Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Res ... Will be back after work ... 😃 Love our distracted man ...

Edited by Ipoona - 12 years ago

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AKHUSHI

@AKHUSHI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Only one thing in mind.. Who is the person wants to talk to Arnav. Is it dhruv?

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InspiredSoul

@InspiredSoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Note No.2 😃

Hope you read the Part 1 on page No.10!

Too short? Too dry? Too much description? Let me know, I am always open to feedback!

I originally planned a decent sized Part 1 for a Sunday update. But due to long weekend vacation plans, had to do a smaller part so I don't keep you all waiting!

A much longer Part 2 will be posted midweek to compensate! 😊

For all my dear readers, Thank you, for the overwhelming, positive response! 🤗

I haven't finished responding to all the lovely comments - I will catch up after the weekend ...

Please do check my index on Page 1 - I will always keep it updated with the links whenever I post.

- IS

Edited by InspiredSoul - 12 years ago

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Dadi and Shyam are together in this.. Itna toh clear hai.. But Arnav was waiting for Aman then where did dhruv come from.. Khushi is cute..

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SarunNArshi

@SarunNArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Sure😊DO POST ur Part 2 on Wednesday without fail.

pLLLZzZ😳

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Awesome update!
but short 😭
anyway *wipes away tears* so back to the story
I love the mysteriousness of this story
in the last update we found out that Akash was the guy on the bed not Arnav. I love the way you add more suspense to the chapter in the end giving us a new twist, a new character, or a shock
What happened to Akash is he sick or did he get kidnapped?
So Akash wants to call Arnav... okay... but why doesn't he want Dadi to know? Now lets see how Khushi helps Akash contact Arnav without letting Dadi know
Who is the new guy Dhruv? does he have anything involved with Akash?
Oh man! There are so many questions that are floating around in my brain.
Lots lots of suspense here!
I loved the update
Can't wait for the next update!
Thanks for the PM!
P.S If this is a OS can you please make it a bit longer *pweez*
No pressure