OS : Rajbala : 'My life changed in a night'

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys.. I m wrirting a FF on Rishbala n got a wonderful response.. So again thought to write something on Rajbala.. First I thought I will write in English version.. But later I realized if I write it in English then Raja's expressions were never sketched as the show.. So decided to write it in hindi.. Hope u like it..
Madhu's POV
"Choro mujhe Raju.. Raju I said leave my hand" I was continously asking him to leave.. But he didnt and I myself couldnt.. He held my hand tightly n dragged me down from the stairs.. He was too stronger than me so I couldnt free myself.. He stopped in mid - stairs n looked at me.. "Sshhh.. Chup... Kitni baar hum tumhe bataye ki hum Raju nhi hai.. Raja hai.. Tumhare pati Raaja.." He streched his name n I became furious "Nhi.. Tum mere pati nhi ho aur na hi mein tumhari patni.." But he didnt reply n started dragging me down n forcefully made me sit in the car.. Sunny was shouting but his so called gunds were hold him tightly so he was also unable to do anything.. I looked at my family with teary eyes n slowly my vision got blured as the car left the place.. Suddenly I felt a touch on my cheeck.. I turned my eyes he was wiping my eyes.. I immediately removed his hand with a jerk.. "Hum apne Rani k ankho mein ansu nhi dekh sakte.. Bohot pyar karte hai hum tumse Rani.. Aur tum jab humare parivaar se milogi na dekhna kaise sab pagla jayenge.. Saar pe baitha rakhenge tumko.." I gave him a deadly irritating look n turned my face another side.. "Mujhe pata hai Rani tum kya soch rahi ho.. Woh film o mein jaise gari se khudke bhag te hai tum bhi wahi karne ki soch rahi ho hai na..Par iska bhi haal hai mere paas.." He was talking rubbish continuously n I was looking outside.. Tears were repeatedly flowing from my eyes.. Just then felt something on my hand.. I looked n I was shocked.. He locked my hand with his by a handcuffs.. What the hell.. Is he mad.. Finally I decided to speak.. "Tum ye kya kar rahe ho.. Mera haat kholo.." I spoke furiously.. "Yeh hui na baat.. Ab jake hum apni Rani ki awaaz sune.. Aur yeh haatkari toh ab ghar jake hi khulegi.. Ab agar tum gari se khudna bhi chaho to hum bhi tumhare sath girenge.. Aur hum toh tumhare pati hai.. Tum thodi na apne suhaag ko maut k muh mein dhakeloge.. Hai na.." He smirked at me.. I was not able to tolerate him anymore.. He was so cute innocent before.. But now he became a wild,a murderer.. "Pyare kanha yeh konsi raste pe aap mujhe le ja rahe ho.." I was thinking all this n I didnt remember when I went to sleep.. I woke up n saw myself in his arms.. I looked up,he was also sleeping.. I immediately settled myself.. He also woke up "Rani tum uth gai.. Sote hue tum kitni pyari lagti ho.." Again he started.. I fed up.. I turned my face outside.. "Hum yeh kaha hai.. Yeh konsi jagah hai.." All these questions were running in my mind when suddenly the car stopped.. I turned his side.. There was a huge house just like Raajmahal.. He looked me n spoke "Ye hai mara.. Nhi.. Humara ghar.. Raja aur Rani ki.. Chalo aao hum tumhe hamare tauji n baiji se milwate hai.." We both came out from the car.. We entered inside.. A man was sitting on a cot at outside.. He saw him n immediately came near him "Tauji kaise hai aap.." And they had a convo.. I looked all around when he called me n dragged me neat tauji.. "Tauji yeh humari patni hai.." He spoke n his tauji looked at me.. A lady also came n he introduced her as his baiji.. I took their blessing as they were elder than me.. Baiji asked me "Apne pati k pair nhi chuogi bahu??" I looked at him.. "Arey nhi baiji yeh toh humari Rani hai.. Aur hum toh apni Rani ko pairo nhi dil mein rakhte hai.. Hai na Rani.." He spoke n I gave him a whatever look but she again spoke.. No no she ordered me to take blessing from me.. Now unwillingly I did it.. She again spoke "Yeh humare ghar ka niyam hai.. Bahu jab pehli baar sasural ati hai toh sabke aur apne pati k bhi pair chute hai.. Aur ab tum humari ghar ki bahu ho.. Humari Raja ki dharam patni.. To hum yeh ummeed karenge aap iss ghar ki niyam manenge.." I stood there blankly.. She was going inside but stopped again n turned at me angrily.. "Saar pe pallu bahu o ki laaj hoti hai bahu.. Humesha saar ko pallu se dhak k rakho.." And she hide my head with my saree n left.. "Raja kya kaam tha mujhe torture karne k liye ki pyare kahna ne inhe bhi meri zindagi mein shamil kardi.. Iss ek raat mein meri zindagi kaha se kaha chali gai.." I thought myself.. My whole life changed in a night..
It was my first Os.. If I did miskakes then lemme know please.. Waiting for likes n comment..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaayyy I m first... Lets party...
So nice update.. Really Raja is a charming..
Thanx for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! Thanks for providing much-needed reliefs on stressful workdays!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It felt good... to read it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sry my lyk button nt wrkin...nice os...thanks fr beimg my frnd
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice👍🏼 . Although i'd have loved it wid different happy ending but since its ur idea so 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os dear...but plz try to write in english...i dont understand hindi well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a beautiful os...keep writing dear...thanks for pm...

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