Betrayal - ZaYa OS - Page 4

Oh gosh this was suchhh a beautiful OS Jyo

I'm head over heels in love with all your writings!

It was nice to see Aaliya not forgiving Zain so easily. Totally loved the whole scene. I wish makers realise this and they too show an adamant Aaliya not ready to let Zain do whatever he feels like. And that small piece of paper was such a beautiful touch to the OS. I'm suree Aaliya might've melted on reading that.

Although I wish the OS was longer, it couldn't have a perfect ending than this one < 33

Keep giving us such fantastic pieces of your writings:)) it's a treat reading all of them :)

I love this Os! Aliyas pain is celery shown and her faith that maybe zain would trust her was saddening to see broken but I loved how zain did return for her but four months later that's a long time for separation :O but the way he waited hours for her and since she didn't come her went to her room I loved how he just was observing and how Aliyas routine for the four moths was shown that she couldn't sleep and night due to zains thoughts so tiredness in the afternoon led her to sleep and when she woke and wasn't sure if she was dreaming was cute! Then the way she gave zain the opportunity to speak was a change as zain didn't let her finish her point and then the way zain begged her to come back was nice and when aliya spoke I'm their language and dialect regarding paying her back the money she paid to prove she was right shows her strength as a person but as soon as she went to her room she broke down because she wanted to go back with him but she needed him the realise his mistake and the love letter killed me!!!' I really felt my heart melt and eyes fill up that's how amazing that moment was :) thanks for the pm :)

very emotional yaar
loved it <3 <3 aliya did right

Its beautiful.
Damn, I hate life right now. I cannot even properly express my opinions on the wonderfully written pieces due to time restraints.