Ishra new os : maine dard diya hai..ehsaas hai mujhko uss dard ka

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It was the Sunday evening for bhalla house . Everyone

Was in pammi's house except ruhi , Ishita and Raman .

Raman was working in his laptop.



Raman : Ruhi..beta homework complete kiya..??

Ru : nahi papa..mamma karane waali hain .

R : Par beta woh kahaan hain ?

Ru : Papa woh mere liye chocolate shake bana rahi hain . Aap piyoge ..??

R : No ..ruhi aap piyo apne ishi maa ke haathon ka chocolate shake .

Ru : ok..

Ishita enters with chocolate shake :

Ishita : Ruhi beta..meri princess jaldi se apna favourite shake piyo..

R : Aa gayi madras an ..( in his mind )

Ru : Mumma main ise drink karne ke baad play karoongi phir apna homework complete karoongi.

I : ok..my rooh..pehle piyo to beta..

She drinks her shake :

Ru : Mumma main ab jaaun play karne ?

I : ofcourse ..pehle mumma ko kissi do..

Ru : ok..( she kisses her )

Raman is hearing all this and seeing with joy :

R : ruhi tum papa ko kissi nahi dogi..??

( Ishita smiles )

Ru : haan papa ..doongi naa..( she also kisses him )

I : jaao beta khelne ..aur haan beta no fighting with shravan ..ok..??

Ru : ok mamma..

I : good baby..

Ru : Bye mumma papa..

Ishra : Bye..

She goes away :

I : Raman aap chai lenge yaa coffee..??

R : No.thanxx..mujhe kadwi cheez pasand nahi hai ..

I : aap kehna kya chaah rahe hain ..?? Aap meri chai ki buraai kar rahe ho..??

R : Are waah..mere saath rehte rehte samajhdaar ho gayi ho.

I : Very funny..

R : Ab khadi kya ho ..mere liye fridge se soft drink laao.

I : laati hoon ..praanth..paithyon..

R : Offo..ab shuru ho gayi madrasan.

I : Are had hai..ab main kuch keh bhi nahi sakti kya..??

R : kaho ..par yahaan nahi ..apne kalyaan mandapam me jaakar.

I : huh..raavan kumar.

She goes and raman smiles for teasing her :

I : Lo..

R : thanxx..

I : waise raman ..mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi..simmi ke bare me..

R : kaho..

I : raman dekhiye..kuch din pehle jo bhi hua hai..woh sab ka effect simmi par sabse jyaada hua hai..to main chaahti hoon ki hum uske liye kuch kare jisse woh khush ho jaaye aur us parmeet ko bhulaane ki koshish kare.

R : par ishita yeh thoda difficult nahi hoga.??

I : mujhe pata hai raman but try to kar hi sakte hain.

R : ok...kuch sochta hoon..

I : good .

Then ishita's phone rings :

I : mera phone hai..dining table par..main lekar aati hoon..

R hmm..

She goes :

R : kitna sochti hai ye madrasan mere family ke liye..ruhi ke liye..simmi ke liye..aur mere liye. ( He smiles for what he said ( mere liye ) )

R : oh..iski baton ne to meri drink bhi garam kar di.Ab mujhe ice cubes lene jaana hoga.

He goes and ishita enters.They both bump each other.ishita falls on raman.

I : aiyooo...

R : ohhooo..kya aiyooo..tumse zyaada dard mujhe ho raha hai..ek haathi jo mujh par sawaar hai..Ab hatogi bhi..

I : sorry..sorry..very sorry..

R : mumma...meri kamar..

They both stand and look at each other :

I : Raman ..very sorry ..mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap baahar aa rahe hain..sorry..waise

Aaiye..main aapko baam laga deti hoon ..

R : haan..yeh achcha hai ..pehle 3 baar giraao..balm lagaane jaao ..bala ki taarif karne me busy ho jaao ..aur mujhe bhul jaao.

I : sorry kaha na maine ..aur main aapko kaise bhul sakti hoon..aap husband hain mere.Leave all this aur aaiye lagaa deti hoon.

R : chalo..

Raman lies down on the bed and ishita puts balm.

R : aaa ...kitna dard ho raha hai..

I : maine dard diya hai..ehsaa hai mujhko uss dard ka ..

