Zaya story (please read it)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone 😊! Mera naam Seetha hai. Since sometime I read ur opinions but not say anything.
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But today after watching zaya conscious voice I am totally sad 🥺 because it's sure that our zaya will not confess their feelings tomorrow. And I think that our Surraiya ji will say that Aaliya is characterless because she is so closed with zubair. In this time I hope that Zain will defend his wife . Then Bakbak will act strangely in front of Zubair, her attitude will be little awkward. Zubair will talk with Aaliya about Bakbak. Even if she likes him Bakbak will do everything for see Usmaan ji die. For that with some goons she will kidnap Farhaad's son. And ask Usmaan ji to come alone to get back his grandchild, but our zaya are not idiot to let him leave alone so they will follow him. Bakbak will shoot toward Usmaan ji instead Aaliya will receive the shoot. While Usmaan ji will hold her, Zain will run, catch her and say : not even dare to close your eyes, not let me alone MKB, I need you a lot. Aaliya will answer back : in order that you hate me more.. Zain will interrupt her : not hate but love you more, yes Aaliya I love you. Aaliya will faint...

I continue or not 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written !!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon
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hayee seetha, kitni pyaari kahani.. so sad yet so beautiful. As long as nothing happens to Aaliya, I'm good. That does not sound too bad.. as long as they're together... I have a Zaya fever right now and it does not help that there is no individual zaya scenes on youtube :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaliya faints. Zain shakes her:
Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya please open your eyes. See your Mamu ke beta is with you. Don't leave me. I need you a lot. And see it's our time for our kitkit.
Bakbak : bhabhi.
Usmaan ji: What are u doing here?
Bakbak: Woh I come here to save Farhad's bhai ka beta.
Farhad's son yells: Aaliya chachi look at me.
Usmaan ji crying: Come Zain for hospital.
Zain carries her until the car. He lies her head on his ham. He has a tear flop on her cheek. They entered in the hospital. Doctor wants to check up, her. But Zain doesn' t let her hand.
Doctor: Sir, go and wait outside. I have to start her treatment immediately.
Zain: I can't Doctor, she is my Aaliya. I am afraid to abandon her alone...
Usmaan ji catches his hand and pulls outside.
Zain: Dad, please I have to be with her.
Usmaan ji: Calm down Zain she will be fine very soon.
Bakbak in her mind: Zain tum kitne stupid hoo like your mother, who believed me too much. And Allah karei ke this Mamu ki Benji die soon.
Surraiya, Ayat, Rizwan, Farhad and Zubair come here.
Suraaiya: Usmaan ji, app tikk naa?
Usmaan ji: Ji me tikko, but my aaliya is shot. How I can announce this incident to my sister ?
Surraiya : Don' t worry hamari aaliya ko kuch nai hoga, because she is my daughter-in-law.
Ayat cries on Rizwan's shoulder:
I want meri appi...
Rizwan : Ayat don't cry hamari Aliya bhabhi will get well soon.
Ayat: Jiggu, Why are you so distanced to her?
Zain approaches her: No Ayat woh me...
Ayat : Don't lie to me, I saw your relation until when I lived here. And app dono are so distanced. And I saw very well you are jealous of Zubair. If you hate her so much, please give her divorce.
Zubair: She's right Zain, don't play with her emotions she doesn't deserve it.
Zain: it's your fault Zubair, why you came here? Do you love her?
Zubair angry: shut up, Zain, I am just her best friend, yes I have concern on her but never in wrong way. How you think that I love her while I called Ayat my sister. I will tell your truth today.
Zain: First answer why she told you that our shaadi is a crap?
Zubair: Because you hate this shaadi and her, since the first day that she entered in Barkat Villa you said this to her and repeat this sentence everytime. During your first night, you challenged her that you do everything for that she leaves this house. You treated her badly, you accused her that she is a thief, after your date you insult her but before that you praised her. While it's your sister who obliged you for a date. She never asked you. In front of her you told that you love Alia Bhatt. Maybe I forgot a lot of things but she is always with you, even if you don't love her.
Zain: Who said that?
Zubair: What? So you love Aliya?
Zain: It's not your business, if I love her or not.
Zubair: It's your shit ego who hurt her a lot.
Doctor arrived: M. Abdullah your bahu is conscious but not out of a danger. Before the operation she wants to speak with everyone. So go but careful.
Aaliya: Ayat you are brilliant love writer so I am not joking if you love Rizwan marry him. He is a nice guy. And he will keep you happy.
Ayat: please appi not worry about this now...
Aliya: No, Aliya I have to tell you that, if after this operation I don't open my eyes. Promise you will listen your heart and marry Rizwan, mere liye.
Ayat swears and leaves the room crying.
Aliya: Rizwan, I don't know if I am right but not abandon my sister after my death...
Rizwan: Please bhabhi don't say that, everyone needs you a lot. You can't do this to Ayat. See I will pray for you and Allah will let see our shaadi.
