know how much arnav will repent , he is not going to make it up in his life time...

i am an arshi fan so i promise an arshilicious ending 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
can't bear khushi's pain
waiting for her to get all happiness she deserves
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav was on time!
Lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 22

Her faint breaths and wincing while the pain lasted had frightened him to the core. Even while she slept, she clutched her abdomen with her hand as if it still pained. That unlabelled bottle of capsules didn't help either to figure out what was the actual reason behind this pain. Initially he thought to call their family doctor Mr. Mehta but when Khushi refused to this, he became of the view that this was something which only her doctor knew. He desperately wanted to know the reason behind her illness. He lowered her on the bed and pulled the duvet on her. A frown drew on her face which made his hands halt while they were sliding from beneath her head but when the situation was calm, he stood up and took her cell phone from the side table.

Rushing through all her contacts he finally found her doctors number. He typed it on his phone and keeping hers beside her, walked out of the room. It was late at night but he didn't give a damn to it what mattered to him was answers to his question. He immediately began talking without waiting for any reply from the other side, "Hello... Dr. Ankita, its Arnav Singh Raizada...I wanted to ask something regarding Khushi. She faced a severe abdominal pain today I want to know why it happened to her, I mean she never faced it before and she also took some red capsules which weren't labeled, could you also tell their name?" Dr.Ankita had been Khushi's doctor and she had developed affection for Khushi as a child. She had seen Khushi crying streams of tears for the devil man who was now talking to her. She was shocked that Khushi had again gone to him.

"Who are you of Khushi?"

This question made him infuriated, he had asked a question and now in reply the doctor was in turn bombarding him with question but Dr. Ankita had done this purposely, to make him guilty and to hold him responsible for his deeds. "I am her husb..." and then he stopped; the answer had seemed a piece of cake but was very difficult indeed. And then finding no other alternative he answered the obvious; "I am her children's father." "Sorry Mr. Raizada, in that case we can only provide you information regarding your children." "But it's related to your patients health" he argued. "It's also related to her security." And the phone was hung up. He threw his cell on the bed, nothing in this world seemed eager to solve his situation but if that was the case, he would help him himself. He marched to her room and quietly started rummaging through her closet. In the end he found a pile of files under heap of clothes each numbered from 1 to 9. It took him a second to realize that they were her pregnancy files but even if they were everything was useful if it were related to her health. He went through them one by one and didn't even realize that he had started crying by reading what was written in them. Starting from the first one to the last the reports were negative and her health had deteriorated excessively till the end. What was recommended was an abortion but she didn't have it. The second recommendation was to have a scissor operation but she didn't have it. Her diet intakes showed that her nutritional values had been flawless yet her health didn't cope. He felt angry for in this situation no one else had been responsible for these heaps of negative results than him for she must have cried just as she did now and she must have been depressed. The Sonography report paper had the texture of being a paper thoroughly wet and then dried up...yes she must have cried...she had called Aman this time and not him for he never answered her calls or messages. This time something had held him from cutting the call. "Arnav ji..." she had said while crying "...please come to me Arnav ji...I want us to see our baby together...I want to hear its heartbeats with you...please Arnav ji...say that you'll come...please..." and he had cut the call. He had missed the best moment and spoiled it for her. Then his answers appeared before him. Due to this critical pregnancy she needed an operation otherwise unpunctual abdominal pains would persist. And when he turned over there were no more files meaning she was dealing the problem on a short term basis till now. He felt miserable and angry on both of them, Angry on himself for being careless about her and their children, angry on her because she neglected her health. He went to her while tears running from his eyes and placed wet, open mouth kisses on her every body part which was bare wherever he willed. Her eyes, forehead, chin, nape, ears and then he began to place little bites, Khushi woke up while he kissed and bit but she said nothing and kept her eyes low so that he didn't realize. Then he stopped, realizing the madness that had took over him, he turned back and began to move away. Khushi, who had kept a statue till now held his hand shocking him and then she plead him in a low voice "Please don't leave me today...please..." He sat beside her, lost about what he came to know and what he had been doing few minutes back. Khushi made herself sit upright and looked at him blankly, he said "I..." She placed her hand on his mouth stopping him from justifying his act. She came forward and kissed him on his forehead while a lone tear escaped his eyes. Then he, with his gaze glued on her took hold of her shoulders and made her lay down and slowly he began to lower himself, to the point that his entire body rested on hers. He kissed her lips and then slowly sucked, first her upper lip and then the lower one while her hands combed his hair. When she slightly parted her lips, without waiting he took advantage of the opportunity and completely invaded her mouth. She let out a gasp, unable to control the sudden attack but then gradually she began to reciprocate letting him access to her sweet nectar. They didn't part for they didn't feel any need of oxygen but of each other. They he made his way to her neck and licked, bit, kissed in every manner he could and his madness was encouraged by her sweet moans. His hands meanwhile began to slide her kurti exposing her bra straps which too were shortly removed. He then move to her bare upper body, his tortures had reached heights, she let out frequent moans, her hands now roamed on his back. He kissed each of her breasts in turn and bit them leaving red marks. Khushi didn't stop him as he continued, not even once she said him to leave her nor did she ask him justifications of his previous acts. He made love to her...the two souls were once again united and once again without any name to their relation.

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Precap: "Khushi, swear on me, our children, our love that you will accept any decision I take for our future life without any argument," said Arnav while holding her hand. "I will," she replied with an assuring nod.

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Posted: 11 years ago
thats awsome as well emotional uodate..loved it...
precap sounds good..
continue soon..

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