R : huh..dard dene ke baad haq jatati hai.

I : kuch kaha aapne ?

R : tum balm lagaao naa..main kya keh rahaa hoon..uss par dhyaan mat do..

I : ok..

Ishita's phone again rings :

I : are bala jiju ka call..main aati hoon..

Raman holds her hand and says : tum mujhe chhod kar jaa rahi ho ..

I : main aati hoon..naa.

R : nahi ..keh do use ki tum busy ho abhi to baad me baat karein.

I : to uske liye call to pick karna hoga naa..

Ruhi enters and sees them :

Ru : mumma maine khel liye hai..ab aap jo kahogi ..main wo karoongi..

R : beta come here ruhi..

She comes and asks : kya hua papa..??

R : beta bala chittiappa ko kaho ki ishi maa busy hain ..baad me baat karengi.

Ishita smiles at raman :

Ru : ok ..

I : Lo beta ..

Ruhi takes the mobile and says : hello..chittiappa..mumma busy hain aap unse baad me baat kar sakte ho..woh papa ko balm lagaa rahi hain naa isliye..

Bala : Ohh..sorry..beta..unhe disturb karne ke liye ..

Ru : its ok..

B : bye..

Ru : bye..

They end the call :

B : are waah..raman aur ishita to paas aa rahe hain..murugan aise hi inhe paas late rahiye..

Bhalla house :

Ru : papa mumma chittiappa ne sorry kaha hai aap dono ko disturb karne le liye..

R : its ok..

I : awww..soo sweet..

R : huh..

Ru : mamma main aati hoon..

I : ok..rooh..

I : continue karoon ya dard khatam ho gaya .??

R : lagaao naa..achcha lag raha hai..

I : ok..

They feel that they need each other a lot !!!!!!

Guys..how is it..??

Plzzz...plzzz..plzz..leave ur precious comments..it means for me a lot..!!😭

Next part may be continue according to the response.😃😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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i liked it a lot !!! plz continue !
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Lovely, do continue.
Loved: "R : lagaao naa..achcha lag raha hai.."

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Pls continue soon nice one age romance hai kya???
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Nice and cute.
Plzz continue
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cute wale interesting OS
i just love OS please continue writing them!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.Tum mujhe chode k jaogi,lagaona acha lag raha hai.aaaw!I loved these two dailogues very much.cute n possessive at the same time.
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Likko na.. acha lag raha hai
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Loved it...waiting to read the next part! so continue soon n thanks for the PM :)
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Ishita while putting balm on his back :

I : Raman ho gaya..ab aap thoda sa rest lijiye ..kuch lenge aap ? Raat ho rahi hai but abhi tak koi nahi aaye hain . Pata nahi itna late kyun ho raha hai ??

R : Aise kyun keh rahi ho..mere saath akele rehne me darr lag raha hai ??

I : Main kyun daroongi ..?? Aur aapna bewajah apne mind me kuch bhi soch rahe hain . Stress lene ki jagah rest lijiye ..Anyway kahiye naa kya khaayenge aap ?

R : Nahi ..main tumhaare haath ka kuch bhi nahi khaaunga..mujhe bas ek glass paani do.

I : Mat khaana..main paani laati hoon .

She goes and then bhalla family comes from the pammi's house :

Mrs.bhalla : Are ishita puttar tu yahan..??

I : woh mummy ji..main raman ke liye paani lene aayi thi . Aap log ke liye khaana nikaal doon

Mr. Bhalla : Nahi puttar hum log khaakar aaye hain..pammi zidd kar rahi thi ki khaakar jaaye.

To isliye hum khaakar aaye hain.

Mrs : haan..aur tum log bhi khaalo jaakar.Humlog sone jaa rahe hain .

I : ji .

Ishita comes in her bedroom with water :

I : Lijiye..

He drinks and says : mujhe bhook lagi hai..mujhe khaana do..

I : par aapko to mere haath ka nahi khaana hai naa ?

R : bahas band karo aur mujhe khaana laakar do .

I : Laati hoon. ( aakhir me raavan kumar raman kumar ban hi gaye ( thinks in her mind ) .

R : ab murmuring hi karti rahogi ki laayogi bhi...??

I : achcha laati hoon na..