He joins Ayat and hugs her tightly.
Aliya: Zuboo I dream or are you cried?
Zubair: pagal how you can think to go without share your feelings with the right person.
Aliya: Leave it, if you like Barkat accept her.
Zubair: stop it, aloo. And waisebe if you leave you haven't right to talk about that.
He steps out of the room.
Barkat sits beside Aliya: Bhabhi app ko kuch nei hoga. I pray for you, Allah listen me.
Aliya: Zubair's mom is so sweet. So go to her and ask her benediction. If she likes you, Zubair will marry you.
Barkat runs outside and grabs on Zubair's shoulder.
Surraiya: Beta I am sorry, theses days I didn't speak with you. But I felt bad for Barkat.
Aliya: Forget it mami, but I have request for you.
Surraiya: Just say it to me.
Aliya: If I die today, Zain have to marry another girl please. And I know that you never like until Barkat reunification. But it's not your fault. Thank u mami for support my presence.
Surraiya has tears: I am sorry, Aliya,
Aliya : no kuy baath nei mami. Be happy and prepare their wedding, just be with Ayat for her shaadi it's mere last wish.
She goes out.
Usmaan ji: Or me suicide karlo.
Aliya: Mamu don't say that.
Usmaan ji: Please don't abandon me. I need your friendship to live. I can't imagine a life without you. Allah ke kasam, if you quit me, I will never be happy or pray Allah again.
He exits while Aliya shouts his name. Zain comes close to her:
What are u think about yourself?
Aliya: Woh I know u hate me.
Zain: really? Do you live in my heart?
Aliya: Means
Zain: Means that if you want to know the truth you have to hear my fellings toward u after the operation, MKB. Or else?
Aliya: Kya?
Zain: If something happen to u I will follow you, it's mere waada.
He comes out.
Doctor starts the operation. Surraiya and Barkat go to a mosque. Two hours after, Doctor exits for operation theater and announce that Aliya is fine. In one hour you can meet her.
Aliya's parents come. Her mother hugs Zain.
Her mother: Nothing will happen mere bacchi ko. She is strong.
Zain: I want Aliya puppi. I would like to share my life with her.
Her mother: Not panic she will be with you until your 100th wedding anniversary.
Zain laughs.
Nurse: Zain your wife want to see you first.
He walks toward her. She looks at him.
Aliya: Tell me now about you heart, even if I knew.
Zain: You knew what, aliya?
Aliya: That you hate me and you love Alia bhatt.
Zain: Ya, sure I love Alia... but more meri Aliya Zain Usmaan Abdhullah se.
She has tears.
Aliya: Kya tum mudjse pyaar karti hoo?
Zain: Obviously, I love you. And what about you?
Aliya: Woh me...
Zain: I understood that you love Zubair.
Aliya: idiot if I love him why I wore Burka to meet u. why I was so jealous that you meet Aliya Bhatt?
Zain: How I can know about your feelings?
Aliya: tum mere pyaar hoo because I can't live without you Zain.
She opens her arms for a hug. He grabs her and kisses on her forehead.
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Originally posted by: rita92

Aaliya faints. Zain shakes her:
Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya, Aaliya please open your eyes. See your Mamu ke beta is with you. Don't leave me. I need you a lot. And see it's our time for our kitkit.
Bakbak : bhabhi.
Usmaan ji: What are u doing here?
Bakbak: Woh I come here to save Farhad's bhai ka beta.
Farhad's son yells: Aaliya chachi look at me.
Usmaan ji crying: Come Zain for hospital.
Zain carries her until the car. He lies her head on his ham. He has a tear flop on her cheek. They entered in the hospital. Doctor wants to check up, her. But Zain doesn' t let her hand.
Doctor: Sir, go and wait outside. I have to start her treatment immediately.
Zain: I can't Doctor, she is my Aaliya. I am afraid to abandon her alone...
Usmaan ji catches his hand and pulls outside.
Zain: Dad, please I have to be with her.
Usmaan ji: Calm down Zain she will be fine very soon.
Bakbak in her mind: Zain tum kitne stupid hoo like your mother, who believed me too much. And Allah karei ke this Mamu ki Benji die soon.
Surraiya, Ayat, Rizwan, Farhad and Zubair come here.
Suraaiya: Usmaan ji, app tikk naa?
Usmaan ji: Ji me tikko, but my aaliya is shot. How I can announce this incident to my sister ?
Surraiya : Don' t worry hamari aaliya ko kuch nai hoga, because she is my daughter-in-law.
Ayat cries on Rizwan's shoulder:
I want meri appi...
Rizwan : Ayat don't cry hamari Aliya bhabhi will get well soon.
Ayat: Jiggu, Why are you so distanced to her?
Zain approaches her: No Ayat woh me...
Ayat : Don't lie to me, I saw your relation until when I lived here. And app dono are so distanced. And I saw very well you are jealous of Zubair. If you hate her so much, please give her divorce.
Zubair: She's right Zain, don't play with her emotions she doesn't deserve it.
Zain: it's your fault Zubair, why you came here? Do you love her?
Zubair angry: shut up, Zain, I am just her best friend, yes I have concern on her but never in wrong way. How you think that I love her while I called Ayat my sister. I will tell your truth today.
Zain: First answer why she told you that our shaadi is a crap?
Zubair: Because you hate this shaadi and her, since the first day that she entered in Barkat Villa you said this to her and repeat this sentence everytime. During your first night, you challenged her that you do everything for that she leaves this house. You treated her badly, you accused her that she is a thief, after your date you insult her but before that you praised her. While it's your sister who obliged you for a date. She never asked you. In front of her you told that you love Alia Bhatt. Maybe I forgot a lot of things but she is always with you, even if you don't love her.
Zain: Who said that?
Zubair: What? So you love Aliya?
Zain: It's not your business, if I love her or not.
Zubair: It's your shit ego who hurt her a lot.
Doctor arrived: M. Abdullah your bahu is conscious but not out of a danger. Before the operation she wants to speak with everyone. So go but careful.
Aaliya: Ayat you are brilliant love writer so I am not joking if you love Rizwan marry him. He is a nice guy. And he will keep you happy.
Ayat: please appi not worry about this now...
Aliya: No, Aliya I have to tell you that, if after this operation I don't open my eyes. Promise you will listen your heart and marry Rizwan, mere liye.
Ayat swears and leaves the room crying.
Aliya: Rizwan, I don't know if I am right but not abandon my sister after my death...
Rizwan: Please bhabhi don't say that, everyone needs you a lot. You can't do this to Ayat. See I will pray for you and Allah will let see our shaadi.
He joins Ayat and hugs her tightly.
Aliya: Zuboo I dream or are you cried?
Zubair: pagal how you can think to go without share your feelings with the right person.
Aliya: Leave it, if you like Barkat accept her.
Zubair: stop it, aloo. And waisebe if you leave you haven't right to talk about that.
He steps out of the room.
Barkat sits beside Aliya: Bhabhi app ko kuch nei hoga. I pray for you, Allah listen me.
Aliya: Zubair's mom is so sweet. So go to her and ask her benediction. If she likes you, Zubair will marry you.
Barkat runs outside and grabs on Zubair's shoulder.
Surraiya: Beta I am sorry, theses days I didn't speak with you. But I felt bad for Barkat.
Aliya: Forget it mami, but I have request for you.
Surraiya: Just say it to me.
Aliya: If I die today, Zain have to marry another girl please. And I know that you never like until Barkat reunification. But it's not your fault. Thank u mami for support my presence.
Surraiya has tears: I am sorry, Aliya,
Aliya : no kuy baath nei mami. Be happy and prepare their wedding, just be with Ayat for her shaadi it's mere last wish.
She goes out.
Usmaan ji: Or me suicide karlo.
Aliya: Mamu don't say that.
Usmaan ji: Please don't abandon me. I need your friendship to live. I can't imagine a life without you. Allah ke kasam, if you quit me, I will never be happy or pray Allah again.
He exits while Aliya shouts his name. Zain comes close to her:
What are u think about yourself?
Aliya: Woh I know u hate me.
Zain: really? Do you live in my heart?
Aliya: Means
Zain: Means that if you want to know the truth you have to hear my fellings toward u after the operation, MKB. Or else?
Aliya: Kya?
Zain: If something happen to u I will follow you, it's mere waada.
He comes out.
Doctor starts the operation. Surraiya and Barkat go to a mosque. Two hours after, Doctor exits for operation theater and announce that Aliya is fine. In one hour you can meet her.
Aliya's parents come. Her mother hugs Zain.
Her mother: Nothing will happen mere bacchi ko. She is strong.
Zain: I want Aliya puppi. I would like to share my life with her.
Her mother: Not panic she will be with you until your 100th wedding anniversary.
Zain laughs.
Nurse: Zain your wife want to see you first.
He walks toward her. She looks at him.
Aliya: Tell me now about you heart, even if I knew.
Zain: You knew what, aliya?
Aliya: That you hate me and you love Alia bhatt.
Zain: Ya, sure I love Alia... but more meri Aliya Zain Usmaan Abdhullah se.
She has tears.
Aliya: Kya tum mudjse pyaar karti hoo?
Zain: Obviously, I love you. And what about you?
Aliya: Woh me...
Zain: I understood that you love Zubair.
Aliya: idiot if I love him why I wore Burka to meet u. why I was so jealous that you meet Aliya Bhatt?
Zain: How I can know about your feelings?
Aliya: tum mere pyaar hoo because I can't live without you Zain.
She opens her arms for a hug. He grabs her and kisses on her forehead.


Wow ur Zaya story is too good I wanna see it happening!

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