She comes with dinner :

I : haan..lijiye..uthiye..aaram se..

R : aaa aaa...

I : ohhh..sorry..sorry..aaram se uthenge to dard nahi hoga warna control kariye.

R : helper hi dhang se help nahi karegi to khaak uthoonga achche se..

I : achcha haath do..

He gives his hand as forever :

I : khaana khilaa doon ki khud hi khaaloge...??

R : mere haathon ko bhi damage karne ka soch rahi ho kya..

I : aise kyun keh rahe hain aap ?

R : bcoz ..mere haath abhi salaamat hain..

I : to khaalo khud ..mujhe kya shauk hai tumhe khilaane ka..??

R : to puuch kyun rahi thi..??

I : huh..raavan kumar..!!!

R : Aur tum jhaansi ki raani..!

I : aap khaana khaao ..cold ho raha hai..main jaa rahi hoon ruhi ko homework complete karwaane ko . Itna late ho gaya hai..shayad mera bachcha so na gaya ho..aap ke chakkar me main apni bachchi par dhyaan hi nahi di payi.

R : sorry .

I : its ok..agar kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to pukaar lena.

R : ab jaaogi bhi ki baashan hi deti rahogi .

She goes to ruhi's room :

I : are mera rooh ..chalo beta homework complete karne ko..i m sorry beta..main aapko time hi nahi de paayi.

Ru : mumma ..maine homework complete kar liya..aap kitna thaki hui thi. to main romi chachu ke help se complete kar diya..

I : awww...meri rooh princess..mera kitna care karti hai..but beta aap ko samajh aaya na romi chachu ne jo samjhaaya aapko..??

Ru : yes mumma..lekin next time se aap mujhe teach karna ok..

I : ofcourse my princess..i m sorry..ki maine aapko time nahi diya..my ruhi promise ki main aapko help karoongi ..

Ru : its ok mumma..

I : chalo ab aap ..dinner kar lo ..phir ninni ninni bhi to karni hai..

Ru : ok..mumma..aur phir day after tomorrow ..summer vacation..

I : Yayyy...to this means ki meri rooh lots of masti karne waali hai..

Ru : yes..aur main aapke aur papa ke saath kahi ghumne bhi jaaungi..hai naa mumma ??

I : definitely hum log jaayenge..but meri rooh abhi dinner karne chalegi to..

Ru : to chalo mumma..

I : to chalo rooh princess..

Ruhi and ishita comes to their bedroom :

Ru : Mumma main papa ke haath se khaaun ?

I : Par beta papa abhi thake hue hain naa..to kal khaa lena..aur waise bhi meri rooh apne mumma ke haathon se nahi khaayegi kya..?

Ru : sorry mumma..main aap ke haathon se hi khaaungi.

R : nahi beta , main thaka hua nahi hun tumahari mumma paagal ho chuki hai isliye aisa keh rahi hai .

I : are ramannn...achcha khilaa do aur ruhi beta main aati hoon .

Ru and R : ok mumma..

Ishita smiles at both of them :

She comes back and sees ruhi going to sleep :

I : are wah...meri rooh ne dinner kar liya ...good girl...chalo jaldi se mumma apni princess ko nini nini kara degi.

Ru : jaldi aaona mumma..mujhe zoro ki nini aa rahi hai..aur mujhe lori bhi sunaa do.

I : aa rahi hoon beta..

They three lay down on the bed :

I : raman..neend nahi aa rahi kya..so jaao..good night..

R : mujhe bhi lori sunaa do ruhi ke saath saath.

I : oh..lagta hai meri rooh aur ravan kumar papa ..dono ko lori sunaani hogi tabhi ye dono ko nini aayegi .

R and Ru : haan mumma..

Ishita smiles and sings lori very beautifully , ruhi and her papa gets to asleep :

I : lagta hai so gaye yeh dono..

She kisses ruhi her and she sees her ravan kumar sleeping in a very cute way .

I : mere raavan kumar bhi kam nahi hai..sote hain to kitne masoom lagte hain.

She also kisses him near his hair so he cant realise that someone touched him .

Guys..thanxxx a lot for the valuable comments..again leave ur comments plzzz..plzzz...😭and forgive me for grammatical mistakes.

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